Name: Boogum reviewed Acting The Fool on Jan 21, 2010 05:25 pm
Aw, so cute. Draco playing nurse.

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Name: Boogum reviewed A Look Into The Past on Jan 21, 2010 05:18 pm
Wow. I wasn't expecting that. I wonder how she will react to him when she next sees him now.

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Name: Boogum reviewed Lunch With Harry on Jan 21, 2010 05:12 pm
Hrm, I get the feeling that Ginny is going to wish she had not taken the pensieve memory from Harry. Still, this was a cute chapter. Poor Draco having to be stuck with hiccoughs for an hour.

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Name: Boogum reviewed Realization on Jan 21, 2010 05:05 pm
Damn, indeed. Looks like Draco will have to let go of his delusional bubble now. *laughs*

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Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed A Quiet Morning on Jan 21, 2010 04:52 pm
I loved it. Except the tickle fight. It's SO overdone!

Author's Response: Sorry. I'm glad you liked it anyway!
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed A Quiet Morning on Jan 21, 2010 04:43 pm
Bravo! Really enjoyed this chapter. I thought it was funny that they were caught...lol! Good Luck with the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Hehe! Thank you very much! I'll post again this weekend!
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed A Quiet Morning on Jan 21, 2010 03:52 pm
:D all the kissing :D so good. love this chapter. loved how they handled the impromptu in intrusion. the description of the waking up was so perfect. ginny savouring everything. loved it. so good. each chapter just keeps getting better and better. great story. i cant believe we're @ chap 22 already. i remember reading chapter 1 thinking this should be good. u didnt disappoint :D

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Name: choravenclaw reviewed A Quiet Morning on Jan 21, 2010 03:47 pm
OH MY GOD Bethany!
I loooved the waking up!
The thoughts running throuhg her mind were JUST right and everything is so perfect!
=D

Especially with the way his arm was wrapped so securely around her back. Ginny was by no means a morning person, but waking up like this could just make her one.

Oh yeah!
I could wake up 4 am everyday and have to work all day long and i wouldn't mind one tiny little bit!
Just having him there holding me would make everything worth.
^;~


It had been impossible for her to refuse when he asked her to come back to lay with him.

He could have asked me to lay by his feet and i'd still do it!
Just the thought of cuddling up to him sends tingles up and down my spine...


“Oh really?” Draco rolled them over so that she was pinned beneath him. A nefarious grin was spread across his face as he settled himself on his elbows.

You say you want me breathing, but moments like this completely take my breath away!
This got me all tingly inside and by belly did this big flip
That was exaclty the scene i told you i was hoping for!
The roll on top of her, i just love this!
=DDD


she detected a slight twinkle in his eyes. Two could play at that game. “It’s hard, you know,” she replied, keeping her tone serious.


Ok, so i just spent most of my afternoon with a bunch of hot-blooded guys that tell amzingly dirty jokes and are really really fun[they remind me a lot of Blaise]
So i have to say this: her line right there was VERY ambiguous, especially considering the position they were in.
Luckily i don't skip any word you write or i'd have to re-read after my eyes budged back in from the shock of reading dirty innuednso!
;P




“Well, looks like I’ll have to convince you,” Draco said softly. He pressed his lips to hers and moved them gently, sweetly.
Ginny couldn’t repress a sigh. This kiss felt more like he was trying to savour her and share something special.

AAAAAAAAAWWWWWW!!!!
That's the perfect sweet moment that i absolutely love!
I'm making AWWW eyes and face and my sister thinks i'm tupid but that's so so sweet and i absolutely love it!
=D
I'm simply crazy about post/pre sleep moments!
They always end up being so so sweet and without inhibitions.



Draco leaned down and lightly nibbled the side of her neck.
continuing to administer his attentions on the sensitive spot just below her ear.
Ginny bit her lip and half-heartedly tried to push him off of her. “Don’t you think we ought to try to get to know each other rather than snogging in my bed?”
Draco chuckled, his breath tickling her ear, and said, “You make it sound so dirty, Weasel. Do you have a problem with this?” His tongue trailed along the outside of her ear, sending a shiver down her spine.
“N-no,” Ginny stammered. “It’s only that… We’ve just…” she broke off with a gasp as he began sucking on her ear lobe. “Can you s-stop that for a minute?” Merlin, but he was distracting! His weight on top of her, combined with the gentle pressure of his mouth, was enough to set her blood boiling, her nerves tingling, and her brain scattering.


HOT!
HOT!
HOT!
WOWW!!!
i swear that for kisses in the neck, litte nibbles and licks in my neck and ears I'd do anything he asked...as soon as i got my bones back to a solid state!
THAT is so so hot!
i absolutely love and can't have any control over myself with scenes like this!



