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Real name: Debbie
Registered: Dec 20, 2006
Membership status: Member
Beta-reader: Yes

I am a Navy Mom with another child still in high school. My kids got me started on Harry Potter just about the time the third book came out and since then I have become an Avid Fan. I love fanfiction and have written a few stories and would like to explore creating stories in different ships.
Reviews by ElspethBates

The Masquerade by CCC    (Reviews - 65)

Sometimes, you just want to be someone else.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2011 | Read count: 5455 | Published: Nov 04, 2007 | Updated: Nov 04, 2007
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Reviewer: ElspethBates Signed
Date: Nov 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Strange whirling noises have been heard coming from the Malfoy Crypt.

That's one of the funniest lines I've read in a VERY long time!

Author's Response: Thank you. I was chuckling to myself when I thought of it. Glad to know I\'m not alone.

Fulfilling a Fantasy by CCC    (Reviews - 409)

When Harry leaves Ginny for Hermione, Draco decides it's time to fulfill an old fantasy. Twenty five is a little old to experience her first one night stand, but Ginny thinks she can handle it.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 10 | Word count: 25653 | Read count: 56053 | Published: Jan 13, 2008 | Updated: Sep 27, 2009
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Date: Feb 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This has got to be the funniest sexy story I've ever read!

Mine by Findabhiar Aery    (Reviews - 144)

Draco Malfoy watched Ginny Weasley for years. Now, ten years after leaving Hogwarts, he has his chance in the world of big business.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 31888 | Read count: 20177 | Published: Feb 28, 2008 | Updated: Jan 05, 2009
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Date: Jan 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh that was an unkind spot to end this chapter!!! I love this story and was absolutely delighted when I read the update notification! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: ElspethBates Signed
Date: Oct 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This is one of the cutest stories I've read in a long time! Keep up the good work!

If Only, If Only by Nakita    (Reviews - 27)

DH SPOILERS!! Three years after the war ends, the Malfoys are trying to make up for their past. What happens when they find out they have more to fix than they thought? And how exactly are the Weasleys involved?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 6147 | Read count: 5289 | Published: Mar 09, 2008 | Updated: Mar 15, 2008
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Reviewer: ElspethBates Signed
Date: Mar 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Dredging Up The Past

I liked this story so much I added it to my favorites so I will know when you update and then I went to your account and snagged your story 'Seeing What Lies Ahead'... just to see if you other stories are as good as this one!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am very flattered. I will tell you, seeing what lies ahead is not so hot. It was a long time ago, and I don\'t even think I could finish it now. But read on if you so choose. I am glad you like it so much. Chapter two should be up very soon!

Six Kisses, Two Fights, and a Matchmaker by Mynuet    (Reviews - 23)

A simple story of girl meets boy and pretends to be with boy to matchmake for another girl with another boy, only it all goes wrong before it goes right.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Luna Lovegood
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 6482 | Read count: 9915 | Published: May 15, 2008 | Updated: May 15, 2008
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Date: May 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: For Raspberry_Rave

Great little story! I caught the White Christmas reference, "... spit in her eye" and the Mrs. Doubtfire inference... "smell like a Yeti" and I caught the mention of the Borrowers. All of which made the story very enjoyable, because I like that kind of thing. It just makes me wonder if I got them all...

In Which These Two Smiles Meet by Embellished    (Reviews - 72)

Fresh out of Hogwarts, Ginny Weasley moves out of the Burrow to start life on her own. Along the way, she is thrust into wizarding high society and, before long, into the arms of Draco Malfoy. But are all the finely dressed witches and wizards she meets really as they seem?

Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 9 | Word count: 25125 | Read count: 51259 | Published: May 20, 2008 | Updated: Jun 05, 2008
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Reviewer: ElspethBates Signed
Date: May 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Part V

This story is like dessert! Sweet, a bit fluffy, and probably bad for you... but absolutely irresistible!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying the story, but I'm not sure it's bad for you! I hope not, anyway! Thanks for reading and for the review!

