I love this chapter. Always have. I like the fact that he already knew before she was hurt - I think he's observant enough to notice that. Also like how you let that whole scene play out. Ginny's majorly crushing, while Draco is just, well, Draco. It's cute and fun, and just what I felt like reading.

It's been so long that I can't remember what 'Goku' has to do with this anymore. But all it makes me think of is Dragon Ball Z, which I can't remember if was your point or not. Ah, I'm tired. Sorry of this makes no sense. I liked this chapter, anyway.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it. This was the world's toughest prompt. :) But, yes, Goku is from the Dragon Ball universe. Someday, I'd love to continue this story with some help from a serious Dragon Ball Z fan because it has so much potential for a long fic, but I'd need someone to bounce ideas off to keep it in perspective. and I really love this universe. I think Mathilde has some potential. :)

Actually, I'm kind of disappointed that he'd figured her out so soon, but I guess you know where you are going with this and trust you to make it very exciting. Thanks for sharing this story. I like stories that use something of Rowling and still create their own reality (about gender segragated community for example). Great job! Update soon. :)

Author's Response: This story was originally intended to be a short story for a fic exchange, so it moves along a little fast. I definitely could have made a very, very long story around this concept. I really like the universe and I 'm glad you do too.