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The Broken Road by CliodnaHPFan    (Reviews - 299)

Ginny Weasley has gone through a string of men, even suffering through a stint being married to the Savior of the Wizarding World. She keeps her pain bottled up inside, until when she finally snaps, she does something drastic that changes her world forever.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 21 | Word count: 79473 | Read count: 131929 | Published: Aug 11, 2005 | Updated: Mar 03, 2006
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Date: Mar 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 :: Happy Endings

I was so excited to see that you had updated, and the chapter certainly lived up to all my expectations. I loved the scene with Pansy giving Draco the fifth degree, and the ending gave me all sorts of warm fuzzies. Thank you very much for writing this story. It is one that I am sure I will read again.

The Chosen One by Ada Achlys    (Reviews - 207)

COMPLETE! Ginny Weasley finds herself a prisoner of Death Eaters, along with Draco Malfoy. The two will have to work together if they want to escape. Will this unlikely partnership lead to something more? What will Ginny do if she is forced to choose between Draco and Harry? This story picks up at the end of HBP.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Romance
Warnings: Blood
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 13 | Word count: 50488 | Read count: 66446 | Published: Aug 18, 2005 | Updated: Dec 30, 2005
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Date: Dec 30, 2005 Title: Chapter 12: The Chosen One

That's a very cute ending, though Draco was quite verbal for just having woken up from a month in a coma. Thanks for the story!

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Date: Dec 31, 2005 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue

I don't think I've read an epilogue before that ends in quite this way! I'm still giggling. Thanks again for the story!

Dense by Jennay    (Reviews - 26)

God, she loved him when he was being dense.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2734 | Read count: 4079 | Published: Aug 19, 2005 | Updated: Aug 19, 2005
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Date: Feb 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Dense

I'm pretty sure I read this when you first posted it, but I'm not sure. Tonight, I was in need of good, fluffy fic, and KateinVA sent me here. I'm glad she did. This is a nice feel-good story. I love Ginny's scheming, and Draco's denseness, which may or may not be true. Nice job!

My Anything by Eienvine    (Reviews - 363)

It's an old spell and an older oath, and Draco Malfoy would have laughed them off were he not in his present situation. Things being as they are, however, being married to Ginny Weasley might just be the answer to his problems. Pre-HBP.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 21 | Word count: 119113 | Read count: 221945 | Published: Sep 20, 2005 | Updated: Oct 16, 2006
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Date: Jul 24, 2006 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

The trip to Switzerland has been very interesting, even though it almost seems like Draco and Ginny keep taking one step forward only to take two steps back. Hopefully they will start improving their record before too long. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Aug 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen

This was a really lovely set of chapters. The ebb and flow of Draco and Ginny's closeness was extremely well done, and Draco's confessions about his family were quite powerful. I enjoyed them thouroughly. Unfortunately Snape seems to have underestimated Draco and Ginny's stubbornness and stupidity. Sigh. Anyway, I am very much looking forward to whatever comes next. Thanks for the new chapters!

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Aug 23, 2006 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty

Ah! How sweet! A possible tradgedy is so useful in making people realize how much they love each other, itsn't it? And Bernard is absolutely right. Thanks for these two chapters. I hope you will expand on this in the future. Thanks for the update--I was extremely unhappy after the last one!

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Oct 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue

What a sweet ending! This story has been a true pleasure to read. I'm sure it will be one I come back to again in the future. Thank you very much for posting it!

Lost and Found by Mynuet    (Reviews - 31)

No one knew what caused the dragons to start to sicken and die, but they did. Those who cared for them were the damaged, the broken, those who had nothing left for which to brave the world.

And then the Wilder came.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Drama
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 4132 | Read count: 6269 | Published: Oct 17, 2005 | Updated: Nov 27, 2005
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Date: Oct 17, 2005 Title: Chapter 1: Endings

The relationships in this seem really interesting. I'm looking forward to eventually finding the answers to all the questions that you have left unanswered...

