Name: Boogum reviewed
. on Jan 10, 2011 04:36 pm
I've read this before, but I don't think I reviewed. Anyway, I liked this little prelude. Simple, but very telling. You managed to capture Draco's younger personality perfectly: imitating his father, but still uncertain.
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
. on Aug 08, 2006 01:31 pm
~WOW. I love the tie in to the books~
Name: hermionesclone14 reviewed
. on May 28, 2005 04:51 pm
This was really good.I liked the irony of Draco saying he might mention it to Crabbe and Goyle when he showed them the article because that was when Ron and Harry would have been Crabbe and Goyle.I would have loved to see Rons reaction.He freaked when Draco talked about 'mione dying but,if he found out draco kissed his sister......ohh that would be bad. :)
Name: ronlover reviewed
. on Dec 22, 2004 01:17 pm
This is very interesting. I think you should continue with this story. :)
Happy Holiday!
Name: imelda reviewed
. on Dec 15, 2004 06:27 pm
OK, I know I reviewed before, but I've been rereading and I just realized another great part of this fic--you do a really good job or showing how young they are. With Ginny's not-nearly-witty comebacks and Draco's imitation of his father and not knowing what to do when kissing. Like I said before, very different from your other fics, and very effective!
Name: where_is_truth reviewed
. on Dec 14, 2004 01:36 pm
I just realized I never reviewed this. So now I am reviewing it.
Probably my favorite part of this whole piece was the sort of waver in his bravado, the idea of the emulation of his father as a shaky concept. The ending was well-done.
Now I want to read the continuation. Now. Right now. :-)
Name: ScarletAngel reviewed
. on Dec 01, 2004 11:37 am
Favorite line? " He had taken it, like the ruthless conqueror he had been raised to be."
Loved the little references to Tom, and to the article he was going to show Crabbe and Goyle. It was so priceless seeing him at a loss, not knowing what to do after he grabbed her hand. Nice save by him, by the way. Hee.
Excellent ficlet!
Name: halfdemon reviewed
. on Nov 30, 2004 04:49 am
Draco was completely adorable in all his Malfoy manner. But of course Malfoy's aren't adorable they're menacing...*snigger* his attempts at imitating Lucuis are classic. And teasing us with this ficlet is very ebil. Loved it!
Name: draconianshadow reviewed
. on Nov 28, 2004 08:26 pm
Oh wow! I loved it. Especially when Draco said "Don't swoon, Weasley..." Denial isn't just a river in Egypt, Draco, it's a way of life.
Name: DracosLover reviewed
. on Nov 28, 2004 12:42 pm
I like it..you should like make another one like Ginnys first kiss from her POV,i think its very tho and you kept Draco in charecter very good,:)
Name: Erised reviewed
. on Nov 27, 2004 02:53 pm
The last sentence is really quite a shock. It reminds me very much of a ditty: short, sweet, and entertaining the whole way through.
Name: Draco Luva reviewed
. on Nov 27, 2004 11:07 am
Chehe! cute, very cute. I loves it.
Name: Fern reviewed
. on Nov 27, 2004 09:24 am
Fabulous job! It made me all warm and tingly inside. :) And yet you kept Draco in character, which I LOVE. I just love it. Lack of words partially caused by the fact that I'm at work, and should not be reading fan fic. @_@
Name: kt Jeff reviewed
. on Nov 27, 2004 04:31 am
Wowza..absolutely love it, it's really cute! lovely refreshment from most of the D/G crap that pops up.
Name: dragonsangel68 reviewed
. on Nov 27, 2004 02:18 am
he might do it again himself someday - oh he definitely will once he works out what he's doing, of course *giggles* Wonderfully innocent!
Name: medea reviewed
. on Nov 26, 2004 08:59 pm
Came from LJ to here! Ohhh that Draco is... well Slytherin-ish in every way! That flash in her eyes... Hmm, will there be some kind of future fic that comes out of this one shot?
Name: Elle Blessingway reviewed
. on Nov 26, 2004 08:08 pm
Please don't let this be a little one-shot Christmas fluff for us! It's begging to be extended...and so are we, your faithful readers...Great Job and keep up the good work! Can't wait to see anything else you have to write!!
Name: Lauren reviewed
. on Nov 26, 2004 07:36 pm
I don't unusally go for D/G fics [don't shoot me] but I enjoyed this very much.
Author's Response: Hee! No shooting, just gratitude and a vague wondering how you ended up here.
Name: waiyza reviewed
. on Nov 26, 2004 07:36 pm
Oooh. I really like the Malfoy you've portrayed here...I like how he's not yet the cool-confident Draco most fanfic's portray him. I love how he's almost as insecure and unsure as Ginny herself. Really lovely!
~Wai
http://livejournal.com/~waiyza
Name: Bebe reviewed
. on Nov 26, 2004 06:16 pm
"he pushed her backwards a step and then leaned forward. It was over quickly, because he didn't know what to do and he didn't want her to find out, so as soon as he'd smacked his lips over hers he stepped back and smoothed a hand over his hair. "Don't swoon, Weasley, we were under the mistletoe. It's not like you're my girlfriend or anything."
Honestly Shar, even your fluff is edgy. I love the way that you write! Really, I do!
Name: nut_shell reviewed
. on Nov 26, 2004 06:09 pm
Ooh! It's an interesting idea. I love the references to the diary. And I loved this: "It's not like you're my girlfriend or anything." It's just the right amount of awkward.
Name: imelda reviewed
. on Nov 26, 2004 05:22 pm
Hurrah! A new Mynuet post! I liked this one because it was so different, and we see such a meeker Ginny than we are accustomed to seeing in d/g fanon. The Tom Riddle mention was very eery. But the best part of all, of course, was the last line. We're all such suckers for D/G, aren't we?
Name: mary reviewed
. on Nov 26, 2004 04:45 pm
haha, great represantation of young draco and ginny,very cute and festive for the holiday enviorment.
Name: Mylan reviewed
. on Nov 26, 2004 04:45 pm
Aw... the fascination begins. :)
I like the touch with the diary and the potentially frightening look in Ginny's eyes. Someday that will taunt him, won't it?
Name: Applecede reviewed
. on Nov 26, 2004 04:44 pm
Nervous, uncertain Draco is so cute. Cute, I tell you!
*suspicious look* That's not the end, right?