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Registered: Sep 30, 2006
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More Than One Way Home by Vesica    (Reviews - 80)

Written for the 2006 DG_Smutakkah fic exchange. It hasn’t always been an easy road for them, but sometimes it takes getting really good and lost to find the way home again.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU, Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 13761 | Read count: 27076 | Published: Jan 02, 2007 | Updated: Jan 30, 2007
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Reviewer: ZSF Signed
Date: Oct 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Here take mine

Oh, and I read somewhere in another respond how you wanted some suggestions on Britspeak. There was one point, early in the book, where it said something about Ginny loving History of Magic and studying at the "college student level". Well, in the UK, it would be university, but that wouldn't be used anyway for the Wizarding world.

A Chocolate Covered Malfoy by CCC    (Reviews - 365)

Ginny and Draco are assigned to be partners in a cooking class. When they spill a pan full of chocolate cake batter, interesting things ensue.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 9 | Word count: 23020 | Read count: 89370 | Published: Jan 07, 2007 | Updated: Mar 25, 2007
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Reviewer: ZSF Signed
Date: Mar 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Good update! Hmm... a spell? From Sorin? That made snort. Poor, poor Draco. How's a hormonal teenage boy to get some action, eh? Great job!

Author's Response: Poor Draco, he's probably used to a little more than he is getting at this point. Eventually they will work it out, but frustrating him is half of the fun.

Reviewer: ZSF Signed
Date: Apr 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue

"I get to tell Ron!" ... That made me laugh. Great job! I'm sad that this story is over, but at least they get their happy ending now.

Curating Draco Malfoy by Madame Puddifoot    (Reviews - 23)

Award-winning fic from the D/G Fic Exchange on LJ. Ginny Weasley just got her first job as a curator for the Wizarding Museum of London. Too bad her permanent employment rests on convincing the one and only Draco Malfoy to help out her museum.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4539 | Read count: 3550 | Published: Jan 08, 2007 | Updated: Jan 08, 2007
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Reviewer: ZSF Signed
Date: May 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You definitely write fics that are very much in need of sequels. But you seem to like the style of giving us only a glimpse of their relationship and having only an ambiguous idea of where they're going.

However, if you ever get the chance, we would love another chapter...

Tipping Point by madalene3666    (Reviews - 51)

Draco’s wanted Ginny for a long time. A stolen kiss tips him over the edge into making Ginny an offer, an offer she really should have refused.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 6941 | Read count: 10734 | Published: Jan 28, 2007 | Updated: Jan 28, 2007
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Date: Feb 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Be careful what you agree to

Is that the end? Oh, dear, I was waiting for Ginny to finish the night. Hmmm... do you plan on writing a follow up to this one?

Reviewer: ZSF Signed
Date: Sep 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Be careful what you agree to

Hey! Just rereading b/c this is so good, when I noticed a really teeny, trifle mistake. You described Malfoy's note to Ginny as only one sentence, but when you showed the note, it consisted of actually two. I'm just picky like that. This story definitely deserves a sequel!

Adventures in Matrimony by Mynuet    (Reviews - 82)

Maybe not always happily, and ever isn't guaranteed, but the story of Draco and Ginny definitely continues after the marriage.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 2521 | Read count: 19991 | Published: Feb 07, 2007 | Updated: Apr 19, 2007
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Date: Jun 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Marriage Counseling

Loved it! They really do love eachother... they're just too stubborn teh both of them...

Reviewer: ZSF Signed
Date: Jun 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Late Night

“If you want to live,” she said pleasantly, “I’d suggest you shut your fucking mouth and go take care of the baby right now.”

That line was SO funny, and it was totally realitic, too!

I Promise You Walls by alexandriaisariel    (Reviews - 27)

When an unusual alliance forms, the light side holds a chance they didn't have before.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 3935 | Read count: 2469 | Published: Feb 22, 2007 | Updated: Mar 30, 2007
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Date: Jul 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Blind As We Are, Watching Everything

This story is so good! I'm going to keep an eye out for it now. I'm very much looking forward to your next installment!

Definitely No Prank by Hearts Cadence    (Reviews - 87)

Draco wants Ginny, but she knows it's only a prank...right?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2642 | Read count: 10162 | Published: Feb 24, 2007 | Updated: Feb 24, 2007
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Reviewer: ZSF Signed
Date: Mar 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

YAY! Wow, that was so cute. Your Dracos are probably my favorites. They've got that manipulative, tough, bad boy slytherin quality, but then he also has a side where he just adores Ginny... good job!

Fuzzy Pink Boxers by Caroline    (Reviews - 53)

Draco and Blaise have major hang-overs, and Ginny wants to know why.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy)
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1725 | Read count: 6869 | Published: Mar 07, 2007 | Updated: Mar 07, 2007
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Reviewer: ZSF Signed
Date: Jun 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very cute.

Pretty As You Please by Nokomis    (Reviews - 22)

Ginny wasn’t quite sure how the situation had spun so wildly out of control.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Neville Longbottom
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1135 | Read count: 5279 | Published: Mar 13, 2007 | Updated: Mar 13, 2007
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Reviewer: ZSF Signed
Date: Jun 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooh, what's she gonna do? I really enjoyed how you played out the begining - I thought, literally, that she was a referee! It was hilarious how you introduced Draco and Neville, and how he still sort of bullies Nev about his toad and plants, just like the old days! Funny. 'Train the plant to eat toads'... hehe.
Really origional idea, and rather quirky, but your characterization was great!!