Draco slowly stopped his assault and ran his hands up her sides. His touch was gentle and exploring.
Ginny opened her eyes and looked up at him breathlessly. Her heart jumped and stuttered at his intense expression.
Draco’s fingers paused under her jaw and his thumb caressed her lips. She opened them to ask what he was doing, but he shushed her. He leaned closer and replaced his thumb with his mouth. Just brushing back and forth.
When he pulled back, Ginny smiled and wrapped her arms around his neck.


HTO!
NOT BREATHING!

my breath got caught in my throat and the butterflys in my stomach tryed to come out through my mouth.
This is getting really,really hot!
I love a man with attitude and when it's Draco it just gets LOADS better!
PLus she's acting too!
She's pulling him and doing all the right things to get him to kiss her and touch her and say all the wonerful things he does!
=DDDD
i'm so happy!


returning the kiss with one of her own. She felt that she could easily get used to this. This playful banter and gentle touching and sweet kisses. It was a new side of Draco Malfoy that she found she liked

YAY!!!
It only gets better!
She's finally acting!
She just doesn't lay there and waits and begs for his touches!
She's doing something, she's kissing him, starting conversations and actually enjoying everything throughly.
She's acting like a normal gril would!
^;^


Blaise Zabini was standing there with Fred and George behind him. “Are we interrupting something?” the dark haired man asked.

You gotta LOVE Blaise!!!
who else could get away with such a question and attitude?
^;^


Ginny blushed deeply, but Draco calmly said, “Yes, actually. You are.”

Another one that you have to be very gutsy to say!
Especially when you may be threatened to tetraplegy by two scary men!
=S


“Sorry,” Blaise said, looking anything but apologetic. He came into the room with the twins on his heels. “I Floo’d here only to discover that I couldn’t find you. That’s when these two fellows showed up and regaled me with yesterday’s adventures.”
Fred and George looked down at Ginny, who was still laying between Draco’s knees with her arms around his neck, with expressions somewhere between amusement and disbelief. It made for a comical combination. “Everything all right, Gin?” George asked.
“You doing okay?” Fred added, eyeing Draco’s proximity.


OH my God!
i laughed so much when blaise showed up with fred and George by his heels!
And the way the boys acted!
All of them!
it was just priceless!
Ginny REALLY had a change of attitude, huh??
And i abso-bloody-lutely LOVE IT!!!!



Ok, this was PURE fluff and i'm in love with it!
It's so so great to see the way they acted around each other
i just go gaga with in love, sweet Draco!
This wasso perfect!
You really can write an in love couple!
[guess you're having a lot of inspiration,huh?]
This is so wonderful!
And i just realized that they spent the entire time in her bed!
=D
You gotta love a chapter where this happens, right?
I'm more and more in love with him every time i read a new chapter!
you gonna turn me into mush from here to the end of this fic!
^;^

Thank you so much!
This was truly great!
A wonderful way to finish a great day!
=)


kisses

Author's Response: 'You really can write an in love couple! [guess you're having a lot of inspiration,huh?]' Would you believe that I wrote this almost a year ago? Anyway, that first innuendo, I totally didn't even see, let alone do on purpose. All the one's after that... ;) I just love Blaise and Fred and George! I had so much fun bringing them into this. What with Blaise and his awesome sarcasm and wit and Fred and George with their protectiveness and all-around funny-ness... I just love it! I'm really glad you liked this chapter. It was quite a bit of a change from the temperament of the rest of the story. I had fun with it, but I wasn't sure if I might have moved their characters too quickly into the 'in love' feelings. 'I'm more and more in love with him every time i read a new chapter! you gonna turn me into mush from here to the end of this fic!' Muahahaha! :D
Name: raistlin89 reviewed A Quiet Morning on Jan 21, 2010 03:34 pm
ahhhh i have to agree i love this chapter as well, probably one of my favorites. im such a sucker for the nice, romantic draco :)

awsome job once again! cant wait for the next chapter!!!

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Name: Lyskaelyn reviewed A Quiet Morning on Jan 21, 2010 02:35 pm
it was extremely sweet as i'm sure you're aware. can't help but think of morning breath though, haha...

anyway, update soon please! can't wait to see where this is going!

