Ginny is twenty four, and the war rages on. Draco is a Death Eater, and he needs her help. Of course, he doesn't give her a choice. Now she's surrounded by the enemy. She begins to see that not everything is black and white. Can she come to terms with her new role in his life?Category: Works in Progress
Damm soo short but soo great...Every man has a dark side...said with her fingers throught leo's hair shudders!
Author's Response: I promise the next chapter will be longer. I love the image of Narcissa saying that while she runs her fingers through Leo\'s hair.
Awww Leo, cutest little park scene ever and that line about changing Ginny's hair to blond is soo typico of D. mask a good comment with a mean one. This time I must say that your portrayal of the characters is a lot better but i'd love it if we had a bit more i'am ashamed of saying this .......fluffyness ikes i said it there
Author's Response: I\'m actually trying to avoid fluff in this fic. I\'m normally knee deep in it.
Well I did notice the fact that you were avoiding fluff (Ginny is ver. in french we would say acide (acid)) but sometimes a little cuteness is appropriate
Author's Response: I like her giving Draco just a bit of attitude, even if he is in control.
Ikes...this is I feel a turning point. I hope they just tortured Harry publicly that would be ok I guess. Every thing Ginny said to Leo will come true...It better...I will cry if it doesn't
Author's Response: I hope Harry didn\'t have it that bad. He probably went out in a blaze of green light.
OMG this was the first good chapter in a while (don't get me wrong, they're all alright, but this one is great). I'am thinking that Ginny is going to get addicted to those calming charms pretty soon with the quantity she's receving.
Author's Response: I think the calming charms would be necessary in her predicament. : )
COL (that be crying out loud), poor people.
Author's Response: I\'m glad you explained that. I wouldn\'t have gotten it. There will be something better soon.
Ohhh Nooo! Poooooor people why do have to make them sooo miserable?
Snape has to stop being an old insensitive bat and accept the fact that he hates being alone and that anyways he always had a crush on Hermione, well not like since she was 11 that is just disgusting, but like since he saved her.
Omg that's funny poisoning someone during dinner and then just keep on eating, it's kinda funny.
Vampire!Draco seduces Ginny away from Harry into the night.Category: Completed Short Stories
Ummm...that was special.
He showed her everything. What they didn’t get to the first day, after flying kites and riding boats and feeding swans, they did the next day, and the next. She realized, after spending seemingly endless weeks with him, that she didn’t want to go home, but go home she must.Category: Works in ProgressTen years have passed. They’ll always have Paris.
This is intresting, but I have to say too much is too much concerning the little girl, you should try to take her ressemblance to Draco down a notch, I know we all tend to do that with M. offsprings, but I think it would be way more intresting if you made her a little more hazy, so that the interaction with D. is a little more subtile and way less ohh your my daddy never liked the other one blab lba bla...Well other then that I like it!
And that was just a little advice take it or not I will still read and review!
Author's Response: Of course, I\'m describing Lily\'s appearance to make her seem similar to Draco. Her hair is very similar to Ginny\'s, and her eyes have been mistaken for Fred and George\'s. But you are correct, and I appreciate the suggestion. \r\n\r\nThanks very much for taking the time to leave your thoughts. I hope you continue!
Ok this is good...for the most part
I like the fact they didn't fall into each others arms and had crazy rabbit sex, I like the fact you portraid Draco as a man that can hurt and be hurt...
I don't like the mega melo-drama at the end with the crazy hair and red face...she's not mad...she's drunk.
And ok sorry but you made the most cheeesy thing ever with Scorpius like a 10 or 11 year old...in a bar that can bartend and ehh be an mazing player...??? ok first his hand are not nearly big enough to like handle the bottles and then the playing thing is possible but do you really think that an attorny after a divorce would let the father take the child knowing that he is the owner of a club...I don't think so...it's not proper child care...but hey it's fiction and it's cool I guess
Author's Response: A very thoughtful review, I thank you. I will proceed to defend myself, firstly because I\'m defensive and secondly because I think answers are warranted for some of your questions. She is mad. She\'s mad at herself for not realizing it sooner because it was too hard to realize and she\'s mad at Draco for being insensitive and so obviously still in love with her. Scorpius, to me, is just the man and to have him be an exceptionally good card player and bartender (he made up his own tricks for his small hands, and when I said good I meant efficient and intuitive). And as for that last concern, it makes me laugh, for we\'re in a wizarding world. Things are quite different. And I can\'t imagine Draco Malfoy not getting what he wanted even if it did come to lawyers. Thanks a MILLION for the great review. I hope you continue to leave such thought provoking ones. :)
Oh I wonder who said those three last words...I think this chapter is focusing on the wrong part. I just think that the part where the get back together is awfully short and direct (it would be great in a movie, but in text it need more depth). And I also thought that the part where she walk around in Prague reminicing Paris could have been more...more complex, something that explains things more clearly (like they ten years she passed after Paris, how she felt about D. then etc.)