Faerie Tales and Dragonflies by gidge_8    (Reviews - 200)

Light-hearted and fun. Ginny Weasley finds herself the target of a bit of manipulation while helping Narcissa Malfoy plan her 25th anniversary ball until mischief and a little mayhem land her squarely in a Cinderella situation. Romance abounds, with a litle help from the faeries. Winner - Best Portrayal of Ginny Weasley - 2008 dg ficexchange.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 14 | Word count: 61347 | Read count: 90190 | Published: May 21, 2008 | Updated: Jul 08, 2008
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Date: May 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The Ball

I am absolutely loving this story! I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!

Reviewer: ElspethBates Signed
Date: Jul 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - The Grand Finale

I very much enjoyed your story from beginning to end! I hope you write more soon!

Author's Response: Two more are in progress. One is getting ready for a first pass at beta (if anyone wants to volunteer for the first pass). Thank you so much for letting me know you enjoyed it. These comments really mean a lot.

Where I Stand by Adelagia    (Reviews - 431)

Hired by the Malfoys to manage their public relations after a bout of bad press, Ginny discovers that some relationships just aren't meant to stay strictly professional.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Luna Lovegood, Narcissa Malfoy
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 13 | Word count: 33728 | Read count: 92743 | Published: Jun 28, 2008 | Updated: Jul 20, 2008
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Date: Jul 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Birthday at the Burrow

I just found your story and fell in love with it... can't wait to see what else you come up with!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: ElspethBates Signed
Date: Jul 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back

I love this story! It's lighthearted and fun! I really like the way you update so quickly too!

Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: ElspethBates Signed
Date: Jul 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Things Fall Apart

You are KILLING me!!!!!

Author's Response: Mission accomplished! :)

Contractual Obligations by gidge_8    (Reviews - 751)

Selling herself into a marriage contract, Ginny finds herself playing a deadly game, ultimately pitting her husband against her lover and a father against his son. Many twists and turns, depth and evil characters - and a long story of sweet and true love.

New! Epilogue is up! Yes, I know, the story has been "complete" for a couple of years, but this ending has been partially written for a long time and it ties up some loose ends.

Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Other Characters
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Non-consensual sex, Sexual Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 32 | Word count: 165632 | Read count: 101817 | Published: Sep 05, 2008 | Updated: Jan 05, 2014
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Reviewer: ElspethBates Signed
Date: Sep 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Appreciating the Unusual

I'm glad you had some time to write this little bit of fluff... It was just what I needed after the weekend I had! Thanks!

Author's Response: Oh!!! I do hope things get better for you quickly. Nice to know I created a good diversion. Sending hugs!
-G

Reviewer: ElspethBates Signed
Date: Feb 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Deciding to Breathe

This story is great! There is such a feeling of anticipation... with just a hint of suspense... I am really enjoying it!

Author's Response: Thank you! I definitely wanted to keep it a bit suspenseful. Hopefully, when things happen, it will take you a bit by surprise. I am so happy you are enjoying it!!!
G

Reviewer: ElspethBates Signed
Date: Apr 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - The Birthday Gift

Wow, what a cliffie! Poor Ginny... I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

Author's Response: The Slytherins all have their own little agendas (or agendae? hmmmm... must look that up) ... anyway ...
the fun is just beginning. Hope you were reading carefully, because there are many hints about what's to happen. :)
Best wishes!
-G

The World Inverted by rowan_greenleaf    (Reviews - 228)

Draco doesn't remember their past together, and now she's just a Weasley to him. Ginny will do anything -jump through all the hoops, pose as an interior decorator, tap dance -ANYTHING- to break the spell that erased his memory and make him love her again.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Narcissa Malfoy, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 8 | Word count: 43535 | Read count: 18588 | Published: Oct 14, 2008 | Updated: Feb 12, 2009
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Date: Nov 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: The Russian Period

I'm just loving this story... I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

Author's Response: Thank you for telling me, Elspeth! I'm glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: ElspethBates Signed
Date: Dec 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Starry Eyed Surprise

Absolutely delicious! I'm so glad I added this story to my fav's so I don't miss any updates!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for adding it to your favs! I'm glad you're enjoying it! Only two more chapters left....:D

Reviewer: ElspethBates Signed
Date: Jan 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: D Is For DRAGON

At last! I enjoyed your update so much I actually went back and read the whole thing from the beginning again! I love the way you have Narcissa just jump right in and start plotting to get Draco to fall in love with Ginny again... and I love a slightly jealous Draco!

