COMPLETE! Strolling through Diagon Alley Lucius Malfoy comes across a little boy who could have been Draco's twin. Has his family tree been expanded, without his knowledge? Has Draco been keeping secrets? Or is he oblivious to the fact that he may have an heir?Category: Long and Completed
That chapter was amazing, really. I am so happy that it was that long, because I don't think that I could handle another chapter of the two of them fighting. Your writting skills NEVER cease to completly blow me away. Every fiber of emotion that goes into this story, I can feel, and that rarly happens for me and NEVER happens in fan fiction. You truly are doing an amazing job with this story and I hope that you update soon. Although, if we have to wait awhile for the next update, the wait will be worth it....they always are!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I wanted to end the chapter on a happy note, I couldn't stand them being at odds with one another any longer either :D
I love that the Malfoys that you portray are different than the ones we see in most fan fictions. In most fan fics, they seem to have a loveless marriage and it is really quite depressing. I know that we really don't know what their marriage is like, but its nice to think that it is a loving one!
Author's Response: Thank you. I like to think of them having a loving marriage too. It's all very proper in public, but behind closed doors they're just normal people with extremely good manners ;)
Wonderful chapter! I think you are the only author who can pull off a believable Pansy/Ron pair! Very conviencing!
Author's Response: Thanks! I rather like Ron/Pansy together, they compliment Draco/Ginny nicely :D
Once again, you have written an amazing chapter. I love that Draco cares so much about his kids (and I really can't wait to see how he acts with his new baby. B.T.W., do we know yet when Ginny is due? I was just wondering. She's not that far along yet, is she?) I loved that you wrote in some Draco/Ron ineraction too! You gotta love those moments. You have really written a Draco that is conviencing! Is that hard for you to do? I just know that I wouldn't be able to do it. Okay, I have one more question, then I'll leave you alone: How many more chapters are you anticipating? The only reason I ask is becasue I ABSOLUTLY ADORE this story and I will be very sad to see it end (unelss, of course, you write a sequel :D) Anyways, if the answer is alot, I will be estacitic. If the answer is not many, then I still have enjoyed the amazing story that you have given us all!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Draco is totally enamoured with his kids. Ginny is due sometime in December and she's currently about seven weeks pregnant. I actually find Draco quite easy to write, especially when he's interacting with Ron ;) This fic will go up to the wedding, then there'll be a sequel that will encompass the start of their marriage and the newest Malfoy. I have plot ideas extending far into the future for this little family so there's a lot more to come :D
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G chapter. See...it was so good I couldn't just type it, I had to spell it out! :D It cracks me up that all three women in the wedding are pregnant! I only just realized it this chapter! I kind of feel sorry for Draco, because he still seems a little oblivious as far as his children are concerened. Oh well, I guess he only became a father two months ago, whereas Ginny has been a mother for a little over five years...guess she has a few up on him. AND NARCISSA!!!! AHHHH! When she went back to speak to Galor, I just knew what she was going to do, but I really hoped that I was wrong! I can't believe she did that!!! I really hope that someone confronts her about that!!! You did a really good job writting that, because you had be seething by the end of it. Oh and I can wait for, what did you call it? Buck and Hen night! LMAO! That is going to be the funniest thing I am ever going to read, (at least I suspect) as long as the Weasley men are involved! When can we be expecting that chapter. Well, sorry for such the long review. Great chapter (as always)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Draco is still groping around in the dark on the parenting thing, but he's learning ;) Ginny will be far from impressed when she discovers Narcissa bought the dress and she'll let her know :D
Oh sorry. I meant I CAN'T wait for that chapter. Way excited to read it!
Author's Response: I knew what you meant *wink* It's still a few chapters off, but I'm already planning the antics in my devious mind *giggles*
“Too bad we are enemies Weasel; you would make a charming addition to my entourage.” He smirked down at her. “From where I’m sitting, having you in my harem would be quite a thrill as well.”Category: Completed Short Stories
AHHH! I liked that alot. It's hard to read an original fan fic....but I think I just did! Great job!