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I'm a high school student from Virginia. I'm in AP English Lang/Comp, and I love to read (everything) and write (essays and poetry more than stories, unfortunately).
Reviews by silentocean

Why Draco/Ginny? by Mynuet    (Reviews - 72)

A response to a mailing list on why D/G led to a long, rambling essay which I'm posting here.
Category: Essays
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4794 | Read count: 11640 | Published: Jul 11, 2004 | Updated: Jul 11, 2004
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Reviewer: silentocean Signed
Date: Dec 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Why?

Of course it made sence! I'd never really thought about why I ship Draco/Ginny, except that they seem to have mutual respect for eachother, which is pretty rare in HP.
Nice essay. It's not realy fair though, you just did all of the things my [pain in the...somewhere] English teacher never lets me do. Like talk to the audiance, and be somewhat rude about it. I envy you.

Author's Response: Well, when you\'re writing you have to think about your audience. I would never turn in something like this in an academic setting, for the very reasons you state. Since I was talking in general terms within fandom, though, the familiarity of direct address was permissible.

The Lush Life by Vesanmyn    (Reviews - 657)

A Vesica/Mynuet Collaboration. If Ginny had even the slightest inkling of what the day would bring, she probably would have called in sick. A disastrous press conference proved to be no match for the spin doctoring talents of Lush's chief and Ginny finds herself catapulted from being a lowly intern to the very eye of the storm, living a double life as a careerwitch and glamorous front woman for a racy new line. Throw in a few A-list events, a few dozen crises, an endless promotional tour with her new co-worker and the last person she wanted to spend time with, and a mystery waiting back home that neither of them may be able to solve….Every day's an adventure when you're living the Lush Life!
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 13 | Word count: 27031 | Read count: 82297 | Published: Jan 05, 2005 | Updated: Apr 28, 2007
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Reviewer: silentocean Signed
Date: Feb 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve - Lifestyles of the Newly Promoted

Thank you for posting! I'm so sorry readers have been bothering you. Please don't let a few idiots reflect badly upon the lot of us.

Author's Response: Ves and Myn Say: We would never judge the many based on the bad behavior of the few.

The Head Boy's Laundry: Lingerie by sugarbear_1269    (Reviews - 79)

Complete! When Draco wakes alone the morning after, he devises a plan to bring her back to him.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 5 | Word count: 8204 | Read count: 30824 | Published: Jan 29, 2005 | Updated: Jun 30, 2005
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Reviewer: silentocean Signed
Date: Jan 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Decency

Excellent.

To Update or Not to Update by MrsDanielRadcliffe    (Reviews - 22)

A smallish vent about the insensitivities of the occasional fanfiction reader and the abuses of the authors at their mercy.
Category: Essays
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Horror
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 540 | Read count: 2733 | Published: Jul 12, 2005 | Updated: Jul 12, 2005
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Reviewer: silentocean Signed
Date: Jan 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Ranting of an Irritated Author -- Installment the First

I agree with you completely. And I am very sorry if every I have written a review that has hurt you- I didn't mean it, and was probably in a horrible mood for reasons completely unrelated to you.
And just so you know, me and my almost OCD (but not actually very good) grammar fraud detecting eyes see nothing at all wrong in your essay.

PhD by twiddlekinks    (Reviews - 67)

*COMPLETED* Featuring Ginny Weasley as graduate student in training, and an icy blond Slytherin as her supervisor. Toss in a couple of science jokes or nerdy pick-up lines, and there’s the perfect protocol for passion. (Er…)
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 20136 | Read count: 12018 | Published: Aug 02, 2005 | Updated: Aug 16, 2005
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Reviewer: silentocean Signed
Date: Dec 01, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: 3: Results

After reading this chapter I thought I should mantion that my math intructor has a picture of a pumpkin with a pi symbol on it taped to her white board. She is a very strange instructor. We get two essays a semester and we have state [almost] all answers in complete setances. And I think I just spelled that world wrong.
Anyways, your story made me laugh, which is why I'm commenting. I like it.

Reviewer: silentocean Signed
Date: Dec 01, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: 5: Conclusion

"Baby, picture you as a substrate and me as an enzyme. Want to test the lock and key model? I'll be back tomorrow."