Author's Response:

Thank you Elspeth! It's wonderful to hear that my story stands to be reread and re-enjoyed.^_^

And yeah, Narcissa is often seen as the villain, but I think of her more as a victim in this fic, so it was cool to have her help out for the sake of Draco. And yeah, jealous!Draco is always fun!

Thanks for reviewing!

Ginny Gets Her Man by CCC    (Reviews - 43)

Ginny plots to get what she wants.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1959 | Read count: 5882 | Published: Feb 02, 2009 | Updated: Feb 02, 2009
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Reviewer: ElspethBates Signed
Date: Feb 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you : )

Buttercup by MemoriesFade    (Reviews - 777)

Trying to escape the pain of her daughter's death, Ginny runs to Pennsylvania to start anew. Almost six years later, a man from her past walks back into her life, reopening old wounds and setting in motion a journey of discovery, sorrow, and joy.

Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Blaise Zabini (boy), D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Luna Lovegood, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 30 | Word count: 158108 | Read count: 119280 | Published: Feb 04, 2009 | Updated: Jan 20, 2011
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Date: Feb 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Strawberry Cupcakes with Sprinkles

Great little story line! I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with next!

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Date: Feb 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Mint Chocolate Cookies

I think your baking ideas are a little too mouth-watering! I want to visit that bakery! Great story... I'm already looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: I feel like that when I'm writing. It's really awful because I'm going on a diet soon. When that happens, I'll need to start writing about lowfat things. I mean, a girl can only resist so much.

Author's Response: I feel like that when I'm writing. It's really awful because I'm going on a diet soon. When that happens, I'll need to start writing about lowfat things. I mean, a girl can only resist so much.

Reviewer: ElspethBates Signed
Date: Mar 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: German Chocolate Cake with Fudge Icing

I really love your story! You have a really great touch and I just love the idea of Pansy and Ron, next to Draco and Ginny it's my favorite match.

I'm sorry for your loss and hope you are doing well.

Author's Response: I am doing alright, now. Thank you. I appreciate it. I do love Ron and Pansy together, especially in this particular story. I always feel like Draco/Ginny is a gateway relationship for Ron/Pansy. So, I would like to try it where Ron/Pansy is the gateway for Draco/Ginny. But we'll see how that works out in the future chapters.

Reviewer: ElspethBates Signed
Date: Apr 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Golden Cake with White Buttercup Icing

This story is just like the confections Ginny sells in her bakery... utterly delicious!

Author's Response: Haha, thank you.

Reviewer: ElspethBates Signed
Date: Apr 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chocolate Dipped Cookies

Serena is an adorable child... you really bring her to life. I'm glad you updated so quickly, I do love to follow a good story! I'm looking forward to seeing just how you bring Draco and Ginny together!

Author's Response: Thank you. Serena is this spunky little thing with an honest heart. She's there to be on both Draco's side and Ginny's side, rather than one. In my eyes, Serena is supposed to, in a way, prove how reformed the Malfoys have become because of the way they grew her. That is one of my main intentions for her character. Another one is because she's just cute.

Reviewer: ElspethBates Signed
Date: Apr 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chocolate Muffin

They say that hunger is the best sauce... woman... you've got me starving! LOL

Author's Response: Lol...it's funny because I'm writing about the bakery...bakery...food...hungry...get it? Thank you for the lovely compliment. I hope my attempt at humor wasn't too not funny.