Reviews For Downfall
Name: Boogum reviewed Chapter 14 on Oct 10, 2010 08:53 pm
I love Pansy and Blaise. Lots of nice DG moments in this chapter as well.
Name: slitherhither reviewed Chapter 14 on Feb 15, 2009 03:13 pm
Have I mentioned I adore your chapter titles? :D
Name: Emilie reviewed Chapter 14 on Feb 15, 2009 04:28 am
Woop woop.
Name: Hajra reviewed Chapter 14 on Dec 05, 2006 11:09 am
This story is wonderful - I couldn't stop giggling and grinning! I love the Draco you've created, and feisty, sneaky Ginny! -Though I must say I do miss Ginny mind speak, her conversations with herself were certainly amusing! Oh and I love the Sinistra-Snape by-play! X

Author's Response: I still love this story, though sometimes it's hard to write, what with Draco being an utter idiot and Ginny being somewhat of a jerk. Oh, how I *heart* Sinistra/Snape, though!
Name: ContessaNatasha reviewed Chapter 14 on Nov 29, 2006 07:31 pm
Hey!
Is this done? Ever going to be finished? I laughed out loud at many parts, I really hope it will be continued.

Author's Response: Nope, it's not done, I'm just an awful updater. Sorry. There should be about five or six more chapters.
Name: greeneyez reviewed Chapter 14 on Sep 19, 2006 06:59 pm
deliciously entertaining... i am enjoying this story thoroughly and cannot wait for you update... cheers!

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: ashley reviewed Chapter 14 on Sep 03, 2006 07:51 am
aww this chapter was cute. I cant wait for more. this is a great story!

Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed Chapter 14 on Aug 26, 2006 05:23 pm
~I need more!!!!!~

Author's Response: *smiles* I'll try to get the next chapter up before I start the moving process, so hopefully within the next two weeks.
Name: emma reviewed Chapter 14 on Aug 25, 2006 09:09 am
my friend has recently gotten me addicted to this site, and ive read just about everything that looks decent. It's all really great, however nothing compares with this story! I couldn't have read a better one if I had dictated my taste to my favorite author and had them write me a D/G story. You have me alternately laughing and squirming. It is, for lack of better words, amusingly delicious. I'll be thoroughly put out if you "finish" it. Anyway keep the posts coming!

Author's Response: What a sweet thing to say! Thank you, Emma. There will be an end, I'm sorry to say, but there's about a half-dozen chapters still to come for you to enjoy. :)
Name: Persephone33 reviewed Chapter 14 on Aug 25, 2006 06:10 am
Thanks for the lovely new chapter! It was almost warm and fuzzy, for Draco and Ginny.

Cheers!

Author's Response: I know, the peace was a nice change! I was so relieved to get past the arguing (at least for now) between those two.
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed Chapter 14 on Aug 25, 2006 05:43 am
Ha Ha Ha! I was greatly amused by Draco's comment, "No more two hour snogging sessions for you, Ginny Weasley" - since I'm sure she could easily control herself andit was ALL him! ;) Also, the letter from the Ministry to Draco cracked me up, as did Blaise's reation to it! And "'Take your trousers off and lie down'" Does this really work? I'll have to try it out on my husband! It was a ruddy-fabulous update. I loved it!! I love Pansy and Blaise in here. They are brilliant! ;)

Author's Response: I know, right? I get the feeling that the Draco I've written would always blame it on Ginny. ;) Pansy and Blaise have a corner of my heart all to themselves, since they offer such a fun perspective to write from. The trousers line does indeed work, but be careful to lock the door first! As for Draco's letter, I loved, loved, loved writing that part- especially that it was weeded out by the lowest-level Ministry employee possible. I imagine that he thought he was offering up a brilliant piece of advice when he wrote it.
Name: corvidae reviewed Chapter 14 on Aug 24, 2006 11:20 pm
oh dear there's no more yet? i'm quite riveted to the story now, very funny, and i appreciate the witty dialogue. please continue!

Author's Response: Don't be upset, there's more on the way, though it may be a few weeks (I'm moving cross-country soon). I'm so glad you like it and find it amusing. :)
Name: meeaz reviewed Chapter 14 on Aug 24, 2006 05:05 pm
Yay for a new chapter. Still as great and cheeky as the other chapters. This story makes me squeal in happiness.

Author's Response: Cheekiness and squeals are exactly what I strive for. ;) Glad to hear that you are still enjoying the ride.
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed Chapter 14 on Aug 24, 2006 04:59 pm
Bravo yet again! Another great chapter. Good Luck with the next! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you think it's up to par! :)
Name: Rashonda reviewed Chapter 14 on Aug 24, 2006 04:44 pm
Pansy is such a ball-breaker she cracks me up. I imagine her roughing him up a bit when they were together, Draco is a ninny and Ginny is a tease. They both go hand in hand. Great as usual. :)

Author's Response: I totally heart Pansy, and the thought of her backstory relationship tickles me. I think you're right. She led him around by the nose, I fear. As for D/G, you're right- ninny and tease and the perfect descriptors. But a perfect Draco and Ginny Sue would be boring, don't you think? :)
Name: hennyfer68 reviewed Chapter 14 on Aug 24, 2006 04:15 pm
I have been waiting for what seems like a life time for this chapter, and I've got to say that you didn't dissapoint. I can't wait for more!! Keep up the awesome job!

Author's Response: *hangs head* God, I know I took forever on this one. I'm really sorry. I will try in the future (after I move cross-country, that is. While moving, there will be no updates for two weeks or so) to update more regularly, and I'm so glad that you are enjoying it! :)
Name: imelda reviewed Chapter 14 on Aug 24, 2006 03:59 pm
Cute! Draco is adorable, and the two of them are great together. I liked what you said before, in your review response, about Draco being compelled to be honest in front of Ginny. He does really seem thrown off by this whole relationship, doesn't he?

I loved the line "Giving up the battle gracefully, Draco dropped his eyes." when he's checking out her chest. Ah, boys.

And then there was Draco's idiot letter to the Ministry. Hysterical! I'm only a bit worried that Ginny will find out and hate him forever, as she ought to. Except that his ignorance is entertaining, so it's not totally negative.

I'm really enjoying this classic D/G fic, and can't wait for an update!!

Author's Response: He is absolutely in over his head with Ginny, even if he doesn't recognize that fact. It's a good thing he has Blaise and Pansy around to clean up his messes, isn't it? :) Yeah, Draco checking out her chest had me in hysterics. That's one of the things that most annoyed me when I was in high school. Draco's Ministry letter was my favorite part, especially that it got filtered out at the absolute lowest level possible. I think Ginny, if she found out, would be more amused about it than anything. PS- Your reviews rock. They're always insightful, and I look forward to reading them!
Name: dragoncharmer79 reviewed Chapter 14 on Aug 24, 2006 03:23 pm
Suspense must be your name because you just keep leaving the reader hanging on and hoping for another chapter. Your writing just keeps getting better with every update.

Author's Response: Moi, suspenseful? *looks shifty* I don't know what you're talking about. :) Thank you for the wonderful comment- it made my day.
Name: Embellished reviewed Chapter 14 on Aug 24, 2006 01:09 pm
I love your Draco--he is so endearingly inept. I nearly fell out of my chair when he said, "I have fat pink girly lips." Hee hee. I am looking forward to more chapters. Good luck with the writing!

Author's Response: Hee! Draco with swollen pink lips is such a funny mental picture, and I agree- his ineptness contrasted with his distorted self-image is one of my favorite parts of writing this story.
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