Sparks fly and glasses shatter when two elite Aurors, Ginny Weasley and Draco Malfoy, are assigned to pose as Ashton and Bryhoney Seaton, a newly married couple, to catch the Death Eaters roaming free even twelve years after Voldemort was defeated. Surely they would catch the Death Eaters, only if they could remove their wands from each others' throats. They would kill each other, even if they kept alone with each other for more than an hour...or so they claimed.Category: Works in Progress
this is looking really good. I've only got two mini things.
the sentence when ginny steps out of neville's office really needs to have either no 'As' at the beginning or 'she was' both without the comma to scan fluently
"As Ginny strolled back out of Neville's office whistling to herself and clutching the files in her arms *she was* acutely aware that she was the focus of the attention of the office"
the other is even smaller- must you use 'possess' when talking about a wife and child? perhaps a slightly less patriarchal 'have'would be a neutral alternative?
Author's Response: Thanks that you like it. and regarding the points..thanks so much for pointing them out. While writing them and reading them myself, I confess that \"possess\" didn\'t seem somewhat wrong to me, but when you pointed it out to me -Yes, then I realises that it seemed harsh, patriarchal. I\'ll try and keep that in mind. And then that of *she was*, I think if it was \"she became\" in its place, it would have been exactly correct, otherwise the sentence is in perfect sense... Thanks still for bringing them to my notice -these things do help in the long run.
Ginny Weasley is absolutely sure that Draco Malfoy is hatching a particularly evil plot as junior head of the Ministry Department of Culture, and that it definitely involves puppy-strangling, bribing officials, and consistently wearing trousers tailored very tight in back. Or at least it's a theory that makes sense when she's been surviving on two hours of sleep a night for far too long, and Draco keeps vetoing her sketches for the new marble statues at the Ministry fountain. But then Luna Lovegood gives her a potion with some very curious effects, and Ginny finds that she just may have to revise her opinions about those evil trousers...Category: Works in Progress
congratulations!
and the story is really really good too!
gah! cliff hanger!!! I love your characterisation in this story and the way you write it is very entertaining but that! that was just MEAN!
All Ginny wants is to get the upper hand just once with drool-worthy hunk of man candy and callous playboy Draco Malfoy before he moves on to his next careless conquest. So how did this simple plan lead to time travel, nefarious plots involving the most infamous whorehouse in the wizarding world, and the teenaged Draco’s achingly sweet, chocolate-flavored kisses? Even Draco Malfoy was innocent once, as Ginny learns all too well…Category: Long and Completed
Chapter ONE HUNDRED EIGHTEEN Quote of the Day:
THE LAST CHAPTER
The minutes ticked by, long enough for Ginny to know that against all reason, all common sense, she still wanted impossible things from him. But she would leave. Even after today, even when her body ached from him and for him, when she could feel that he had begun to shape her to him, she would turn around and leave him. I will, I will, she thought.
“You don’t understand,” said Draco.
“Oh?” Ginny said stiffly. “At least he hadn’t touched her, she thought. She would not be able to find the strength to pull herself away from him, and she knew it.
gah! waiting between chapters is just getting more and more difficult! I have no idea how you write such detailed story lines but they are *brilliant*
Author's Response: Thanks! Well, there's lots more coming up... and I'll try to get the new chapters out as soon as possible. :)
*COMPLETE* Ginny has a diary. Again! And it talks back! Although, this time it's not evil. Probably. But what if the wizard on the other side of the ink and paper is? Mostly though, this story is about not judging the book by it's covers.Category: Long and Completed
Lightish stuff, some serious themes but written simply for enjoyment. Betaed by Ness Frost and marinka. My sister also helped. :) Thank you!
Really good! It just kept me up another hour (2am-eep) This is a great little universe you've created!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! :)