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Name: TwistedPixie reviewed A Quiet Morning on Jan 21, 2010 02:13 pm
My little old heart is failing at this chapter. How fricking cute were they?! I love this side of Draco's character and god am I so glad that Ginny's got her priorities straight!! Haha, a gorgeous chapter, well done. I loved it xx

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Name: IluvCaptainJack reviewed Time To Explain on Jan 21, 2010 11:01 am
Oh that was cute! I'm so glad I decided to read this today. It was just what I needed. Sorry for not reveiwing the last chapter, I got busy and when I got around to checking my email I had three updates for your story. :D I'm glad to be caught up though. Yay for D/G cuteness!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Ha! And just when you think you're caught up, I post another chapter! ;)
Name: lily_malfoy reviewed Time To Explain on Jan 20, 2010 08:30 pm
Yay! Great chapter filled with tension :)
Wish I could write more but I'm really tired. ps now I can have good dreams ;)

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Name: raistlin89 reviewed Time To Explain on Jan 20, 2010 07:41 pm
squeee =D yay they finally talked about their feelings, gosh it was so frustrating! hahaha i hope this isnt the end of the story?!? awsome job once again!

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Name: raistlin89 reviewed A Man of Few Words on Jan 20, 2010 07:01 pm
OH EM GEE!!!!!!!! yay! they kissed finally!! ahhh im soo excited lol awsome job!!!

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Name: Lyskaelyn reviewed Time To Explain on Jan 20, 2010 05:47 pm
lovely of course! don't make us wait too long for the next wonderful installment. (i'm running out of positive adjectives)

Author's Response: Lol! Thank you! Next chapter will go up tomorrow!
Name: Dracogirl reviewed Time To Explain on Jan 20, 2010 12:32 pm
Draco finally knows what's going on with Ginny and why she left the way she did. I must admit I was very unhappy with Ginny for ignoring Draco the way she did. My poor baby was in pain and she ignored him. Since Draco seems to have forgiven her, I will to. I like how
the chapter ended and am looking forward
to where they go from here.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Time To Explain on Jan 20, 2010 11:59 am
awwww. so happy for them! haha.

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed Time To Explain on Jan 20, 2010 10:30 am
A-DOR-ABLE!!! Absolutley lovely, thank you for such a good story so far. It's funny and heartwarming and on more than one occasion I've found myself laughing at what I've read.

I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before, but you've got a great story here, I can't wait for more! xx

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll be posting again tomorrow!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Jan 20, 2010 10:18 am
Hehehe
*blushes*
Nw you know how i feel, my mum and sis think i'm a complete lunatic for laughing, cryig andgasping and all sorts of other things while reaing your fics!
^;~

Well, i'm trying my best to breathe!
You just keep making me breathless by writing such a wonderful things.
Besides, i almost had a heart problem because it skipped a few beats and then started beating really fast.

*pulls Draco out of your lap and glares at you* He's mine.

*SNORTS!!*
You're truly wonderful Bethany!
And really makes me laugh and snort in a very un lady like manner my mother detests!

I think this might be a rather common dream among females. I mean, come on!

Hehe...i never dd mention what i was planning to do to him before the waking...
*whistles and looks around*

Hehe, he's just too great!
=D

Hey Beth, have you sent the next chapter yet?
I'm crazy to see the waking up...and i'm in doubt which one is better...they waking up and getting all cuddly or Blaise walking in on them...
HMMMM... can' wait to see what you have boiling in your cauldroun...
^;~


kisses

Author's Response: *giggling manically* You're gonna love this next chapter. Oh yes you are. Haven't posted it yet, but I'll have it up as soon as I can tomorrow. :D
Name: libellule reviewed Time To Explain on Jan 20, 2010 02:25 am
You made my day! Thank you :) The chapter is great and I can't wait for the next one

Author's Response: Thank you and you're welcome! I'll update again on Thursday!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Time To Explain on Jan 20, 2010 02:04 am
Yay! You totally made up for last chapter's ending.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reviewing!
Name: DGgirl reviewed Time To Explain on Jan 19, 2010 11:15 pm
Awwwwwwwww this chapter was so much sweeter than I expected! Good job and thanks for updating - hopefully more soon!

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Name: choravenclaw reviewed Time To Explain on Jan 19, 2010 06:35 pm
her little body pressed up against his, wrapped in his arms, her fingers twined in his hair.

OH!
I'm in love with him!
more than ever!=D
i love when guys talk about girls JUST THI WAY!
=D


The worst part about the whole thing was that his migraine, which hadn’t fully gone away in the first place, was getting worse again. He’d taken the last of his precautionary potion an hour ago and it hadn’t helped.

AAAWWWW!
You really like to make poor Drakie suffer!
Poor, poor thing.


There was no response, so he rested his head against the door and continued. “Ginny, please open the door. I need some potion.” He hesitated half a second before adding, “And I’m really sorry. I shouldn’t have forced myself on you.” The silence coming from behind the door was deafening. “Ginny,” Draco said one more time. Then in a whisper, “I’m sorry.”

