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The Lush Life by Vesanmyn    (Reviews - 657)

A Vesica/Mynuet Collaboration. If Ginny had even the slightest inkling of what the day would bring, she probably would have called in sick. A disastrous press conference proved to be no match for the spin doctoring talents of Lush's chief and Ginny finds herself catapulted from being a lowly intern to the very eye of the storm, living a double life as a careerwitch and glamorous front woman for a racy new line. Throw in a few A-list events, a few dozen crises, an endless promotional tour with her new co-worker and the last person she wanted to spend time with, and a mystery waiting back home that neither of them may be able to solve….Every day's an adventure when you're living the Lush Life!
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 13 | Word count: 27031 | Read count: 82297 | Published: Jan 05, 2005 | Updated: Apr 28, 2007
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Reviewer: adali Signed
Date: May 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen – The Official Dessert of Super Secret Meetings

Beautifully done, as always. I don't know how you two do it, but it always comes together seamlessly, so it seems like it's being written by one perfect, super-awesome writer (too many adjectives, I know, but you deserve them).

Author's Response: Ves says: I don\'t think we know how it comes together either! I can’t tell anymore on past chapters what bits were me and what bits were Myn.\r\n

\r\nMyn says: We couldn\'t even really look it up, I don\'t think. Eh, we\'ll just stay melded. Melded is good.\r\n

Hesperides' Apple by ogygiasylph    (Reviews - 871)

When Ginny Weasley becomes Draco Malfoy's wife, he suspects neither her true identity nor her dangerous motives. But when all Hell breaks lose and their relationship takes unexpected turns, there is more at stake than preserving their marriage--namely, preserving their lives.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Narcissa Malfoy, Neville Longbottom, Other Characters
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Blood, Character Death, Graphic Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 33 | Word count: 166850 | Read count: 239464 | Published: Jun 29, 2006 | Updated: Sep 17, 2009
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Reviewer: adali Signed
Date: Apr 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity

I'm definitely interested to see where you're going with this. You've done a wonderful job of catching attention with your first chapter.

Two things I will point out, though: I think you meant 'subsequent to their registration', rather than 'posterior to registration', since registration doesn't really have a front and back. Second, 'which consists in the permanent expulsion' would make more sense if replaced with 'penalty; that is, permanent...' or, if you must use 'to consist', 'consisting of' (terribly sorry, but it's one of my least favorite verbs, and even having a least favorite verb is just to weird, so...)

Anyhow, I shall now toodle back to the story.

Secrets of Slytherin Royalty by Sunfire    (Reviews - 110)

Draco and Pansy are the perfect dungeon duo, but a secret from their past will change everything for them, and for any Gryffindors that get caught in the middle of it.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Narcissa Malfoy, Pansy Parkinson
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 11 | Word count: 20010 | Read count: 61946 | Published: Feb 15, 2007 | Updated: Mar 13, 2007
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Reviewer: adali Signed
Date: May 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow. Way to take something totally far-fetched, and present it so it works perfectly. Amazing!

Faerie Tales and Dragonflies by gidge_8    (Reviews - 200)

Light-hearted and fun. Ginny Weasley finds herself the target of a bit of manipulation while helping Narcissa Malfoy plan her 25th anniversary ball until mischief and a little mayhem land her squarely in a Cinderella situation. Romance abounds, with a litle help from the faeries. Winner - Best Portrayal of Ginny Weasley - 2008 dg ficexchange.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 14 | Word count: 61347 | Read count: 90215 | Published: May 21, 2008 | Updated: Jul 08, 2008
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Reviewer: adali Signed
Date: Jun 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Sunday Date

This is really lovely. Please, do not take it as a criticism when I say that it can be difficult to find a unique plot line. Your writing of it, however, is fabulous: clean, elegant, and with excellent flow. I especially like how you've captured the characters through their dialog, so that the reader can see both their personality and their personal growth. I look forward to reading more from you.

Author's Response: Wow. Thank you. Reviews like this are the ones that really, really motivate me. And, don\'t worry, I\'ve got 2 more in the works. I don\'t post until I\'m basically done with them. I have a thing against posting unfinished fics.