Reviews For The Safe House
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Chapter 5 on May 05, 2011 05:21 pm
cute chapie!!

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Boogum reviewed Chapter 5 on Apr 07, 2011 07:31 pm
Hehe, I rather enjoyed the banter in this one. There was a nice balance of humour and seriousness as well, which I think worked.

I was a bit confused about the name thing. I mean, they're discussing the fact he's not comfortable using her name, and then they both say each other's name and don't even blink. Then, of course, they go back to surnames. It's nothing major, just something I noticed.

Author's Response: Thanks.

He calls her Ginevra because they are drinking and she is upset. He drops the mask for her. She also lets her guard down when he comforts her. She decides to go back to Malfoy the next day, and he notices it so he goes back to Weasley. He said he wasn't comfortable calling her Weasley cuz it reminded him of her brother, but that was a lie. He was not wanting to discuss how or why he said Ginevra when he woke up from his naughty dream.

Sorry for the confusion. All of those name things were done intentionally. I wanted to show that, especially for Draco, their relationship already has potential for being more than house mates.

Okay, hopefully the paragraph things work! If not, sorry. Also, thanks again for the review.

Name: eleanora reviewed Chapter 5 on Apr 05, 2011 07:43 pm
loved it!!

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