Despoilment by eliagem    (Reviews - 49)

Written for Rainpuddle13's fic contest...For the good of all wizards, and despite the love of one man, she fought to uphold justice by breaking the law. To her vexation, the plan backfired... but not for long.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 6623 | Read count: 8673 | Published: Apr 08, 2007 | Updated: Apr 09, 2007
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Reviewer: ZSF Signed
Date: Apr 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Part II

Wow, fabulous story! I love that this story wasn't TOO smucky, like a lot of stories are, and how you still managed to incorporate a light-hearted, humorous plot... Great job!

Author's Response: *sheepish* I just couldn\'t stomach making it too explicit and using the more vulgar of possible terms- I\'m glad you liked it my way. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: ZSF Signed
Date: Jun 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Part II

I've read this story once before, and I'm glad that I've come upon it again. Good job!

Author's Response: Oooh, a re-reader! Thank you for your review!

Drabbles by Mynuet    (Reviews - 133)

Non-connected drabbles from varied D/G prompts, which aren't long enough to post separately.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU, Hogwarts-era, Past AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 14 | Word count: 7368 | Read count: 45174 | Published: Apr 11, 2007 | Updated: Jun 27, 2007
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Reviewer: ZSF Signed
Date: Jun 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Kept Man

Ron is a such a funny dweeb.

Reviewer: ZSF Signed
Date: Jun 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 14: Quill and Ink

Funny!

The Play's the Thing by Mynuet    (Reviews - 27)

...to catch the conscience of the Boy Who Lived.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2786 | Read count: 4010 | Published: Apr 27, 2007 | Updated: Apr 27, 2007
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Reviewer: ZSF Signed
Date: Apr 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Act I

Very very funny! Yes, indeed Harry's not particularly the brightest, is he, poor thing?
"if Harry hadn't known better, he'd have thought that Dobby himself resented him"
That's my favorite line. I actually snorted out loud and got smoothing all over the place. Not that you need to know that...
Splendid! I like how Harry is self-centered enough to be disliked, but has no clue whatsoever.
A somewhat rumpled Ginny? My, my, what COULD she have been doing behind the curtains?
Hope that Malfoy will make his entrance in the next installment. Update soon!

Queen of Deception by sophia    (Reviews - 36)

When Harry kissed her, she only thought of it as a way to get back at Draco. Except things did not quite work out the way she expected them...
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Neville Longbottom, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Action, Angst, Crossover, Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 5 | Word count: 6796 | Read count: 21620 | Published: Apr 29, 2007 | Updated: Jul 05, 2007
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Date: Apr 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Drool

The Boy Who Was Too Angsty To Die
... Hhaaaaaaaahahahahaaaa!
I really like how you took Ginny's persepective from the kiss, and how OBVIOUSLY she could not enjoy snogging someone with her brother and ex goggling.
What does she want to get back at Draco for? Hopefully next chap there will be some DG interaction? And how can Ginny 'know' Snape?
As much as I love how Ginny sees right through Harry's miserable attemps, I do question if she will ever be as mean as she is here. Sure, he's a self-absorbed git, but he's saved her life before and has spent most vacations with her and her family. So unless she is heartless enough to pretend to be his friend while mocking him all the while...
Well, just some observations. Good job overall, and I'll be looking for the next installment!

Cat Burglar by alexandriaisariel    (Reviews - 13)

Our lovely couple has decided to take a break. But, Draco has a certain attachment to a kitty that our heroine loves to death.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3859 | Read count: 1467 | Published: May 03, 2007 | Updated: May 04, 2007
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Date: Jul 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a sweet story! I really like how Ginny has backbone and won't be treated less than what she deserves. That showed Draco, didn't it? Great job!

"You" by BitterSweetFlames    (Reviews - 18)

Blackmailed and pushed, Draco is forced to leave Ginny. Through thorough finding he sees her again. Now, the question is: Will she have him back?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3207 | Read count: 7555 | Published: Jun 17, 2007 | Updated: Jun 17, 2007
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Reviewer: ZSF Signed
Date: Jun 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: You

It wasn't bad, but the dialogue, I mean... It sounded kind of awkward and the fact that they weren't even responding to eachother (they seemed to go on their own little monologues)... Nice plot, though. I think you need to read it outloud, as a conversation, to see if it flows.

Author's Response: I know the dalogue is off.. I did a challenge with this one and it was a quote challenge.. Believe me, it was a doozy.. Anyway, it was just amongst us friends.. But I took it very seriously..:D\r\nCiao

Conflict Resolution by Adelagia    (Reviews - 190)

Draco and Ginny hate each other with a passion. The end. Well, no, not really.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 18765 | Read count: 49413 | Published: Jun 27, 2007 | Updated: Apr 13, 2008
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Reviewer: ZSF Signed
Date: Jul 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: 2. At the Rory Age B Ampersand

Yay! They're sharing the bed! I love their bantering, and the line about how they were both alarmed to find that they'd have to continue talking to eachother was hilarious.

Reviewer: ZSF Signed
Date: Jun 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Tunnel Vision

Yay! A new story! Am I the first to review? They are so cute, they really do remind me of an old married couple. As much as they torment and bicker, they still listen to eachother. Haha! Continue, please!

Reviewer: ZSF Signed
Date: Aug 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: 3. Mr. Peacock in the National Gallery with the Brush

I love it! Their banter is so charming, and both of them are developing quite nicely, I particularly like Draco's potty mouth.

Reviewer: ZSF Signed
Date: Aug 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: 4. Deep Thoughts

This chapter was so cute! And that last banter was so amusing... Thanks for the chuckle!

Reviewer: ZSF Signed
Date: Sep 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: 5. Discovery

Great job! I only wish that we could've heard an exerpt of their dramatic reading, it sounds hilarious.