What really happened in the DH Epilogue of Doom. Poor, poor Harry, so very clueless...Category: Works in Progress
Chapter SIXTY-NINE quote of the day:
Ginny scowled at him. “You don’t know me very well.”
Draco shook his head, his eyes more sorrowful than ever. “No. I don’t. Eternity wouldn’t be long enough for that.”
“Why do I feel as if we’ve suddenly wandered into the set of a men’s cologne commercial?” complained Lucifer.
“Can’t you keep your damn mouth shut, Lucifer?” spat Draco.
“Please… really… I don’t think you should talk to him that way,” whispered Ginny.
Omg. That was wonderful! I keep thinking that Ginny is going to go with Harry because of the epilogue. Is it epilogue compliant? I hope not bc DG belong together forever! I love them so much!
I don't know if I just haven't read this in a while, but I feel like it has gotten so much darker.
Favorite lines:
Slowly, they both began to put the pieces of themselves together.
“Oh, don’t start that Sinister Slytherin Prince of Darkness act with me today, Draco. It was loads of fun last week, and I wouldn’t mind getting the manacles out again at some point..."
Wonderful, as usual!!!
Excellent! I love Draco so much! Um...any chance you're going to do some outtakes?
Oh dear. Why must everything always get screwed up! There are so many secrets in this and I can't wait to find out what they are. I'm sure you'll explain everything in your own time but until then UPDATE SOON PLEASE! hehe
AH! I knew it! Because the back ward is hell on earth! Yay me! haha. Lovely chapter, by the way. I absolutely adored George's dream about Fred and I'm so glad that he found peace...and that he's happy with Blaise. Dunno if I've commented on this yet, but not a pairing I would have expected. Oh goodness, I can't wait for the next chapter!! (I mean, I will, obviously, but I'm super excited for it!)
But she does love him! She has to love him! Argh! But you said this definitely wasn't the end...you said there were still about five chapters left...so I'm clinging to my hope of a happy ending! You better come through for me (please?!)!!
Thank goodness! I have to admit that I was kinda annoyed with Ginny for a while now because she wasn't really standing up for herself. But now...well, now I'm super happy! She's finally going to act and do things for herself and I'm so excited! Wonderful chapter. I loved the interaction between the two Ginnys, haha. Can't wait for an update!!!
Wow. Although I must admit as soon as I saw the connection with the Blacks, I knew it was going to be Narcissa. Hehe. Hmm...the parallels between Ginny and Molly are striking. It's interesting how Molly insisted on following the path she saw before her (aka marrying Arthur) and Ginny found a different path (aka not marrying Harry and marrying Draco instead). And I adore the comparison between Arthur and Ginny and the whole "hopeless love" thing. Truly fantastic. I'm glad she's learning these new things about her parents. Hopefully learning about their past will help her move forward.
Kudos on a great chapter!
Okay, I really love Arthur right now. He's so supportive of Ginny's love of Draco and I just know (or really, I hope) that this is exactly what Ginny needs right now! She knows that she lovED Draco, but hopefully now she'll see that she still lovES Draco and then she can save him and then they can live happily ever after the end!!! Haha, okay, so maybe that was oversimplifying a bit, but you get the idea. Lovely chapter and I can't wait for more!!
I LOVE GEORGE!!! He is so perfect and adorable and amazing and the best big brother ever!!! *sigh* Anywho, lovely chapter. I absolutely adored the description of Draco, especially the one of his voice. And I'm so glad that Ginny isn't lettig Draco completely off the hook. They are meant to be together, but he has to change just a little bit and treat her better. Thanks for the quick update!
Eek! I can't believe I'm four chapters behind!! Where have I been? haha...anyway, one to the review (and then the next chapter of course!)
Wonderful job. Of course Ginny and Draco are not like any other mortal/demon relationship! They are special and wonderful and if anyone can make it work, they can. And if the Malfoys have a curse to break, then Ginny will break it (or Ginny and Draco will break. Since I have absolutely no idea what the curse actually is....ooh, does it have something to do with the Malfoys being demons??) But I digress. I believe I was showering you with praise? Moving on...
Ron was amazing. He is too funny and I absolutely love that he is being so helpful to Ginny! Lovely work!
I must say, it's rather a relief to be able to go straight on to the next chapter! No cliffhangers for me! Haha
Excellent job. I'm so glad that Ginny and Harry finally had a real conversation. I've always felt that it was never quite over between them, that they were both just running away from what needed to happen. Now I feel like they've both gotten closure.
Also, those cherubs are damn funny. So cute and mischievous!! Ah, lovely work. Can't wait to see what happens next! (And really, I don't have to, haha)
Aaaahhhhh!!! Seriously? SERIOUSLY?!
Oh. My. God. I cannot believe that that is how you're ending the chapter. It's just mean. ;)
Truly amazing. I'll just assume that you'll explain why Draco can see and talk to Ginny later, shall I? Although I think it either has something to do with him being a demon, or that they have a serious love connection, even though nineteen year old Draco's a bit of an ass. I think that this has always happened though, if that makes any sense. By trying to change the future, Ginny's only going to make the past she remembers actually come true and all that. Dunno if that makes any sense though because it's not a Time Turner, it's a memory. But you can't change a memory so it must have happened, right? Ah, so confusing! But so wonderful! Please update soon and I promise not to get four chapters behind again!!
He's like an evil genie!!! And you said that he hasn't been mentioned or anything before, right???
Part of me really wants to smack Ginny for making a deal with the Devil (I mean, really! Who has ever made a deal with the Devil and had it NOT end poorly, hmm?) but then the other part of me is truly astounded and awed by her dedication to saving Draco. Lovely work!
Why do I have a feeling that it's going to get worse before it gets better?!
I must confess that I'm torn. I can't decide if Ginny always interacted with Draco so that she's not really changing the past, or if she is changing the past. AND THEN, I can't decide if I want her to change the past or not. Oh goodness! Well, I suppose I'll just have to trust you, right? Haha
How do you do it? Seriously, each chapter ups the tension and excitement and amazingness! Fabulous job!! I love that as Ginny tells Draco about the man he will become, she remembers all his good qualities and all the things she loves. They are so meant to be!!!
Oh my God! Ah!!!! I just...I don't even know what to say. She will have that again, right? Right?!
Wow. I think Draco has grown up! He's already acting more mature and responsible. Excellent chapter and I can't wait for the next one!! Oh, and I actually laughed out loud when Narcissa thought Draco was crazy. Hahaha
Wow. So much is happening, I dunno if I can keep it all straight! Why do I have the feeling that something completely awful is about to happen?? haha
I love all the back story on Draco's life. It's really cool!! Excellent chapter!