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Punch Drunk Love by Karen Noelle    (Reviews - 23)

It started with a punch.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 4591 | Read count: 7167 | Published: Jan 29, 2005 | Updated: Jun 11, 2007
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Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Jun 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Drunk

Hey, I enjoyed your story. Very promising plot, keep the updates going alright!

Crossing into Chaos by Emeral_eyes    (Reviews - 512)

*Completely AU* In a world where Voldemort was never defeated, only a few things matter: pureblood, money and power. All that Ginny Weasley wanted was to survive her 7 years at Hogwarts, a school where the children of the richest and most powerful wizards dominate over others. Denying her natural instincts, she managed to make it into her 6th year without offending any of the cruel and powerful Slytherins - especially that horrible Draco Malfoy. Until one day, she crosses a line, and her peaceful existence is shattered forever. A story filled with adolescent drama, clash of the classes, angst, jealousy, ridiculous pride and love triangles (and squares).
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Blood
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 20 | Word count: 208337 | Read count: 314719 | Published: Apr 28, 2006 | Updated: Nov 18, 2012
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Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Sep 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Little Red Vixen

EVIL CLIFFIE!!!!!!!!!

P.S. Great chapter, though!

Hesperides' Apple by ogygiasylph    (Reviews - 871)

When Ginny Weasley becomes Draco Malfoy's wife, he suspects neither her true identity nor her dangerous motives. But when all Hell breaks lose and their relationship takes unexpected turns, there is more at stake than preserving their marriage--namely, preserving their lives.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Narcissa Malfoy, Neville Longbottom, Other Characters
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Blood, Character Death, Graphic Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 33 | Word count: 166850 | Read count: 239443 | Published: Jun 29, 2006 | Updated: Sep 17, 2009
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Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Sep 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 16: 15. Christmas secrets

Hi, I first read your story on fictionalley, but since switched here as the updates were more recent.

This story is perhaps the best I've read in a long time. I especially loved the way you kept Draco in character. That's what I feel. He's snobbish, arrogant, aristocratic, every bit the prick we learn of him in JK Rowling's series.

I'm really curious to know how he's going to make Ginevra pay for her deeds (or misdeeds), as it would be doubly hard to do so when she's pregnant. Well, he can't harm her, he need to have his heir., but he couldn't possibly let her off scott-free, so...

On a slightly different note, I admire your choice of names for the original characters. Haha, they sound pure-blooded-ish enough.

That and as the story climaxes, I look forward to reading your next chapter, soon! :D

Love,
Abby

Author's Response: Apparently FA now allows some authors to update immediately, but I got a late start there, and have yet to catch up with the chapters, so switching to D&G.com was definitely a good idea :) I\'m happy to see you\'re enjoying the story. So far, he isn\'t bent on getting revenge on Ginny--he just wants to know who she is and, consequently, why she\'s been trying to backstab him. The baby is a way to get her to reveal her true identity through a series of mistakes. What he will do when he finds out who she is, well... That\'s another story. Not an actual other one, I just mean he\'ll be thinking differently. Thanks a lot for reviewing and following this story so assiduously!

Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Sep 24, 2006 Title: Chapter 17: 16. A happy couple

Ah, an update finally! The two-week long wait was well, long enough (:

Brilliant chapter, and my, I can't believe he hasn't yet figure out who Ginevra is. But he's getting closer eh, and I shudder at the thought. *smirks* I definitely hope that he wouldn't hate her for her little plottings, because I believe she very much cares for him too!

Thank you for writing! It made my day and I hope to read the next chapter real, real, soon (:

Author's Response: I\'m really sorry for the delay. Unfortunately I can\'t promise I\'ll keep up with my usual \"one week, one chapter\" policy :/ Well, he DOES think her dead along with the other Weasleys; his wife is blonde, refined, and went to Durmstrang; it\'s a hard realization to make on your own. Thanks a lot for reviewing!

Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Oct 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 18: 17. The Weasley lineage

Ah yes yes an update! Nicely built-up tension even though there is a lack of D/G interaction!

But we all know that these interactions are soon to arrive, though not particularly in a pretty way eh.

Will the long-awaited revelation finally come next chapter? I'll be waiting!

Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Oct 14, 2006 Title: Chapter 19: 18. Truth be told

dracoandginnyshouldneverbetogether.com?You're kidding, right? :D

My goodness that was plain evil on Draco's part, though I'm absolutely relieved he did not abuse her, physically.

I'm so glad that this chapter came after 17 others. Will be checking back for more!

Author's Response: Hum yeah I\'m kidding :) Don\'t worry, I\'m not into the \"Draco abuses Ginny physically\" scene. he just doesn\'t seem like that type of guy to me... and I\'m happy you\'re enjoying this!

Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Nov 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 20: 19. And baby makes... three?

I doubt we'll be getting our piece of D/G fluff, not for now, at least. On another note, that was a brilliant way to monitor the growth of the baby! (or rather, babies)

Another beautifully put up chapter! I can barely wait for the next one!

Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Dec 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 21: 20. The confidant

Gosh, I hope he's not... sleeping with those women! That mean pig! Grrr I'm so frustrated now! :D

Make him pay back ten times, Ginny!

The chapter was well worth the wait, good job, and thank you!

Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Jan 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 22: 21. Flight

Make love, not war! Yet, I'm enjoying every bit of the tension between our two most favorite people in the world. They have to earn it if they want to be together.

Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Jan 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 23: 22. Hunting a woman

Great chapter, though I'm uncomfortable at the possibility of a Dean/Ginny relationship in the story. Still, that's what brings on the suspense and expectation!

Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Feb 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 24: 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy

Things are not looking well for Ginny, but I'm glad she's back in his arms.

Brilliant, as always.

Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: May 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity

Hello! May I tell you how much I've enjoyed this chapter along with all the rest? I'm relieved that there is some sort of apprehension on Ginny's part. And now all I have is to wait for the next chapter!

P.S Really appreciated that you set up a blog for the story.

Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Aug 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 30: 29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort

The Cyrus/Serafina thing left me oddly comforted... Hmm...

Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Feb 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: 29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort

You're not abandoning this piece of fiction, are you?

Update soon! (: Or just holler to let us know you're out there!

Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Aug 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: 30. Malfoy Manor

Aw, sweet. Are we going to read about their vacation? I hate that this fic is coming to an end soon ):

Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Sep 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue

I loved the ending. The epilogue was nicely done and wrapped up the story perfectly. If only there was a sequel, but I suppose it's good to leave certain things to the imaginative mind! (Nausicaa and Suleiman, anybody?)

Feel a slight sense of loss now that Hesperides' Apple is completed because I've been keeping up with this story for a whopping 3 years! Nevertheless, I look forward to reading more of your newer fanfics. I am confident wouldn't disappoint.

All the best in fandom and real life!

Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Jul 23, 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity

Wow it’s been 15 years since this was first published yet this remains the single most memorable piece of fan fiction I’ve ever read, across all the fandoms I’ve ever participated in. I still revisit the chapters every now and then, and never seem to get sick of them. I hope you’ve been well! :)

Not Quite Fate by Hearts Cadence    (Reviews - 933)

*COMPLETE* Destiny knew better than to bring these two together. One man, determined to draw back an errant Malfoy, is not so wise, and Ginny soon finds herself caught up in events that are not quite Fate.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley, Severus Snape
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Action, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 37 | Word count: 222518 | Read count: 386889 | Published: Jul 13, 2006 | Updated: Aug 04, 2007
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Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Aug 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue

I haven't been leaving reviews *guilty* but your story was definitely one of my favourites. I particularly loved your characterization of Draco. The epilogue was fantastic, loved the scene where Ginny announced her pregnancy to Draco.

Yep, just... THANK YOU!

Kissing the Wrong Ginny. by CCC    (Reviews - 294)

Draco and Pansy like to play games. What happens when a Polyjuice Plan goes wrong?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 11 | Word count: 33216 | Read count: 26912 | Published: Jul 27, 2006 | Updated: Jan 02, 2007
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Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Dec 22, 2006 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oooh, for once Draco's actually doing something right!

Red by goddess_of_ether    (Reviews - 128)

When Ginny Weasley made her fashion empire, she and Draco Malfoy broke up under less-than-favorable conditions (a flying cup of hot tea was involved). Now, he's worming his way back into her life and her business, and he's determined to win her heart. Ginny, however, is not risking it again after he broke it once before . . . But when Narcissa Malfoy gets personally involved and decides that a close working relationship for a charity benefit is the best way to get them back together, sparks fly, not all of them potentially lethal.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 5 | Word count: 9348 | Read count: 4988 | Published: Oct 09, 2006 | Updated: Jan 22, 2007
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Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Jan 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: How Not to Spend a Sunday Afternoon

Such a light-hearted read! I'm adding it to my list of favourites! Hoping to see the next chapter up soon! :DDD

Author's Response: That\'s what I\'m aiming for: so many stories (fantastic ones) on this site was somewhat angsty . . . I thought maybe some lightening was in order!

10 Inevitable Draco/Ginny Clichés by maybeseptemberxx    (Reviews - 115)

D/G cliche love.
Category: Essays
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1112 | Read count: 7075 | Published: May 11, 2007 | Updated: May 11, 2007
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Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: May 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Way too true! : D

The Art of Seduction by ExquisiteBeauty    (Reviews - 31)

When Ginny isn't at St. Mungos, she's out hunting wealthy, single wizards... her favorite pastime. However, when one silver-eyed wizard refuses to give in to her irresistible charms (and retaliates with charms of his own), she does everything she can to ensue that she wins the game.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Luna Lovegood, Other Characters
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1967 | Read count: 964 | Published: Jul 05, 2007 | Updated: Jul 06, 2007
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Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Jul 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Meet David Brink

I have this thing for High Society!Ginny, and I'm glad your story came along. Superbly done job for the first chapter! Hope to read the next chapter soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! There arent that many High Society! Ginnys out there, as shes supposed to be a true Weasley, who doesnt care about money!

Ten Years Later, or Pud's Rewrite of the DH Epilogue by Rainpuddle    (Reviews - 191)

*DH SPOILERS* Consider yourself warned.

This is my attempt to correct some of the wrongs...
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1128 | Read count: 11122 | Published: Jul 23, 2007 | Updated: Jul 23, 2007
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Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Jul 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I don't think I quite mind the DH epilogue anymore. Not when it prompted you to write such an amazing ficlet like this : D

PS. Love the name Cassiopeia!

Author's Response: Awwah, thank you. Cassiopeia fits into the Black family naming scheme of stars and constellations :)

An Unhealthy Infatuation with Snarky Men by CCC    (Reviews - 343)

Ginny finds that she is only attracted to men she can argue with.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 13 | Word count: 21524 | Read count: 72060 | Published: Aug 18, 2007 | Updated: Feb 02, 2010
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Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Aug 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The Snape/Ginny business had me momentarily stunned, but I can tell that this story has great potential! Amazing job, and looking forward to your next update!

Author's Response: Sorry to stun you. I thought it would be funny, plus I admit a small crush on the actor who played Snape. I love his voice.

Reviewer: citrusabby Signed
Date: Aug 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you. : )