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Relativity by Eustacia Vye    (Reviews - 20)

Time and space are fluid, they bend and twist according to specific rules. When the force of will can open up a singularity, it no longer follows those selfsame rules. And sometimes it's a girl that's the savior, not a boy.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Action, Crossover, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 28045 | Read count: 21191 | Published: Jan 15, 2007 | Updated: Feb 28, 2007
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Reviewer: paperbeatsrock Signed
Date: Jan 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Walking on the Moon

This is a really great premise, a cross-over featuring two very interesting worlds. I'm looking forward to finding out how you integrate magic and space travel. Mal and Zoe are spot on, and Wash's ghost is just so sad. I also like how you did not make River into an incomprehensible babbling thing. Her speech structure is complex and hard to understand, much like Luna's, but not Trelawney-grade. I look forward to reading more of this.

Author's Response: I do Riverspeak really well. I love writing in metaphor, so River\'s a great way to do that. I was hoping originally to have River interact with Luna in this fic, but alas, it wasn\'t meant to be.