A Shadow of Doubt by andromeda77    (Reviews - 45)

An extended short story especially for Halloween. A Slytherin dare forces Ginny into the Shrieking Shack on Halloween...and during a full moon. Watch the events unfold as unexpected company arrives.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Action, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 10868 | Read count: 19947 | Published: Oct 28, 2005 | Updated: Oct 30, 2005
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Date: Oct 31, 2005 Title: Chapter 3: Part 3 - The Union

That was really cute! A nice way to start the day.

Hereditas by thememory    (Reviews - 42)

When Malfoy Manor is targeted by Death Eaters, Draco and his mother are forced to stay with the Weasley's for the summer. Tensions are high, nerves are on edge. Strange things keep happening. What happens when they just can't take it anymore? Post HBP.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Action
Warnings: Blood
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 17737 | Read count: 14531 | Published: Nov 01, 2005 | Updated: Jan 12, 2006
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Date: Jan 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 7: New Found

I giggled a lot during this chapter--there were lots of funny moments. And jealous Draco is always fun. Now we just have to wait for Ginny to see the light! Thanks for the chapter.

Glass Flowers by Glass_Mermaid    (Reviews - 11)

A bitter temptation, a miserable longing, a lonley relief. These are the trials of seperation for Draco Malfoy and Ginny Weasley. HPB.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Angst, Drama
Warnings: Blood
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1355 | Read count: 2883 | Published: Nov 25, 2005 | Updated: Nov 25, 2005
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Date: Nov 26, 2005 Title: Chapter 1: Glass Lilies

I really like the uncertainty of this story. The style is quite compelling. If you do post other stories elsewhere, I would love to know where.

Author's Response: I used a different (strange) style on this one, I think. I'm still debating where I'm going to put the other vignettes, but I'll let you know when I decide.

Along Came A Wizard by fallenwitch    (Reviews - 642)

A bet, a wanted witch, and a magical contract land Draco in a most unexpected situation. Can his Slytherin soul survive intact or will he succumb to one redheaded witch in bondage? Snarky humor, romance, and a pinch of angst. “I don’t want it. I didn’t order it. Now leave me the fuck alone.” He slammed the door closed. Only it didn’t close due to the enormous boot wedged into its threshold. One loud grunt later and it flung back open, almost hitting him in the face. Draco reflexively leaned back, and that’s when she was thrust into his unsuspecting arms.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 18 | Word count: 46917 | Read count: 43914 | Published: Nov 29, 2005 | Updated: Jan 18, 2007
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Date: Dec 06, 2005 Title: Chapter 2: It's None Of Your Goddamn Business

So Ginny is starting to come back to life. I bet she is going to start making Draco's life very interesting. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Dec 12, 2005 Title: Chapter 3: Hullo Up There, Beautiful!

It looks like Blaise is going to add an interesting dimension to the story. I loved the line about Draco not owning Ginny. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Jan 09, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: The Fucking Team Mascot

Draco's jealousy is a wonderful thing to see! And Ginny seems to be so naive considering what it looks like she has gone through in the past. I can't wait to see what actually happened, or what will happen once Draco realizes that his jealousy isn't just because she is his "property." Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Naive Ginny vs. No Insight Draco. Yep, sounds like an interesting match-up to me. -fallenwitch

Author's Response: Naive Ginny vs. No Insight Draco. Yep, sounds like an interesting match-up to me. -fallenwitch

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Jan 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Those Bastards Are Too Physical For Her

I guess I'm with Blaise in wondering exactly what is with Draco and Ginny, but I think I am a bit more patient in waiting to find out. I trust you'll let us in on it eventually. And I expect it will be quite interesting along the way. It was fun to see a jealous Blaise in this, but even better to see Ginny's loyalty to Draco. I am certainly looking forward to an update!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, Ginny is definitely loyal to her man! -fallenwitch

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Jan 31, 2006 Title: Chapter 6: What The Hell Took Them So Long?

