Reviews For Tantamount
Name: sly_princess reviewed Part three: A third person's perspective. on Nov 11, 2007 08:57 am
It certainly was different from the other fics, a lot...but I still love it! For once, she isn't a goddess to him and he isn't Adonis. Wonderful job done with the fic!
Name: laylaelaine reviewed Part three: A third person's perspective. on Sep 14, 2007 07:39 pm
I'm so confused!
Name: Nessa Rose reviewed Part three: A third person's perspective. on Aug 06, 2007 02:42 am
Wow. And here I was all this time underestimating smut fics. This was really really well written. Your characterizations, explanations of motives, and the overall flow and pacing of the whole story was great. Well done! And now I'm off to see what other gems you might have in your repetoire.
Name: Draconus324 reviewed Part two: A boy's perspective. on Jun 24, 2007 07:44 pm
HOLY SHIT U MADE HIM A FUCKING PANSYASS
Name: Draconus324 reviewed Part One: A girl's perspective. on Jun 24, 2007 05:54 pm
think u could have cursed a few more time there????
Name: perfundity reviewed Part three: A third person's perspective. on May 15, 2007 10:49 pm
You're clever.
Name: raavelily reviewed Part three: A third person's perspective. on May 08, 2007 05:53 pm
oh that was sooo cute. u really captured Draco's stupidness and arrogance. Love all the hair comments too. Update about what hapens with the brother and other stuff.Now that would be a hilarious chapter. |GOOD JOB!!!!!!
Name: draconis major reviewed Part One: A girl's perspective. on Apr 09, 2007 06:52 pm
i like it a lot, especially the why don't you die? comment. i have used that more times than i can count to my brothers and now feel unoriginal, but i can deal with it.

just one note, i know that for you Ginny's big thing is her pottymouth, but some of her combos just don't make sense.
Name: ThisBurningHeart reviewed Part three: A third person's perspective. on Apr 09, 2007 05:00 pm
I really enjoyed it! Great work!
Name: ThisBurningHeart reviewed Part One: A girl's perspective. on Apr 09, 2007 04:16 pm
Superb! I love really personalized monologue like this-- I was positively bursting with laughter! Your Draco was quite good, too! Keep it up!
Name: hyperion reviewed Part three: A third person's perspective. on Apr 06, 2007 11:08 pm
I really liked this one. It felt natural and right. Yes, Ginny and Draco sounded like real people. Made me laugh too especially with Luna's comment, "Death and Sex" hah.

The characterizations aren't OOC. They were right. I mean, we never truly know who she really is or what she really is in canon, right? Same with Draco, so s'okay.

It's pretty funny though that it went all fluffy in the end. Just that it became a bit off I guess. Though, that's just my two knuts on your story.

cheers! hyperion
Name: Eova reviewed Part three: A third person's perspective. on Apr 06, 2007 07:00 am
do you realize that everytime I read this story this one line
"She has everything else instead. "
makes me cry,
just because it's so beautiful.

thank you for writing this.
honestly.
Name: tudorrose1533 reviewed Part three: A third person's perspective. on Apr 06, 2007 03:49 am
Wow.

I really, really loved this story.

Funnily enough, the part I disliked was the first, with Ginny's endless cursing. Now, I have a really foul mouth, but for some reason it just jarred with me--mostly because my characterization of Ginny is a girl who uses cursing for emphasis, so one who spouts foul language endlessly doesn't fit right in my head. On the other hand, I thought Draco's voice was absolutely perfect, and I adored the entire second half. The third, too, was excellent.

Ginny's feelings about Draco and his about her were right on; her nervousness about her first time and his nervousness about having to deal with it were really accurate.

And the sex was just right, too. Awkward, but okay, and in the end, worth it. I'd love to see a fic of yours taking place later on, once they have the hang of things.

And I loved the ending. :-)
Name: alexandriaisariel reviewed Part three: A third person's perspective. on Apr 05, 2007 08:52 pm
Hehe! Loved it. I'm glad Jess recced it, because it was a great read. Pretty true too.... I remember my first time, and it was one of the most awkward things in the world... except the cuddling after was perfect. Anyway. Brilliant job. Haha, I loved the Beta bit in the first part.
Name: white_and_red_love reviewed Part three: A third person's perspective. on Apr 05, 2007 03:34 pm
Awww, sweet!
Name: white_and_red_love reviewed Part two: A boy's perspective. on Apr 05, 2007 03:13 pm
Really funny...
Name: white_and_red_love reviewed Part One: A girl's perspective. on Apr 05, 2007 02:57 pm
Hahahahaha! This is good! Funny, I've never read Ginny acting like this. Kind of refreshing after her being portrayed as weak...
Name: LilyLove reviewed Part three: A third person's perspective. on Apr 04, 2007 02:07 pm
I love how real this is and how dysfunctional they are. And I love Gin's dirty little mouth
Name: enoimreh reviewed Part three: A third person's perspective. on Apr 04, 2007 01:18 pm
aw! I really loved that ending and I totally didn't see that coming. Thanks for putting a happy ending on a truly horrid day! :D
Name: Anonymous reviewed Part two: A boy's perspective. on Apr 04, 2007 01:00 pm
Okay, laughed out loud at that one ("Where are her morals?"). This humble reader thanks you.
Name: Anonymous reviewed Part One: A girl's perspective. on Apr 04, 2007 12:37 pm
Thank you for writing this delightful piece, which I have read & loved before, and which just helped me smile, and laugh, and laugh at myself (“Yeah, well, I wanted to talk to you this morning in the prefect's bathroom, but you were psychotic.” “I was emotional,” I correct) after a very difficult divorce negotiation. Despite the irony.
Yup, better than chocolate, better than therapy. Author! Author!
Name: iloveyou reviewed Part One: A girl's perspective. on Apr 02, 2007 03:49 pm
this is very interestnig from a psychological perspective, very clever
Name: An Gee reviewed Part One: A girl's perspective. on Mar 19, 2007 07:19 am
This is one of my favorite D/G fics ever. Would you please consider writing a follow-up? It would be interesting to see how the relationship progresses after making it public.
Name: Rashonda reviewed Part three: A third person's perspective. on Feb 27, 2007 09:30 am
I loved Ginny's vulgarity. I guess living in a house full of men will do that to a girl.
Name: Sam reviewed Part three: A third person's perspective. on Feb 18, 2007 05:04 am
great story hope you add another chapter soon
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