Ah, the devine memories of nineth grade bio...
I'm actually rather embarased to admit that that analogy never occured to me. Well, you learn something new everyday, right?
:-D

Vineyard Summer by jessica k malfoy    (Reviews - 387)

Ginny Weasley is sent to stay with her grandparents until the war ends, as her parents want to keep her out of harm's way. Her grandparents have another guest, another person in hiding, and a relationship quickly blossoms between them. However, with the war and so many secrets around them, Ginny isn't sure how to make it work. Fluffy occasionally, but things can't always be perfect, can they? Decisions have to be made and consequences dealt with.

For a fleeting moment, she imagined that they would never hear from their families again, that they would remain together in Tuscany until they were old and gray, with great-grandchildren. Much to her surprise, the thought didn’t make her as sad as she thought it should.

Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Blood
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 23 | Word count: 123807 | Read count: 65510 | Published: Sep 24, 2005 | Updated: Jul 25, 2011
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Reviewer: silentocean Signed
Date: Nov 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to Tuscany

I just wrote a really long review, but it didn't submit. Basically, I love your attention to details such as condoms and age. I also like that you raise interesting concepts in the story - consent, commitment, a woman's esteem when she is dependent on her man for money, to name a few. Keep writing, and please update soon!

Author's Response: aw sorry about that! i hate it when that happens :( thank you for your kind review, however. i do get a kick out of putting as many themes, issues, etc as i can into these stories. thanks for noticing :)

The Vault Incident by Myanceris    (Reviews - 41)

Draco and Ginny get locked into the Malfoy vault when a Goblin has an unfortunate accident. How on earth are they going to pass the time until they are rescued...? One-shot, PWP Smutty goodness. Oh, and there is a teeny, tiny, insignificant HBP spoiler. But the only way you'd recognise it is to have read HBP. So I doubt it really counts.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 6587 | Read count: 6474 | Published: Nov 29, 2005 | Updated: Nov 29, 2005
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Reviewer: silentocean Signed
Date: Feb 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Passing the time

Thank you for writing.

My Bane by Extreme Dancer    (Reviews - 173)

Ginny Weasley and Draco Malfoy have always been enemies. What will happen when they end up in a place where no one knows of their family rivalry?
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 24 | Word count: 26961 | Read count: 106600 | Published: Apr 06, 2006 | Updated: Mar 12, 2007
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Reviewer: silentocean Signed
Date: Jan 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: It's All in the Details

I just had to stop in and tell you that I think that The Wheel of Time is amazing, and to applaud you're taste in literature.

Author's Response: Why, thank you. I try ;)

Reviewer: silentocean Signed
Date: Jan 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Nighttime Confessions

"So, we set to work trying to turn you evil."
This sentence makes me cringe. Obviously Draco doesn't think what he is doing is evil.
And good and evil are entirely subjective.
I also don't like it when authors include entire song lyrics in their stories. I don't know if you wrote the song or not but... songs are only good when you hear them. I don't need a detailed description of every word Ginny sang to get the point.
I also thought it was a bit out of character for her to burst into song in the middle of the common room. I'm a singer, but even I wouldn't sing and dance on command just because Narccisa Malfoy asked me too. If you want to kept the scene if might help to make Ginny look a bit more nervous or to have her sing sitting down, and without a spotlight.
I don't entirely like the "lets make Ginny amazingly hot" aspect of her identity change, but I suppose its your prerogative if you want to leave it in.


Author's Response: ...yeah.

Unstoppable by CharmedLife19    (Reviews - 224)

There are three things that truly matter to Lucius Malfoy: his family, his wealth and his blood. So of course, it was of utmost importance that his son marry a pureblood. Thus Lucius begins to arrange the perfect bride for his son. She must have both beauty and brains. She must be skillful with a wand, but with the elegance to know when to use it. When it comes down to it there is really only one woman that matches the criterion, but she comes with one problem: She’s a Weasley.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 11 | Word count: 25492 | Read count: 71866 | Published: May 23, 2006 | Updated: May 13, 2008
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Reviewer: silentocean Signed
Date: Dec 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Brave Admonitions

sweet :-D

I must ask, is Ginny pregnant with child number one? Beucase that would be a deliciously magical turn of events and it would explain the dreama nd everythign...

