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Reviews by mchen

A Bed Made for One by Sarea Okelani    (Reviews - 121)

And in the darkness bind them.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3006 | Read count: 15146 | Published: May 22, 2004 | Updated: May 22, 2004
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Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: Jan 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: A Bed Made for One

Gorgeous, stunning. I really loved the mood you created. The last line and the summary, in particular, are perfect.

The Danger of Tequila by Mynuet    (Reviews - 12)

How did one round of beer lead to Draco and Ginny being here, on this bed of sand in Montego Bay?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2699 | Read count: 3372 | Published: Jun 06, 2004 | Updated: Jun 06, 2004
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Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: Jan 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: How'd I Wind Up in Jamaica?

Great story, and I didn't find it overly confusing. Yes, when the past/present change initially took place, but I thought you made it very clear, and my confusion came from my not expecting the change, rather than any failing in your writing. I too, wonder how they got to Jamaica, but hey, magic! Exquisitely written, as have been all of your stories -- I can't wait to read the rest. Keep up the great work.

Sleepwalker by Mynuet    (Reviews - 11)

Ginny Weasley doesn't believe she dreams. Draco Malfoy knows he does. Who is it that walks through dreams?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Horror, Mystery, Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 1307 | Read count: 1397 | Published: Oct 11, 2004 | Updated: Oct 11, 2004
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Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: Jan 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: One

Judging by the date this fic was posted, I suspect my plea is futile, but please do continue it!

Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: Jan 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: One

Judging by the date this fic was posted, I suspect my plea is futile, but please do continue it!

Watching by obssessedmadwoman    (Reviews - 42)

Dean Thomas likes to watch people.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 759 | Read count: 3080 | Published: Feb 11, 2005 | Updated: Feb 11, 2005
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Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: Jan 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great little fic. However, I found the inconsistent verb tenses -- the use of both the past and present tense almost randomly throughout the piece, even within a single sentence -- were very distracting, and took me out of the story. But otherwise, a very good story; I especially liked the tone, and the impassive observer angle.

Clocks by EclipsedPlanet    (Reviews - 251)

Ginny Weasley and Draco Malfoy are stuck together at the Order Headquarters. Will they find friendship? Something more? DG
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 17 | Word count: 44216 | Read count: 83140 | Published: Feb 23, 2006 | Updated: Feb 09, 2013
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Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: Feb 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Jealousy

Just spent the last few hours reading this from the beginning - you've kept me up far later than any responsible person should be on a work night. But I couldn't stop reading, wanting to know what happened next!

Obviously I am loving it - the growing relationship between Draco and Ginny, the suspense of the plot. when I got to the last chapter and realized out want the end, so many feelings: happiness there would be more (hopefully a lot more), frustration that I would have to wait, and sheer anticipation.

Please update soon!

Deny by Black Alnair    (Reviews - 20)

One-shot. The war has finally ended, but there are still entanglements to work out, especially between Draco Malfoy and Ginny Weasley.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1088 | Read count: 3590 | Published: Mar 30, 2006 | Updated: Mar 31, 2006
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Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: Jan 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Deny

A one shot?!? I must protest -- this is the perfect start to a long fic: how does Ginny react? What happens to Draco in Italy? How does he try to move on? What brings them back together? I would love to see Ginny repentent and chasing Draco, finally wearing him down, unlike so, so many fics that are the other way 'round.

Author's Response: As I\'ve mentioned earlier, I had plans for continuing this fic that I\'m afraid will not come to fruitation. However, if you\'re curious about what I had planned, you are welcome to email me. Thanks for reviewing! I also like the idea of Ginny doing the chasing too - but I\'ve done or contemplated both sides.

More Than One Way Home by Vesica    (Reviews - 80)

Written for the 2006 DG_Smutakkah fic exchange. It hasnít always been an easy road for them, but sometimes it takes getting really good and lost to find the way home again.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU, Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 13761 | Read count: 26039 | Published: Jan 02, 2007 | Updated: Jan 30, 2007
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Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: Jan 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - I Love You.

Nice little story, but it seems you may have rushed the last two chapters out -- your verbs go back and forth between the past and present tense almost randomly. Other than that, a well-thought-out, well-written story.

