Name: Boogum reviewed
When it Gets Personal... on Nov 08, 2010 09:14 pm
I guess Bellatrix! Only she can cackle like that. (I shall laugh if I'm wrong).
Ahem, anyway. Great chapter! First part I was just smiling away to myself as I pictured Draco all wet and sexy after a shower. Yum. Of course, then he had to go and ruin the image for Ginny -- and me -- by opening his mouth. How inconsiderate of him.
I see the mystery is taking away. I do wonder what Snape has to do with all of this. I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I definitely agree.... I looooooved Draco in the beginning...but of course, it was too good to be true, as he just HAD to talk.. :P It is extremely inconsiderate, is it not? lol :) As for your guess.. ;) I'm glad you like it and are looking forward to the next chapter! Most of it has been written already, just being beta'd and reworked..so hopefully the wait shouldn't be forever... :D Thanks so much! :)
Name: albinopeacockwithfreckles reviewed
Into the Villa on Oct 18, 2010 03:37 pm
Just a couple things I noticed could be tweaked: Draco would have to floor the gas to get the car to move, not the brakes, and Ginny's puff's name was Arnold, not Arthur. But other than that, I'll be interested to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Whoopsie...but thanks :)
Name: scentasia reviewed
First Day on Oct 17, 2010 11:01 am
What a shame, I was doing my best over-privileged-prat-who-should-be-stabbed-with-a-needle-so-his-overinflated-head-would-finally-burst look.
LMAO!!I am totally enjoying your story.
Author's Response: Hahaha, thank you so much! Making up insults is possibly one of the best parts of writing this story! :D
Name: Boogum reviewed
Into the Villa on Oct 17, 2010 01:27 am
Will he be in the bath? Or are you actually being very sneaky and are going to reveal something very un-sexy liike? Either way, I can't wait to read the next chapter. And I have a feeling all that lingerie is for Ginny, hehee.
Author's Response: Very, very good guesses ;) Like I said, this is not a giant cliffie...wait 'till the next one ;D I'm super happy you're enjoying it!! This story is going to end up being A LOT longer than intended.. whoops. :)
Name: firefireice22 reviewed
Into the Villa on Oct 16, 2010 10:23 pm
love it :) glad there was an update! can't wait for the next chapter! splendid job !
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Considering it's the weekend, I'll probably get through with the next chapter, so yay! :) I'm soooo happy you're loving it!!
Name: Boogum reviewed
Stuck in the Woods on Sep 23, 2010 03:11 pm
I love the banter! I actually chuckled aloud a few times, which is a rare thing.
Thanks for the update. It was exactly what I needed for a break from work. ^_^
Author's Response: Yay! I love stories with humerous banter, so I tried to put in as much as possible :D I'm so glad you got a break from work, because I got a break from studying as well :D (thank God.) Thanks for reviewing, and the next chapter will be uploaded soon!!
Name: Boogum reviewed
Malfoy Manor on Sep 23, 2010 03:06 pm
Hehhee, this was great. Lots of classic lines, but I think Blaise's long list of how much better he is than Draco was my favourite.
One thing: /“Malfoy?”
“Yes? Are you going to stop gaping at me and say something intelligent?” /
Since I know it's Draco who says the next line, shouldn't it be "Weasley?" not "Malfoy?"?
Author's Response: Hahahaha :D Thanks, Blaise is probably my favorite character to write EVER! :D And, as for the correction, when it said, "Malfoy?", that was what Ginny said, not Draco. Basically she was daydreaming and she realized something, so she wanted to ask him about it. However, she got 'lost in his eyes'.. ;) so yeah. :) Thanks for pointing that out though, because I think my most common mistake is not making my point come across clear enough.. :P lol :) But, you're like one of my favorite authors on FIA, and I really, really, really appreciate you reviewing!!! :D
Name: Len reviewed
Stuck in the Woods on Sep 20, 2010 04:00 am
the plot is getting more and more interesting...
good work ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I'm glad you like it, and more plot is on the way soon! ;)
Name: Akt5us reviewed
Stuck in the Woods on Sep 14, 2010 12:03 pm
I like this chapter! I can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! :) I'm super glad you are enjoying this story, and I'll definitely update soon! :D
Name: Akt5us reviewed
Malfoy Manor on Aug 23, 2010 03:06 pm
I am very surprised at Draco's attempt at humor while trying to seduce Ginny. I think that Ginny and Draco will encounter a life or death situation in which Draco will save Ginny or something of that sort. I really don't know what's going to happen next. I can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response: Good guesses ;) I always envision Draco to not be a completely big softie at heart, but he has a certain wit and charm. For me, that definitely shines through best as humor :D To be honest, the chracters just roam around doing whatever they want...I just kind of pick up after them ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm glad you like it! :D
Name: dumbledorefan_07 reviewed
Malfoy Manor on Aug 02, 2010 05:44 pm
You've got a great start. Can't wait to read more. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying my story :) I will defintitely update the minute my beta gets back to me! :D
Name: firefireice22 reviewed
Malfoy Manor on Aug 01, 2010 10:58 pm
aww its really cute, i'm definitely tracking this story :) i'm excited to see where it goes! great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I am excited to see where it goes as well, this was supposed to be a simple, small fic, but then I ended up falling headfirst in a pile of ideas :) I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!
Name: shezachica85 reviewed
Malfoy Manor on Aug 01, 2010 04:08 pm
Very good keep going. great a mystery and bickering i love it
Author's Response: Thanks!! :) I love the bickering, that's probably my favorite part to write! :D
Name: silver rose reviewed
Malfoy Manor on Aug 01, 2010 04:01 pm
very nice! i always love an auror story. Good job! and i can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I will definetly try to write more once my beta gets back to me.. I'll try to update weekly, if not more often... I do enjoy an Auror story as well, it's so exciting and dangerous, but since they are partners, I get to mix fluff with angst :)
Name: CCC reviewed
First Day on Jul 31, 2010 04:26 pm
A gorgeous, Adonis-like git…but still a git
Love this line.
Author's Response: Hahaha, thanks :) I loved it too! :D
Name: Boogum reviewed
First Day on Jul 29, 2010 12:28 am
What a fun beginning. This was just what I needed after a long day of tutoring and work.
One thing: you might want to separate your character's thoughts more clearly. It just makes it easier to read. ^_~
Author's Response: Thanks :) Yeah, I just rechecked my format and realized that Microsoft Word does very strange things to format...sorry about that! Hahaha :)
Name: firefireice22 reviewed
First Day on Jul 28, 2010 11:17 pm
love it :) keep writing, its good. a word of advice, frequent updates will get you many more readers :) *hint hint* lol
Author's Response: LOL! I'm trying to update as fast as possible...it's really hard to figure out where chapters should end.. So hopefully it will be up by tomorrow morning at the earliest! :) I'm super glad you enjoyed it!
Name: shezachica85 reviewed
First Day on Jul 26, 2010 10:57 pm
oh good start this should be an interesting partnership :-)
Author's Response: Hahaha, it will indeed ;) Thanks for reading, and I'll add more soon!
Name: slitherhither reviewed
First Day on Jul 26, 2010 09:51 pm
Ooh, congratulations on taking the plunge into writing!
I love your take on the mothers Weasley and Malfoy. Will we get to see the big party that Molly is cooking for? Also, on another front, I am wondering what about Ginny makes her particularly qualified in investigation compared to the other Aurors.
All in all, off to a great start on your first fic — I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Awh, thanks! It just feels awesome to know that people are actually reading my work and enjoying it, it feels very redeeming :) We will see some of the party in the next chapter! I'll let you in on something really quick.. [drops anvil sized hint] Let's just say Molly's matchmaking gets off to a bad start.. ;) Pretty soon, we'll get to see a lot of Ginny and Draco's case, which will probably tie up any loose ends from the expo :) But, thanks again, and I promise I'll update soon!