Author's Response: Haha No, Gin\'s not pregnant... At the moment anyway...

Ginny's Revenge by CCC    (Reviews - 376)

Ginny catches Harry with another woman. What will she do for revenge?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 26 | Word count: 73871 | Read count: 86117 | Published: Jun 15, 2006 | Updated: Sep 14, 2009
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Reviewer: silentocean Signed
Date: Dec 08, 2006 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ooooh! This chapter has all of my favorite things. Necking, ballroom dancing, emeralds, and Armand. Is there any possiblility of a connection between your Armand and the Armand Anne Rice wrote?
I've taken ballroom dancing classes (I don't know how much you know about ballroom dances), please let me know if you need any help writing the dances. I don't think what you wrote is bad or anything (in fact, I love it!), I just want to encorage you to write more.
But don't stop now, some might say that 13 is an unlucky number....
Eh. I don't belive them.

Author's Response: My only referance for the name Armand is the Ann Rice novels. I always liked that name, and I thought I\'d plug it in here. I will be updating as soon as I get the next chapter back from the beta. Thanks for the review.

The Bet by fairgirl    (Reviews - 130)

Draco, Ginny and a bet which will lead them further than they thought...
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: Non-consensual sex
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 12415 | Read count: 23102 | Published: Sep 28, 2006 | Updated: Jun 02, 2007
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Reviewer: silentocean Signed
Date: Dec 05, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Ginny's mistake

Ohhh, clifhanger.
I like your story, but I think Ginny is acting a bit ooc. She's not half as helpless as everyone seems to think she is. I don't know as much about Draco's charicter, so I can't really comment on his behaivor.
One thing though, about the bet...
Draco's already said Ginnys name (when he made the bet!) So technicly, he's already lost.

Author's Response: Well he said it just to say, \"I\'m sure you will say Draco before I say Ginevra.\" I know that Ginny usually has much more temper but I wanted her very frail because of the trio\'s behaviour. She\'s all alone now, there is not even Neville or Luna for her! But don\'t worry, she will recover confronted to Draco....well a little bit beacause we all know that Draco is an excellent seducer ;) Thansk for your comments!

The Dangers of Mistletoe by CCC    (Reviews - 846)

Ginny is ready to kill whoever put magical mistletoe all over the castle. Draco finds the situation rather amusing.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 24 | Word count: 57029 | Read count: 263260 | Published: Oct 23, 2006 | Updated: Feb 28, 2007
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Reviewer: silentocean Signed
Date: Dec 01, 2006 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I love this story so much. Thanks for updating!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I\'m glad you like it. :)

Don't Look Back by LadyRhiyana    (Reviews - 35)

"Go!" he shouted. "No matter what happens, don't look back. I'll come for you, I swear it..."
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 2626 | Read count: 10904 | Published: Oct 27, 2006 | Updated: Oct 27, 2006
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Reviewer: silentocean Signed
Date: Jan 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It's nice and I like it but.. is it finished?
I'd like to know where Draco was for four years, and how he returned. I'm also a tad disappointed not to see some big, relived Draco/Ginny kiss or some family-wide dog pile caused by hugging each other so hard that everyone falls over.
I don't know, maybe that's unrealistic, but it seemed like the ending was kind of anti-climatic.

Strength, Chance or Fate by Persephone33    (Reviews - 245)

Even if he only got a glimpse of her flame-coloured hair around a corner, it was enough. Enough to keep him breathing. Alive.
Disclaimer: Harry Potter and all of the characters in his world are the property of J.K. Rowling and multiple movie companies and publishing houses. They get all of the money, I only get the pleasure of *breathy sigh* using Draco.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 15 | Word count: 30818 | Read count: 34652 | Published: Nov 17, 2006 | Updated: Apr 19, 2009
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Reviewer: silentocean Signed
Date: Dec 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Questions, Confessions and Smiles

I really like this story. I like the way you've incorporated book six and they way you've portrayed Draco's and Ginny's charicter. Do try and post chapter 16 soon?

Author's Response: I\'ll do what I can.

