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Reviews by Paria

Something's Missing by Maggs    (Reviews - 28)

Ginny decides to reform a rake as research for her decided career as a romance novelist. She settles on the Slytherin Sex God.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 4572 | Read count: 1185 | Published: Apr 03, 2005 | Updated: May 13, 2005
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Date: May 23, 2005 Title: Chapter 3: Part Two: Into The Woods

Excellent job so far. I just have the teensiest thing that bothered me about this chapter. Draco's shift from being friendly to Ginny to snapping at her was so abrupt and out of no where that it felt really unnatural and choppy. Draco as a whole is kinda confusing me. He seems a bit OOC, though I understand that it works for the sake of the story. Anyways, love your plot and nj overall.

Author's Response: Yeah. I'm working on Draco's OOC ness... It's always been my biggest problem. I re-watched all three movies and have been looking at all the Draco bits in the books to see how I can improve him...

A Momentary Thing by scrummybunny    (Reviews - 13)

When Tom Riddle is a factor Ginny Weasley's life once again, she is determined to find out the connection he has to her. This, her growing friendships with Luna and Neville, an unlikely relationship with Draco, and helping out her fellow man make this year interesting for our Miss Weasley.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Mystery
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 7667 | Read count: 12076 | Published: Jun 14, 2005 | Updated: Jun 30, 2005
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Reviewer: Paria Signed
Date: Jul 11, 2005 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I was sort of skeptical to read this because I have read to many Draco and Ginny stories with an addition of Tom Riddle that were just crap. This, however, was very good. I especially love the way you chose to go about Ginny's conflicted feelings about Tom and how you characterized Tom.