Oh my, poor Ginny. You're right, she does have some growing up to do and I'm glad that you're taking your time with this story. Each of your characters are so well drawn but mysterious at the same time. I love your Draco and I hope we see more of him soon. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. I can't wait to find out what else you have planned.

I don’t know what you were worrying about. When I first read the chapter, I couldn’t believe the writing. It is much different than how you normally write but was amazing nonetheless. You were able to completely integrate the mythology into the story so that I got a very hazy inking of what was to happen, but it was still a mystery. I know you love leaving cliffhangers and this was definitely a biggie and I am dying to know where you’re taking this story. The whole premise is so original and I cannot wait to see how this story progresses. My fanfiction brain has just been stretched in a completely new direction. Seriously, whatever the hell you’re doing, keep doing it, and often. This may be blasphemous to say on this site, but at this point, I don’t even care if you have a D/G romance going on because I’m just so interested in the story line itself.

What a unique take on Harry's feelings towards Ginny. The way you were able to express how he felt towards the Weasleys was very well done and, I think, extremely accurate. Great job on another wonderful chapter.

ohhh poor draco. It must be mortifying being paraded about by Weasley men stark naked. How I would have loved to have been a little fly on the wall of the burrow that day. You've captured all the characters so wonderfully and I am desparate to know what little punishment Arthur Weasley has in store for him. I doubt he'll let him off the hook too easily.

Author's Response: Oh Draco won't be let off the hook easily. Though his mortification could have been punishment enough - I'm sure he's just waiting for the ground to open up at this point. As for being a fly on the wall - wouldn't we all have liked to have spied on proceedings ;)

What an interesting take on Narcissa. It's always refreashing to see her in an an assertive role rather than simply hovering behind Lucius's wand. The characters were all well written and you've taken an idea that I would never have thought to apply to fanfiction and written such a strong story in just one chapter. Poor bare-assed Ginny. Her pride may have been wounded but I'm sure she'll see some just compensation later at the hands of the Malfoy heir. Can't wait to read the rest.

Author's Response: Ves says: Stop it; I'm blushing! Originally the story started with the line about Narcissa flashing everyone - I don't think the story could have gone wrong from there. Myn says: Nudity has a way of being a promising start, yeah. Myn further says: And Narcissa has to be assertive, really. Can you see a wilting flower standing up to Lucius and telling him where to send their son to school? I think not. So, that's our story and we're sticking to it.