a lonely one!!
Author's Response: Lonely? Hm.
Draco had a crush on her at Hogwarts, didn't he?
I adore Scorpius.
I can't wait to read more. I hope that this doesn't all blow up in Ginny and Astoria's faces, even though they have been underhanded.
Author's Response: We'll find out about the picture very soon, I promise! I'm glad you like Scorpius :). Thanks for the review!
Can't remember if I reviewed this chappy... You may wish I hadn't because I feel like this was just filler. Disappointing. :(
Author's Response: You are, of course, entitled to your opinion, but it wasn't really filler. There were important things in this chapter that are going to come into play later, so I am sorry that you feel this way.
I do like this chapter. I feel like we (and the characters themselves) are finally beginning to understand that this isn't just some game; this is going to have huge consequences for both of their families.
I've always found it interesting that you chose to use Scorpius as the 'wisdom giver', if you will. Normally that role is given to an adult, but in this case it is one of the children who has been trying to advise Draco and Ginny. I liked that you brought in the fact that this is a difficult situation for him.
I'm very curious to see where things will go from here.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :)
I really want to know why Draco has a picture of Ginny from school. Can't wait for the next part!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're interested! Thanks for the reviewww :)
At least they've admitted they are being absolutely monsterous to their husbands and families.
Author's Response: Well, it isn't that they aren't decent human beings. It was really just something silly that turned into something big! Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
update soon!
Author's Response: It shouldn't be too terribly long. It never is with me. =P Thanks for reading!
This chapter left me hanging again! lol. I'm excited on when they will reveal their true identities though I think that will still be far. :p
Author's Response: The fic is about halfway through, but I'm not telling when or how it will happen! Thanks for the reviews! :)
Ginny chuckled despite herself. “Don’t be ridiculous. I’m still married; I can’t be with your father. There’s just no way! Besides, I’ve got three children of my own with Harry. Your mother and I can’t just swap husbands, and I don’t even know how your mother feels about Harry – not that switching husbands would be an option if she did have feelings for him… Oh, dear.” She stopped, collapsing the bed. “We’ve really made a mess of this, haven’t we?”
This was my favorite part. ^^ All of those excuses, Ginny. Tsk tsk tsk. You're just in one big mess! XD
Scorpius is just my favorite. He knows everything! I really can't wait to see if he has more parts here. Astoria and Ginny are really good friends to try and comfort each other with lies, but I know sooner or later the truth will come out. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, dahling. :) I'm so so glad you're enjoying it!
Eagerly awaiting your next updates! :) One suggestion I do have is to flesh out Astoria's reaction a bit more. Because she seems to have a good friendship with Ginny, her reactions to me seemed a bit too blasé for someone who had just slept with their friend's husband.
Author's Response: Thanks for your suggestion. :) There will be more on Astoria's reactions/thoughts in the upcoming chapters, so do not fear! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Hmmmm.
Calmly waiting for the next chapter.
STT
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :)