Sex and men are never easy...Category: Long and Completed
Only thing I have to really comment on is that she does not use the wished upon word “cunt” much at all, like your friend wanted. Mostly she seems to favor fuck. Lol. Pretty good story overall! Even wanted to continue to see the schools reaction and how they do with social peers pressure. Good job!
2nd Place at Pud's D/G Fic Contest! Five years ago, Draco Malfoy was offered sanctuary by his mother’s cousins in India. Now, with the death of his father, the Malfoys need an heir, and Narcissa sets out to find her son a wife through the aid of the far-seeing, fortune-telling Morcant sisters, who decide upon none other than Ginny Weasley. Seeing this offer as a means of escaping the horrible war that has descended upon England, Ginny accepts their proposition, and finds herself in a foreign land engaged to a Draco Malfoy who seems to be a strange mix of the old and the new.Category: Long and Completed
Overall very good story. The only hole in the plot is that you mention Ginny’s scar on her back, specifically give by Lucius Malfoy. I think with it being mentioned, a couple times, that there should of been a point in the plot where Draco sees this scar and they talk about it, and about his father. Otherwise it seems strange that it’s mentioned specifically that Lucius gave it to her, and that at a point when she is laying to bask in the sun with Draco, she hides a grimace for the pain of the scar. Just my opinion! Overall I loved the storyline and your writing skills are superb!