Hehehe!! I read this chapter in the middle of class and the prof got peeved at the sporadic giggling. :P Thankfully she thought it was someone outside the lecture hall. Note to self - do not read this fic in class.
Author's Response: You're the second person who has commented on reading this in class! Glad you are enjoying it and also that you didn't get caught! But I think you'll probably be fine since it's not really a comedy. Not too many funny moments once things get moving. Thanks so much for the review and for reading my fic!
keep writing... what to see where the plot will go?
Author's Response: I have been. A lot. And I am discovering that the more I write the harder it gets, to finish and to post. Don't worry, I already know how it ends so it will be finished. I should be posting the next chapter very soon. Thanks for the review!
Aww, the ending was very, very cute. I laughed when poor Ginny hit the barrier (I was expecting something like that to happen), and her flippant way of dealing with it was nicely done.
The only thing I would suggest is being aware that when you have different perspectives like this, it does make it confusing if you're constantly switching between them without having some kind of 'break' to separate the character's thoughts/perspective, or at least a natural shift to the next person. I got a bit confused in that middle part.
Other than that, I rather enjoyed this. I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! And I have noticed that I sometimes go straight into dialogue without indicating who is speaking. I guess when you are hearing it in your head it's kind of obvious who is saying what:) I will try to keep that in mind as I continue writing and revising. I hope that's what you meant, if not let me know. I appreciate the comment, so thanks!
I am really enjoying this story thus far. I'm really interested in finding out what it is that Voldemort's side wants with Ginny. Also loved the bed stealing scene, very cute!
Author's Response: Well, this sotry is really about what happens between our favourite two, but there will be answers coming. Thanks so much for the compliment and review!
I liked it! I really like the story linel stories where Draco and Ginny get stuck together for a while are always fun :) And I'm looking forward to hearing Draco's explanation to the war, and Ginny's reaction. Happy writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! I have always liked these kinds as well. I hope I can keep it interesting!