Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 14, 2011 02:46 pm
love it to pieces..
Author's Response: Thank you! That's really sweet and it means so much to get a positive review.
Name: Boogum reviewed
Chapter 2 on Feb 09, 2011 12:10 am
Aww, the ending was very, very cute. I laughed when poor Ginny hit the barrier (I was expecting something like that to happen), and her flippant way of dealing with it was nicely done.
The only thing I would suggest is being aware that when you have different perspectives like this, it does make it confusing if you're constantly switching between them without having some kind of 'break' to separate the character's thoughts/perspective, or at least a natural shift to the next person. I got a bit confused in that middle part.
Other than that, I rather enjoyed this. I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! And I have noticed that I sometimes go straight into dialogue without indicating who is speaking. I guess when you are hearing it in your head it's kind of obvious who is saying what:) I will try to keep that in mind as I continue writing and revising. I hope that's what you meant, if not let me know. I appreciate the comment, so thanks!
Name: Darlingjib reviewed
Chapter 2 on Feb 08, 2011 06:46 am
I am really enjoying this story thus far. I'm really interested in finding out what it is that Voldemort's side wants with Ginny. Also loved the bed stealing scene, very cute!
Author's Response: Well, this sotry is really about what happens between our favourite two, but there will be answers coming. Thanks so much for the compliment and review!
Name: suzymaholic reviewed
Chapter 2 on Feb 08, 2011 12:33 am
I liked it! I really like the story linel stories where Draco and Ginny get stuck together for a while are always fun :) And I'm looking forward to hearing Draco's explanation to the war, and Ginny's reaction. Happy writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! I have always liked these kinds as well. I hope I can keep it interesting!
Name: eleanora reviewed
Chapter 2 on Feb 07, 2011 07:06 pm
cute.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: Boogum reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 02, 2011 09:33 pm
Well, this is certainly and interesting beginning. I'm seeing a much 'softer' Draco here, so I'll be curious to see what kind of direction you're going to take he and Ginny's relationship.
Author's Response: Well, I am a fan of your work so I was super excited to see your review. Now I am starting to worry that I won't be able to keep it interesting. I have so much respect for all the amazing writers I have enjoyed. This is not easy!
I know my Draco is "softer" than many may like, but hopefully it will work within the context of the story. It's hard making him a total jerk cuz I like him so much. Thank you!
Name: scentasia reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 02, 2011 04:55 am
This is very interesting. I am definitely hooked! I wonder what Draco is going to explain to her later? The story is very nicely written and I really enjoyed the little bonding relationship between Draco and Snape. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I have already written quite a bit so you should be getting some answers soon. And I really appreciate the compliment - this is my first fictional writing ever. I kind of heart Snape, too.
Name: eleanora reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 01, 2011 07:32 pm
bookmarked.
Author's Response: Wow! I am very honored. This is my first attempt at any kind of creative wrtiting ever, so I have been very nervous about the response. So thank you!