If Jealousy Ruled the World by alexandriaisariel    (Reviews - 13)

A Curse: The body will ache with the coldest of sweats and the hottest of fevers. A thousand needles will prick your skin until you touch the other again.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 935 | Read count: 892 | Published: Dec 03, 2006 | Updated: Dec 04, 2006
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Reviewer: silentocean Signed
Date: Dec 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Young Love

I'm not sure where this is going, but I like the first chapter. Keep writing!

Blue-Eyed Angel by RaineMalfoy    (Reviews - 86)

Thirteen years after the Dark Lord was vanquished, Draco Malfoy is out of Azkaban, wandless, practically destitute, and physically afflicted from his trespasses against Voldemort. Who should chance by and save this shell of a man from what he has become, but a fiery redhead from his dark past.

Draco has a rare gift and an all too common disease, Ginny has an irritating boyfriend and a desire to rebel. What can they expect from each other and who will end up surprising the other more?


Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Drama, Mystery, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Blood, Graphic Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 42403 | Read count: 7866 | Published: Jan 04, 2007 | Updated: May 17, 2007
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Reviewer: silentocean Signed
Date: Jan 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 01

I like you're writing a lot- I've completely devoured Leave Me Here To Bleed.
That is, if you are indeed the same RaineMalfoy who wrote Leave Me Here To Bleed...
Anyways, I have no criticism for you're writing in this story. It's just...so sad! How can any society be so unforgiving? Well, no, I understand the lack of forgiveness. I just hate to see my favorite characters in such misery.

Author's Response: hahaha! i have a follower! yes, this is the same RaineMalfoy. LMHtB was my first attempt at a fanfiction, but that didn\'t work out too well because i was adapting a story i had already written INTO a fanfic. yeah, that didn\'t work out like I’d planed, so that story is just back to being mine again. XD
It on fictionpress though. :) along with the sequel. :D


I had enjoyed reading HP FanFics some three years ago or so, so I started that up again, and I couldn’t resist writing one myself. You know I write angst if you read LMHtB. :)
yeah, in my opinion and how I see things, people would be less forgiving after the second war. They forgave after the first, and all who they forgave became Death Eaters again and all that, so I can see people, like, being REALLY nasty now, once bitten twice shy, you know? (no werewolf pun intended there. hehehe)
Draco is my favorite Character too. :)

A Chocolate Covered Malfoy by CCC    (Reviews - 365)

Ginny and Draco are assigned to be partners in a cooking class. When they spill a pan full of chocolate cake batter, interesting things ensue.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 9 | Word count: 23020 | Read count: 89370 | Published: Jan 07, 2007 | Updated: Mar 25, 2007
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Reviewer: silentocean Signed
Date: Mar 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

...someone...told you that you are going to hell for writing this story?
Eh. Don't worry. Hell is where the party is.
But I do like your writing, so thank you for risking the "fires of hell" and whatnot.

Author's Response: Apparently, people don't approve of storiese where people in highschool have sex. I think the whole world knows it is going on, but they ignore it. I was thinking about going back and putting in an author's note saying they were all in college now just to appease.

And You Love It by MrsDanielRadcliffe    (Reviews - 79)

Written for the DG Fic Exchange on LJ for slytherinwench. Draco and Blaise make a bet concerning the lovely Miss Weasley. Loosely based upon Bernard Shaw's play Pygmalion.





After Chapter Five posts later today or tomorrow, it will officially be COMPLETE!
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 5 | Word count: 10813 | Read count: 37772 | Published: Jan 08, 2007 | Updated: Feb 18, 2007
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Reviewer: silentocean Signed
Date: Jan 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

please don't say you're finished?

Draco Loves Fire by draconis major    (Reviews - 45)

Draco has recently broken up with Pansy, and is not looking for anyone new. That is until he runs into a certain beautiful red-head.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 12183 | Read count: 10560 | Published: Feb 11, 2007 | Updated: Oct 20, 2007
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Reviewer: silentocean Signed
Date: Jul 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Meeting Harry

I like your writing, but I feel that you are severely underestimating human self control. People don't magically fly into sex-frenzies and loose their minds.
(And this charm, by the way, does it even exist? I'm guessing no one really tests it...)
Poor Harry. Beat up twice because he doesn't have the sense to actually end a relationship before lending out his lips.

Author's Response: It just goes to show you, don\'t cheat on a girl who\'s brother is easily angered and who\'s friend is a genius.