Name: Boogum reviewed
Chapter 3: Lies and a Truce on Mar 14, 2012 01:59 am
I love this! Absolutely love it! The banter is spot on, and I'm loving the relationship you are building towards them. Characterisation is strong, and I literally can't wait to see what you've got in store for us next!
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that the characterization is working. Hopefully I will be able to take the pair from point A (reluctant allies) to point B (much more than friends) without losing who they are. Thank you for reading and commenting!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Chapter 3: Lies and a Truce on Mar 13, 2012 09:13 pm
The banter was good... But I prefer action. And snogging, of course. :)
Author's Response: No worries, there will be plenty of that later ;) Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!
Name: cherryredxx reviewed
Chapter 3: Lies and a Truce on Mar 13, 2012 04:51 am
I like where you're going with this, but try not to overuse "bloody." It's easy to do.
Author's Response: Thank you, I will keep your advice in mind. I didn't realize it was so jarring as I was modeling it after people I know who frequently interject with their favorite swear word, especially in stressful situations.