Author's Response: Drat! That would be a product of an earlier version. I thought I had caught most of those but thanks for letting me know it needs another edit! Glad you enjoyed it! ~Ves

Under by tudorrose1533    (Reviews - 52)

Award-winning fic from the D/G Fic Exchange on LJ. "His body lies cold and still beside her; his mouth is open, an O, and his hair is drying, feathery, in wisps, over his closed eyes. That fair skin; that nearly white hair. Dead, he looks so young...."

The dark and tragic story of a journey Under...based on the Greek myth of Orpheus and Eurydice.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Blood, Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 11479 | Read count: 3710 | Published: Jan 08, 2007 | Updated: Jan 08, 2007
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Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: Jan 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Under

Stupendous. Thank you.

Drabbles by Mynuet    (Reviews - 133)

Non-connected drabbles from varied D/G prompts, which aren't long enough to post separately.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU, Hogwarts-era, Past AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 14 | Word count: 7368 | Read count: 44118 | Published: Apr 11, 2007 | Updated: Jun 27, 2007
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Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: May 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Lullaby

Fantastic, as always.

Impulse by Mynuet    (Reviews - 37)

Draco acts impulsively.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2038 | Read count: 5486 | Published: May 09, 2007 | Updated: May 09, 2007
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Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: May 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: A Return

As always, you give good story. I really enjoyed the light, playful tone. Please do continue the tale!

Ten Years Later, or Pud's Rewrite of the DH Epilogue by Rainpuddle    (Reviews - 193)

*DH SPOILERS* Consider yourself warned.

This is my attempt to correct some of the wrongs...
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1128 | Read count: 10292 | Published: Jul 23, 2007 | Updated: Jul 23, 2007
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Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: Jan 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Brava! Thanks so much for counteracting the tacked-on, unnecessary, petty, trite, intellectually condescending piece of crap jkr foisted on us. And thanks for doing it in such a Dallas-rrific way!

The Witches' Wager by Yazethet    (Reviews - 79)

Five witches agree to an unusual wager: to be the last in their group to marry. 
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 3897 | Read count: 4750 | Published: Aug 26, 2007 | Updated: Sep 07, 2007
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Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: Sep 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Three Weddings

What a great start! I love that you've found a believable way to throw together characters who would never otherwise have any relationship with one another. This certainly looks like it'll be an interesting story, and a different one. Can't wait to read the rest!

Demented Cherubs by CCC    (Reviews - 452)

Valentine's Day brings a surprise, but not the one Ginny was hoping for.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 15 | Word count: 34511 | Read count: 62342 | Published: Sep 12, 2007 | Updated: Jul 04, 2010
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Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: Sep 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great, fun start -- love the cherubs! Maybe I missed something, but I don't understand why Ginny started discussing Hermione's views on contraceptive clamps when Draco asked Ginny if she'd heard from Hermione. That small wrinkle aside, this looks like it will be a very enjoyable story.

Author's Response: Thank you. I\'ll have to go check that part.

Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: Mar 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Fantastic! Write more, soon -- you took far too long since the last chapter! And is it weird to say I rather like Pansy in this story?

His Hands by livvyharris    (Reviews - 38)

She knew what the Order would think, if they could see her: Poor Ginny Weasley, who had been seduced by darkness. Well, the truth was, darkness hadn’t really had to try very hard.

First in the 'His' trilogy
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: His
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 826 | Read count: 6292 | Published: Nov 24, 2007 | Updated: Nov 24, 2007
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Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: Dec 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: His Hands

If this really is your first fic, then you absolutely *must* continue to write! This is a great piece -- a unique take on the predictable "good girl/bad boy" theme, with a tone that's true to the characters. I hope to see more from you, and soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I\'m very glad you liked it. :) I wasn\'t actually planning on continuing, but it seems that I will be anyway, lol. There should be a companion coming soon, I\'m just waiting for it to get approved right now.

Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: Dec 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: His Hands

If this really is your first fic, then you absolutely *must* continue to write! This is a great piece -- a unique take on the predictable "good girl/bad boy" theme, with a tone that's true to the characters. I hope to see more from you, and soon!