AAAWWW!!!!
[pulls Draco to her lap like he's a little kid]

Serious now, he's really sweet and cute and no one can turn their back on a guy doing sth like this, especially such a though guy that never apologizes.
Even if he had hit her or sth really bad, it would still be impossible to turn her back on him.
Plus the poor thing is sick and it's her fault, so she has to help him as a human instinc[to relief guilt] and as his nurse[as an obligation].


Draco nodded, then groaned as the action caused his stomach to churn. He opened his eyes, which didn’t help any, as all he saw was spots, and said, “Migraine…” He felt himself falling, and then nothing.

DRACOOO NOOOOO!!!!!


It’s a good thing you were here, though.” She shuddered when she realized that she wouldn’t have figured out anything was wrong for a long time. She looked back down at her patient and stroked his hair again. It was slightly disturbing to see him lying there, motionless and pale, his face shining with a thin layer of sweat. She once again forgot about her twin brothers as she watched Draco breathe in and out. After a minute, she unbuttoned his oxford and slipped off his shoes. He moaned softly when she lifted his head up onto the pillow, but he was otherwise unresponsive.

I'm glad she's feeling guilty and regretting her decisions!
poor Draco could have DIED!
What if he had fainted while going up the stairs?he could have fallen on his back and died!
She really has to learn how to do things right, this reaction to him must be controlled or she hjas to act like she's 2 different people.
His nurse and his...girl?
Dunnno, but she has to take better care of him!


Feeling increasingly angry with herself for ignoring him, she began to wash his flaming face and chest.

oh yeah, i would have hated to have a naked Draco to my mercy and have to run my hands all over his bare chest...



Giving herself a mental shake, Ginny walked around the bed and climbed in.

Oh my God!
Oh my god!
OH MY GOD!
That's exactly what i was hoping would happen at some point of the story but it still made me so happy it happened!
=D
Thank you!


She was thankful that it was such a big bed

¬¬'
Spoil sport...


as she didn’t fancy trying to sleep in a chair or curling up right next to Draco.

Yeah right!
Who would EVER want that???


Sure enough, there was the redhead, laying on his chest. And she didn’t look in any hurry to leave. Her arm was draped across his stomach and her hand appeared to be tucked under his hip. Her hair was splayed out becomingly against the white fabric of the shirt that was barely clinging to his shoulders. Her cheek was resting quite comfortably on his bare chest and her breath was blowing lightly over his skin.

NOT BREATHNIG!!!!
NOT BREATHING!!!
please tell me she has a thigh thrown possessivly over his hip and her leg on top of his thigh, or at least her leg is entwined between his.


his own arm was wrapped around her back and his hand was resting on her hip.

OH GOD!
OH GOD!
OH GOD!
The arm around the back is ok, but the hand on the hip?
wOW!
I just can't even breathe just thinking about the possibility of having this happening!
My breath just got caught in my throath.


Very carefully, so as not to wake her, Draco lifted his free hand and tucked her hair behind her ear. She shifted slightly, pulling herself tightly against his side, and gave a little sigh. She looked so peaceful in sleep. Like an innocent child. Draco planted a light kiss on the tope of her head and breathed in the smell of her.

Can you imagine waking up like this every day?
Being kissed by him, the head, the forehead, eyes, cheeks, nose,lips, neck...
*breath catches in my throath*
Oh MY!


"Weasel, that’s not what I meant. It was kind of cozy waking up like that.”

=)
Could he be sweeter?i just love sick and just waking draco.
Sure, he could lose the Weasel, but still, he was very sweet...although a little demanding, but that's easily forgotten.
=D




Draco grabbed her and pulled her face to his. He had just enough time to see her eyes fly wide with surprise before he was kissing her. And it was just as good as the first kiss. Once she got over her stiffness, of course.

YESSS!!!!

Author's Response: Lol! Manu, you are just hilariously exuberant in all of your reviews! I am almost literally laughing my head off as I'm reading it and my sister keeps giving me weird looks lol! You seem to do that not breathing thing a lot. A little tip... it's not very good for you to not breathe. And as you're kind of my favourite, you should really keep breathing. I'm sorry to keep making Draco suffer; I feel so bad about it. I want to cuddle him and hold him and tell him it will be all right. *pulls Draco out of your lap and glares at you* He's mine. 'Can you imagine waking up like this every day? Being kissed by him, the head, the forehead, eyes, cheeks, nose,lips, neck... *breath catches in my throath*' I think this might be a rather common dream among females. I mean, come on! Thanks so much for reviewing! I loved every minute of it!
Name: 4everdandg reviewed Time To Explain on Jan 19, 2010 06:35 pm
nice! very nice! =) ***applause-applause***

I especially loved the part where they wake up in each other's arm...

thanks & will definitely wait for the update later... =)

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