It is nice to see that Draco might be coming to terms with what he feels for Ginny. But I have to admit that I am a little confused by this chapter, especially about the political situation and the Bulgarians. Maybe there is stuff from earlier chapters that would help clarify it but I have forgotten. Maybe I'll have to go back and reread them. Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: No, you didn\'t miss anything. Do you ever miss anything? The next part of this fic will deal with the Bulgarians. The only reason you are confused is because it\'s a confusing chapter. Thanks for your review, as always! -fallenwitch

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Feb 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 7: A Good Wizard

Poor Ginny. What is it about her that attracts men who want to leave her because it is what's best for her. And Draco is a blind idiot. Hopefully he will come around soon. Thanks for the chapter! I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thanks, Embellished. So glad you are enjoying this one! -fallenwitch

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Feb 25, 2006 Title: Chapter 8: Bewitched

I'd love to know what Ginny is really thinking. And whether she would have reacted differently if he had told her earlier who he had planned for her to marry. Though I have to admit that I am relieved by the news. I had hoped for it, but was worried that with Draco's stubborness, he might try to get Blaise to marry her after all. Anyway, I will wait as patiently as I can to see what happens next. Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: I think you are saying that Draco misjudged his timing on revealing his intent to marry her. I think Draco is probably saying the same thing to himself right about now. Thanks for your review, Embellished! -fallenwitch

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Mar 11, 2006 Title: Chapter 9: Draco's Bad Day, His Very Bad Day

I think this chapter is quite good. It kept me giggling, especially the bits about the shape of Draco's arse. I hope you manage to overcome your writer's block sometime soon!

Author's Response: Thanks, Embellished! Loved that it made you laugh! When I think of memorable funny fics, I always think of Resolve. I am not ashamed to admit that I\'ve gone back and read that one over and over again! If anyone out there hasn\'t read that gem of a fic, please do! I am working on that w-block. We\'ll see. Thanks for your review! -fallenwitch

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Mar 21, 2006 Title: Chapter 10: That Piece of Trash

Poor Draco. In over his head, and completely befuddled by jealousy. I'm hoping Blaise saw something that Draco is too dense to see. I guess I'll just have to wait to find out. Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Yes, Blaise\'s eyesight is 20/20. Thanks for your review! -fallenwitch

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2006 Title: Chapter 11: Where The Hell's Ginny?

If I think about this chapter from the objective point of view as an author, I agree that you ended this chapter in exactly the right place. As a reader, however, I want to strangle you. Please don't take too long to update this. I can't wait to find out what would bring Ginny back after such a calculating exit.

Author's Response: Oh, my, I must be doing something right if you want strangle me! The next update is on the way. You might to strangle me after that one as well! Thanks for your review. I loved it! -fallenwitch

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Mar 27, 2006 Title: Chapter 12: Balls of Steel

I still think I want to strangle you, but not quite as much. I suspect that even though Draco insists he won't help Ginny, he will anyway. But suspicion is just that. I would much rather know for sure. So please update soon!

Author's Response: You seem to always see the positive in people, even in your reviews. I hope Draco is feeling like living up to that! Thanks for your review, Embellished! -fallenwitch

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: May 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 13: The Minister's Wife

Hooray! It is nice to see a new chapter from you. I love the complex soup of emotions in this one too. And Ginny's reaction is perfect. "Oh, shit," indeed. Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Thanks, Embellished. Yes, it\'s \"Oh, shit\" time. I loved how you got that exactly the way I mean it! -fallenwitch

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Jun 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 14: His Kiss

Aha! Some answers! Not that they are answers I like to hear. But at least now we know what has been going on with Ginny. I hope that you have some plan to resolve this because otherwise I might die of a broken heart right along with poor Draco. Well, maybe not. But I won't be too happy anyway. Thanks for the update. I am definitely looking forward to seeing what comes next.

Author's Response: Hi Embellished, don\'t worry. I do have a plan for resolution, although it might not be the resolution that everyone wants. Thanks so much for stopping by! I appreciate it. -fallenwitch