I just wanted to let you know, I think the way you wrote Narcissa was absolutely amazing. I think she is a really hard character to write; most authors go to one extreme or the other, making her too "good" or too cold. In my opinion, you wrote her character just about perfect.

As for the rest of the story, I really did enjoy it, but I got slightly lost during parts. I know you mentioned somewhere that you usually don't do plot, so for that, I think you did excellent; however, I would love to see you go back sometime and expand on some of the other ideas you have in the story. There are so many more things that I think would have great potential.

Once again, don't get me wrong! I loved the story, and I think you are a brilliant writer, but I'm sure everyone has something they can improve on in their writing... even J.K. Rowling! lol.

Author's Response: Thank Anise for the wonderful beta. Narcissa was so confusing, I needed help to really nail her down. :) I had a vague idea how the story would go, but since I didn't plot it out first, it got a bit tangly. Maybe I'll go back at some point, but I'm not sure. I'm glad you've liked it overall.