Good story. Interesting take on the Bad Ginny motif. I have a hard time believing that theirs would be a bloodless revolution and that, in the end, it would be sunshine and rainbows. But I rather like that, thinking that while they are doing what they're doing for the common good, they're in something of a downward spiral (a la Voldemort). And as another reviewer said, I like Ginny being a strong character, manifesting her own destiny as opposed to how she is often painted in contrast to Draco.

One criticism, and it is small, I didn't really like the idea of the foremost part of giving birth to their child was that Ginny got beautiful jewelry. It seemed a little off and materialistic compared with the rest of a great fic. Like I said though, very minor criticism, probably not worth mentioning. Thanks for the story.

Author's Response: *goes back to read that bit* You\'re right, it does come off as materialistic. I meant it to emphasize the ongoing attraction between them, despite the figure alterations of pregnancy and all the related stresses that go with it, but that didn\'t quite come across.

Not a review of the story, but just a small part in it. Ginny pushes her wand into Hermione's "adam's apple". But, by definition, only men have adam's apples, not women (a la Adam and Eve). This, admittedly, distracted me from the rest of the story.

Author's Response: Hmm...I was pretty sure that every human had an adam\'s apple. But then again, science is definitely not my forte, so you\'re probably right.