Author's Response: thank you! the next two stories in the series, His Hands and Traitors, are now up.

His Camellias by livvyharris    (Reviews - 21)

Companion/Sequel to His Hands, but both can be read on their own.

“My mother grows camellias in her greenhouse. They’re my favorite. I always thought they were the color of blood, but they’re the exact color of your hair. Whenever I see them now, I think of you.”

Second in the 'His' Trilogy
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: His
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 639 | Read count: 4580 | Published: Dec 08, 2007 | Updated: Dec 08, 2007
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Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: Dec 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: His Camellias

Simple and devestating. Lovely. I'm very glad you decided to keep on writing, and look forward to anything else you do in the future.

Author's Response: That was exactly what I was going for. I hadn\'t honestly planned to keep writing, but I keep thinking of more ideas, so I guess I\'m going to keep writing. :) The Prequel is definitely happenening, though it\'s probably still over a week away. Thank you for the review and I\'m glad you liked the story.

The Weasley Child by imelda    (Reviews - 157)

Scorpius Malfoy's parents were never around, and left him in the care of his nanny, Ginny Weasley. He grew up blissfully under her care, brought up with the Weasley ideals of courage, honor, and loyalty. Then when he turns 7, his father comes home, and Scorpius' simple world falls apart.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 12687 | Read count: 15831 | Published: Mar 16, 2008 | Updated: Jun 14, 2010
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Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: Mar 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start! I'm not usually a fan of first-person narratives, but this is working, a testament to how well you're pulling it off. And judging by some of your responses to other reviews, you're going to make us suffer more, and worse; please just make it worth it in the end! ;)

Author's Response: Thank you!! I actually don\'t usually write first-person, either. But somehow it seemed appropriate for Scorpius\' voice and for his story. As for the suffering...well...I\'ll do my best to make it worth it!

A Slight Misunderstanding by LuvWabbit    (Reviews - 49)

Ginny recieves the opportunity of a lifetime from our favorite ferret, but there's just one little catch.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 2578 | Read count: 3803 | Published: May 02, 2008 | Updated: Apr 06, 2009
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Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: May 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Malfoy's Mistake

Great start, looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: Apr 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: 2: The Contract

Ooh, I sense a little Shakespearean cross-dressing love story coming... great start, can't wait to see what comes next!

The Nineteen Years in Between by rrunawayromance    (Reviews - 25)

Nineteen years after the Deathly Hallows, Harry and Ginny are married but their eldest son is just twelve years old. This story is about those missing seven years: six of which Ginny spent slapping, snogging and falling in love with Draco Malfoy.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1584 | Read count: 728 | Published: May 07, 2008 | Updated: May 08, 2008
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Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: May 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Nineteen Years Later

Fantastic start -- can't wait to see where you take us with your story, although I of course don't like the end we all know is coming!

Contractual Obligations by gidge_8    (Reviews - 751)

Selling herself into a marriage contract, Ginny finds herself playing a deadly game, ultimately pitting her husband against her lover and a father against his son. Many twists and turns, depth and evil characters - and a long story of sweet and true love.

New! Epilogue is up! Yes, I know, the story has been "complete" for a couple of years, but this ending has been partially written for a long time and it ties up some loose ends.

Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Other Characters
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Non-consensual sex, Sexual Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 32 | Word count: 165632 | Read count: 97749 | Published: Sep 05, 2008 | Updated: Jan 05, 2014
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Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: Sep 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Facing the Consequences

Fantastic and unique premise! And nicely written, too. Can't wait to see what comes next!

Finding Color by Mell8    (Reviews - 141)

Ginny always knew there was something wrong with her eyes.
Category: Completed Fiction
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Action, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 10 | Word count: 24419 | Read count: 45953 | Published: Nov 09, 2008 | Updated: Jul 16, 2009
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Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: Nov 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Part Two

What an original, fantastic premise!! Can't wait to see where this goes.

Reviewer: mchen Signed
Date: Jul 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue

That was great! Loved the completely unique premise, and your writing. I really liked how you made Draco & Ginny's relationship start and develop quite believably. Thanks, and keep writing!