Name: Boogum reviewed
Broken Promise on Oct 31, 2009 07:14 pm
Aww, Scorpius is a sweetie. Okay, I think I'm going to stop here before my reviews really turn terrible and I start rambling more about myself than the story. Tiredness and reading is not a good combo.
Good story, anyway. Expect to see more reviews from me in the future.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll look forward to them!
Name: Rhianna reviewed
Broken Promise on Oct 31, 2009 01:32 am
Scorpius may be a 'git' as Rose has called him, but he certainly seemed like a very decent, caring guy in this chapter. Just have to get under those serpentine scales I guess.
Author's Response: Ah, the git bit comes into play later. Rose is a very smart girl and highly accurate ;)
Name: ginnyXmalfoy reviewed
Broken Promise on May 02, 2009 07:37 pm
This story is so good! :)
Can't wait to see where you'll take it!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Hopefully you'll end up loving it *crossing my fingers*
Name: citrusabby reviewed
Broken Promise on May 02, 2009 04:03 am
*Secretly shipping Scorpius/Lily*
They're not siblings... are they?
Author's Response: Ginny never actually cheated on Harry with Draco and wasn't with him at any point during her marriage to Harry, so nope, safe to say these two are not siblings ;)
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
Broken Promise on May 02, 2009 03:58 am
Bravo! Wonderful chapter. I wonder when we will see more (or hear) about D/G. Good Luck! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! D/G is coming and Draco will be introduced in the next chapter but these last few were necessary to set-up the background. Everything else takes off as a result of Lily knowing. Thanks for your review!
Name: hpfreaklk reviewed
Broken Promise on Apr 30, 2009 03:59 pm
Eek!
Scorpius is so cute!
hehe.
Author's Response: Not the usual response a Malfoy gets lol. Thanks!
Name: shaded reviewed
Broken Promise on Apr 30, 2009 02:57 pm
That was a great chapter. Horrible in that Rose couldn't keep her promise, but great character development. (When I saw the chapter title, I think I gasped aloud. Although the story summary indicates that this would happen, I held this tiny portion of me that hoped Rose wouldn't have to break the promise.)
By the way, Scorpius was lovely. It's sweet that although disliking Weasleys in general, he would still stop to see if one of the girls is okay.
I wonder what'll happen now. Will Lily confront Rose, or her mother? Maybe mention it to her brothers or father? Or keep it from her siblings? I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens.
Author's Response: Wow, you suggested so many different things that Lily could then do, my head is still spinning! Gold star for plot twists though! I see Lily as very devious like her mother had been, so we'll just have to see! Either way, from this point on, the plot is thickening as knowing the truth tends to complicate different people's perspectives. And thanks for your opinion of Scorpius, I was trying to make it so Draco's son had some sense of manners. :)
Name: AngelicRose reviewed
Broken Promise on Apr 30, 2009 02:28 pm
I feel bad for Rose! It wasn't her fault! Scorpius is A LOT nicer than his father, for sure. I like how you kind of mix Next Gen with Draco/Ginny.
Also, is there a possible Rose/Scorpius/Lily stored in the future? *raise brow*
Author's Response: Of course, love triangles make everything more interesting, don't you think? ;) Thanks for your review!
Name: DGgirl reviewed
Broken Promise on Apr 30, 2009 08:18 am
Great update! Wow, Scorpius is sure nicer than Draco was at school! Now I can't wait for the next update! please write more soon! xoxo
Author's Response: Thanks you! I think being raised by Draco (who was only a school bully) as opposed to being raised by Lucius (a murderer) would affect your personality just a bit differently ;) Kind of how Lily is a bit more bratty than Ginny ever was (at least in my opinion). Different parents, different results...
Name: albinopeacockwithfreckles reviewed
Broken Promise on Apr 30, 2009 05:54 am
Hmm, is there something going on between Lily and Scorpius?
Author's Response: ... If you mean currently, no as they sort of just met. They knew of each other certainly but never hung around in the same circles, so consider this their first interaction.
Name: eveil woman reviewed
Broken Promise on Apr 30, 2009 05:41 am
I don't really know what to say, I thought this site was a Ginny Draco based site. I gave this story a chance however it's now chapter four and we have yet to see Draco and have oly heard bout something that wasn't and its looking more like an next gen story. I understand the need for set up but I thing you need to get to the Ginny Draco stuff! Don;t misunderstand I think you writting and story are good but I personally DON"T read next generation stuff. unless the next gen is only a sideline. If you planing to make this about the next generation maybe you need to post this on another site.
Author's Response: First off, I definately understand your concern so I'll go ahead and address it here: Yes, this has next generation ships but it's alongside D/G and comes as a result of Lily's wanting to get to the bottom of her mother's relationship with Draco. Draco will be introduced in the next chapter, but first Lily had to find out her mother's secret (in this chapter) and then meet Scorpius to give her the chance to meet Draco. I understand if it's frustrating that D/G isn't predominant in the introductory chapters and that's a valid concern, however I was just trying something different and I've completed all sixteen chapters and am satisfied with the end result, hopefully once they've all been posted, you'll agree. If not that's fine too :) Just hope I could clear some things up.
Name: psyche reviewed
Broken Promise on Apr 30, 2009 05:33 am
I think I'm going to love Lily & Scorpius in this story. I'm wondering what will happen next now that the secret is out. And hope we see Draco soon. =)
Author's Response: Aw thanks! He's coming, I promise and Lily's devilish streak as well as she tries to get to the bottom of all this :)
Name: ginaco reviewed
Broken Promise on Apr 30, 2009 04:26 am
I love love love this story! I feel so bad for Lily though. And also Rose for having to tell. Please update.
Author's Response: It's coming soon and I promise that Draco is coming as well ;)