It was supposed to be casual. They were never supposed to be serious about each other. And yet...Category: Completed Short Stories
Aww, it's every teenage girls' fantasy. Nicely done, and in only an hour!
Why was Ginny Weasley standing in a circle of robed and cloaked figures, swathed in black except for her uncovered left arm? Why was the littlest member of a family ruled by a muggle-obsessed patriarch awaiting being branded with the Dark Mark?Category: Completed Short Stories
You know, I'd never read that before -- or at least I don't think I have. It was really rather good. Good job!
I forgot to mention that I really like your depiction of Ginny here. She's strong and has her own mind. She isn't dependant on Draco in the traditional sense and finds her own causes to support (after she's done her research, of course!). I really like all of that. Really quite well done.
Ginny ponders the question of motherhood.Category: Long and Completed
Just a couple of little edits... "Author Weasley looked up" --You call Arthur "Author" a couple of different times. "And I know she loves me." --You have Narcissa talking in two paragraphs that could be joined together, the quotes are incorrect, and you have Narcissa saying that Draco loves Ginny and Ginny loves Narcissa...not Draco as I'm sure it was meant to read. Otherwise it's brilliant and very well written!
That was really good!
That was sweet. I liked it. It's made me happy...lol.
Ginny's trying to study, but the library is a very distracting place.Category: Completed Short Stories
I love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Oh yeah, did I mention that I love it?
Draco and Ginny begin their next great adventure - parenthood. This story is open ended, but technically complete since each piece is a stand alone.Category: Long and Completed
So funny I almost peed myself.
Continuation of And Baby Makes Three. Draco and Ginny are the parents of two young sons. See who wins the battle for control of the Malfoy household. A collection of cookies and stories. This story is open ended, but technically complete. Each chapter is a stand alone story.Category: Long and Completed
I love your series'. They are absolutely hysterical.
Just a small note that I hope you appreciate, as I appreciate it when people point these small things out to me...you have a couple of small errors left. The most obvious one is choosing a spelling of "Carraway/Caraway."
Draco broods; Ginny decides to help; Harry gets a shock.Category: Completed Short Stories
That was cute. I'm really pleased the brooding!Draco got something for once...lol.
Draco, Ginny, and a bit of angsty fluff.Category: Completed Short Stories
That was pretty good.
Ginny has had feelings for Harry for as long as she can remember. One summer, she decides to take things into her own hands and find out if she’s really in love with him, or if it’s just an infatuation. She gets her answer, and things spiral downhill from there.Category: Long and Completed
That was really good. I wish it continued past this point or that there was a smut cookie about Draco feeding Ginny and being all concerned. That would have been too cute.
“And please, explain to me why it is that I’m stuck in a – in a-“ “Broom closet.” His voice was soft and bitter.Category: Completed Short Stories
So, so hawt. I love Draco and Ginny in broom closets!
A Muggle Studies assignment leads Draco to the unenviable task of being a Weasley's cabana boy... But the Weasley has some plans of her own. It continues throughout her sixth year - but will it remain on a physical level, or become something more?Category: Works in Progress
Haha! That was great! I'd never read this series before. It's fantastic. (I overuse that word far too much...but on well...FANTASTIC!)
HHHHaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwtttttttttttttttttttttt! I love library!sex! It's absolutely...as I always say...FANTASTIC! I love the banter about children. I've experienced it a couple of times in my life, and I've found that sort of banter to be...shall we say...quite stimulating. *smirks*
Aww, I really enjoy how you make them lusty teenagers in the body of the chapter and then make them sweet at the end. I also really like how they are kind of wishy-washy about their feelings...that is also often how it is, isn't it? Nothing is ever just black and white, but wouldn't it be so much easier if it was?
I loves it! I have nothing else to say! Ha! Except that...and that...and...oh bugger it.
I can't believe they feel ASLEEP! There are just some things more important than sleep! What?! THERE ARE!
I don't know how exactly I feel about having sex on a toilet, but I think every adult woman at one time or another has figured that was the only private place for things such as that. Well, at least every woman I know well enough to discuss things like that...but they are all nymphomaniacs...lol.
I especially enjoyed Hermione pulling Ron into the second loo. What will Harry do inside his compartment all by his lonesome self?
Ginny and Hermione are tired of being dowdy, dateless losers. What are two intelligent girls to do? Why, do some research and formulate a plan. Snape cooks! Goyle cowers! Fun is had. D/G and R/H, written before OotPCategory: Long and Completed
Hermione and Ginny are content, huh? I bet with a line like that they aren't going to remain that way for very looonnnnggg! LOL!
Uh oh, taking Lockhart's advice...this cannot be good.
The R/Hr and D/G scenes missing from the larger story "The Plan", found in Novel-length storiesCategory: Completed Short Stories
Ha! I love the smart girl finally getting some action!
That was precious.
Well, there isn't any Ginny or Draco in there, but it was still pretty hot R/H sex!
That was cute. I enjoyed it.