I do love the fact that her second name s Kaida it's a lovely name and a good way to involve Draco and the girl
Author's Response: Your reviews always make me think. So I\'ll start off with the defending then: Ginny\'s thoughts are complicated, twisting, and confusing. The organization of this chapter is reflecting that. The history of the past ten years is to come in later chapters, but the focus now is just that: on the here and now.
IIIIEEE, ouch this chapter is a bit weird. I mean he says that his shit at this father thing yet he has scorpius and he seemed like a fit dad in the first chapter...Then Harry not liking Lily and Lily liking a man she has only known for a month more then him is soo unlikely even if he is her biological dad. Harry thought he was her real father and well I think you understand what I mean. But there is the sentence that you wrote about beauty that blew me away litteraly I copy pasted it in my fav. quotes.
Author's Response: First chapter, we did not see Draco interact with Scorpius at all. In fact, we find out Celia took Scorpius away from Draco when he was less than a year old. The boy comes to visit Draco for a month every year, but he has never had to be a full time day - a real father. Harry has always been distant towards Lily. Ginny explained that in the last chapter. But try to imagine, from Harry\'s point of view, that you find out your wife slept with your worst enemy, and he fathered who you believed to be your child. I believe that Harry would be repulsed by that, and wouldn\'t know how to treat Lily. Additionally, Draco is winning Lily over like he won Ginny over in Paris. But I always appreciate your thoughts and opinions - they make me into a better writer. So keep reviewing!
This chapter was ver.ver. nice I have no comments about abnormal behavior It's all very probable
Author's Response: Well, thanks. :)
Ohh god he had an axiety attack that's great just great poor guy his dad truly messed things up for him didn't he
Author's Response: It was a hard chapter for Draco. He\'s dealing with demons he\'s kept buried for a long time. Thanks for the review!
Never anger a fairy because she might go find your true love, magic her a dress, and send her to a ball, and you might just like it! DGCategory: Works in Progress
You need to slow down the pace of your narration, because you give too much too fast, can kill your story.
Then some work on the characters could be usefull. But overall it's pretty cute!
Ginny is in a new world after the war. Then Draco shows up along with some companions he wouldn't normally have.Category: Works in Progress
Ehhh, wow this is taking highly impossible to a whole new level!
Sometimes, you just want to be someone else.Category: Completed Short Stories
LOL, absolutly absurd that little ending, but oh soo delightfull
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I had the site open on my desktop while I did other things, and I saw that 67 people read it without leaving a review. I was starting to get paranoid.
*DH SPOILERS* Draco and Ginny discover that it is never too late to find true love.Category: Long and Completed
I don't know where this is going and I LOVE IT
crazy bint Junstine I hate that sort of girl.
Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it so far--hopefully you will keep liking it once the main part of the story starts! I'm particularly glad that you hate Justine--that's exactly what I was hoping for. Thanks for reading and for the review!
Wow I love this ! who would have thought old ginny and old draco could be intresting!
Author's Response: Apparently I did! I'm glad you are enjoying the story, even if it is a little out of the ordinary. Thanks for the review!
Ginny decides to have everyone over for dinner. It doesn't go as she expected.Category: Completed Short Stories
She knew what the Order would think, if they could see her: Poor Ginny Weasley, who had been seduced by darkness. Well, the truth was, darkness hadn’t really had to try very hard.Category: Completed Short Stories
First in the 'His' trilogy
Oh gosh it's your first piece no wayy!
If you feel it's a one time thing well then you did great and your retirement will be confy, this is great
Author's Response: Thank you! Actually, I was inspired to write another. The companion to this should be coming any day now. I\'m glad you liked it. :)
Draco is working for the Ministry as an Invisible, an elite and unknown Auror, while the rest of the world thinks he's six-feet under. On a mission in New York he goes into a pub where he thinks he's met the barmaid before. The red hair should really be a tip-off.Category: Works in Progress
i like it as a one shot, but it would be the lazy way out LOL! You should continue, but please don't make it like oh draco oh ginny oh let's have sex oh no let's get married! Tooooo much of that out there in the world! Are you up to the challenge???
Ginny has a series of encounters that her family would not approve of. Can something come from nothing? Is she doomed to disappointment?Category: Completed Short Stories
Putain that was ver-ver-good the last part was great
Author's Response: Thank you : )
*Final chapter added* Parenting can be overwhelming, even for wizards. Especially when there are teenagers involved. Draco and Ginny, summoned to Hogwarts for a conference with their children's Head of House, share an interlude neither can forget.Category: Completed Short Stories