Ginny is twenty four, and the war rages on. Draco is a Death Eater, and he needs her help. Of course, he doesn't give her a choice. Now she's surrounded by the enemy. She begins to see that not everything is black and white. Can she come to terms with her new role in his life?Category: Works in Progress
Ah...it starts with a brush of the cheek....
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This story had a great start. A lot of things are happening all at once and although I sometimes hate when a story starts out rushed, I understand why this one is. War can be a catalyst for everything.
I enjoyed reading your story and I can't wait for the next installment!
Author's Response: Thank you. I think the war will push this story along at a fast pace. I\'m not good at slow drawn out build ups.
Great chapter as always. Yes, tis true. Every man has a dark side. I loved Draco's warm nature in this chapter. Ginny is really trying hard to settle into her role as mother and protector of Leo. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you. I\'m glad you like it. : )
Ah, what a lovely story. It's going very nicely. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next at the party or anything that's going to be included in the next chapter. Waiting patiently (impatiently)....
Author's Response: I\'ll type as fast as I can : )
What a horrible way to end a great evening. Poor Ginny. Everything seems so bleak for her. A great chapter. I liked the little draco/ginny moments.
Author's Response: Thank you. I couldn\'t let it end too happy. There is too much story left to go.
Another intriguing chapter! And Leo has grown on me.
Author's Response: Thank you. Leo is the ideal baby. Most are a bit more fussy and gooey.
That was a good chapter. Longer than the previous (i think). Draco and Ginny are getting closer which is good. But the forces all around them are getting harder to deal with. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I think the darkness will continue and that is what will push them together. : )
Oh crap, a mindless Hermione?? That's scary as hell. I can't believe Draco asked that question....and then I can believe it, because it just makes the story even more interesting. I really hope we find more info on this 'mindless spell' as I like to call it....
Author's Response: I think you\'ll find out more about Hermione soon. Given how smart she is, I think she\'ll be able to relearn quickly and enjoy giving Snape trouble.
Man! What the heck happened now! Every time they get close....who? Who wants them apart so much?? And I do hope Leo is alive! I love that baby!
Author's Response: The baby will be fine. D and G will suffer a bit longer.
I don't know why but the last sentence, to me, is really funny. It's not supposed to be but I can't help it. Anyway, thank goodness for the powers elves possess or else...I don't even want to think about it. I'm just glad that all of them are safe....or until another (?) Draco appeared...
Finally! Geez, for a moment there, I thought the house elf would have ruined it. Well, this was a pleasant chapter compared to the other ones we've had. I know this won't last forever...
Author's Response: Thank you. I thought it was time for them to get a little relief.
Well, Hermione seems....a lot OOC in this story and then...not really. She is still pretty smart but her comment on Voldie is not what I expected. But, I know, she had to change to live in Voldie's society. As for Severus/Hermione? Heh. I've read some stories that contain this ship. I find it alright. And Hermione's theory of Snape falling for her seems plausible. Well, I can't wait for more, that's all I have to say.
Yeah, I would do what Ginny plans to do. As for Hermione, I really don't want her to die. I've never been much of a Snape/Hermione fan but I think in this story its cute. So, Hermione dying is not really much fun for me. But in that kind of society , what can you do?
Yikes, the beginning of one of those D/G eruptions. Great job with the birthday party although it did seem kind of awkward...can't wait for more!
Well, that's not really answering the question, is it, Draco? Oh and Ginny's mood swings are starting. Great chapter, as always, and I cannot wait to see what next will come up.
Ginny has a moment of abject stupidity. Now what is she supposed to do?Category: Long and Completed
Darn! No more? I'm really liking this so far. I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you. I will update asap.
Ah! So short! But still, a lovely little chapter. Cannot wait for more!
Damn! This story is hot! I just can't get enough of it....and its just chapter 6. I don't understand. How can I love a story that I've just started reading? It boggles the mind. I guess that means you're doing a great job. Can't wait for the rest.
Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely compliment. : )
Category: Works in ProgressDavid Malfoy and his twin sister Diana have a serious problem. After one of their parents' many heated rows, Draco and Ginny Malfoy part. It's worse than ever. Everybody is talking about divorce and even their elder sister has given up hope that their stubborn parents will ever get together again. Diana and David decide that there's only one way to save their parents' marriage: Magic! But something goes horribly wrong and David is transferred to the year 1997, while the seventeen-year-old Draco takes his place in the future. Now it's up to Draco to save his future marriage with the help of his daughters. Pre-HBP!
boy, that was depressing. Draco, a cheater, horrible! I can't believe Ginny forgave him....
Oh, this is a wonderful read. And although you've only written a few chapters, I'm in love with it. Good job!
I flinched at every word. I hate the arguments. The children need to do something...quickly.
When Ginny returns home after months of work she sees that many things are different and, unable to cope, she flees from the Burrow. What she doesn't know is that things in her own life are about to take an interesting turn when she runs into Draco Malfoy.Category: Long and Completed
That was just hilarious! I'm still laughing. Bill is really getting on my nerves. How is it that he's goes AWOL over every little thing? Harry...pshh...don't let me get started on him.
Is he jealous?? I really think he is. Harry is so.....ugh! I know that's not the best way to describe it but that's what I'm feeling right now.
Hm...not doing too well with the fact that Draco and Ginny had a disagreement. But it would be extremely weird if they didn't. Very good chapter. Can't wait for more!
uh-uh. That doesn't sound good. Is Ginny going to say it back?? Oh, what's going to happen?! Dying for an update...
Ooh! Ooh! From one climatic scene to the next. You sure move fast. But I love the drama and the suspense. Keep it up! As usual, you have me asking, 'what's going to happen next?'