Name: xiaozheng21 reviewed Part Six: Targeted on Jan 15, 2018 09:50 pm

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Name: soundspretty reviewed Part Six: Targeted on Jan 26, 2016 11:57 am

I know it's not the point of the story, but I wish someone would tell her parents!! Now I'm rewriting your story in my head, imagining Draco sending an anonymous note to Arthur and Molly with the intention so they'll take her out of school and keep her safe.

Author's Response: May have been a good idea... hmmmmmmm very true. Thanks so much!

Name: usha88 reviewed Part Six: Targeted on Sep 09, 2010 11:35 pm

Well...I wonder if she was...raped. I mean with her robes all torn. I hope she tells McGogonall. Great job at this.

Author's Response: No, I wouldn't want to include something that is so scarring and personal in this story unless it was central to the plot. She was just attacked, beaten a bit and cut up. The torn robes are more because of the level of the fight. Carrow wants violence most, but simply beating her and hurting her is enough for him.

Name: Boogum reviewed Part Six: Targeted on Nov 03, 2009 08:40 pm

Carrow is a nutcase. That's all I can say. I'm glad Draco came to save the day, and he did it so sweetly and sexily too. ^_~

Author's Response: Haha! That he did!

Name: kymom reviewed Part Six: Targeted on Oct 07, 2009 09:30 am

More, please? I am really enjoying this story. I like the way you are portraying Draco, with the smirking and "Slytherinish" intact, but questioning his loyalty to the dark side.

Author's Response: Haha, 'questioning his loyalty to the dark side' IMMEDIATELY made me think of Darth Vader. Thanks! And I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Name: everetza reviewed Part Six: Targeted on Oct 07, 2009 04:39 am

I love this story!! I really like the dark tone you've taken with it and the characters & writing style make a beliavable and entertaining story- I'm really getting drawn into the steady plot and the dark world, can't wait for your next update! (-soon, please!) Thanks for taking the time to write such a great fic :)

Author's Response: You're welcome and thanks for liking the fic so much!

Name: ChickbabeC1 reviewed Part Six: Targeted on Oct 06, 2009 08:50 pm

SOOO good!!

Author's Response: Thank you!