Name: bigreader reviewed
Chapter 6: Magic and Mayhem on Jun 22, 2012 10:54 am
AHHH! *freaks out* It can't be it just can't! OOH I'm just absolutely riveted by this chapter! So glad I'm not left hanging by a cliffie! Onwards to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting!
Name: eaudetoilettex reviewed
Chapter 7: A Devil's Choice on Jun 18, 2012 02:35 pm
I usually check on updates and I was waiting patiently for your story , but the problem was that I couldn’t remember the name. I’m sorry I get quite clueless sometimes. Anyways ...
Your updates are worth the while! I prefer long chapters so It doesn’t matter if you take time for writing. I understant that life outside fanfiction is hard. -smiles- I also don’t have idea of how you are leading this , but the action is so cool and quite stressful but I love how Ginny even when she was truly exhausted , she kept going. And Ginny’s first signs of trouble when Malfoy was near her , they were great!
See ya!!
Author's Response: lol I'm glad you were able to find it again. Thanks for your review! I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter too.
Name: angeldraco reviewed
Chapter 7: A Devil's Choice on Jun 17, 2012 02:54 pm
Oh wow this is gripping! Another update soon please! :-). I like the fact that it is Malfoy who is the knight in shining armour. Great story! x
Author's Response: Sorry that the next update will be quite late. Extensive traveling leaves very little time for writing, but I hope you'll find the next chapter just as gripping. Thanks for reviewing!
Name: pitzi reviewed
Chapter 7: A Devil's Choice on Jun 16, 2012 10:44 pm
It's a rear thing to find a really good suspence story that keps you at the end of your seat, so kudos to you for a great success!!!
I can't wait to see them finally really free (hopefully) and what will happen when Draco realises whom he had gone through the whole ordeal with.
Author's Response: Glad to hear I'm keeping you in suspense. ;)There's more to come, but sorry that you'll have to wait a little longer though. Thanks for taking the time to comment. I really appreciate being able to hear back from readers.
Name: bee245 reviewed
Chapter 7: A Devil's Choice on Jun 16, 2012 10:43 am
Argh so good!! I'm super impressed by the suspense! Love how you handle and write action, and love the amount of it. Also, fantastic characterization! They're actually real people.
More, please please please! So exciting!! (Also, I think longer chapters are better as well. Gives you a chance to build up the tension!)
bee245
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! Sorry that the next update is going to take a while. There's very little time to write with all the traveling I'm doing, but I'm eager to get back to it as well. Can't wait for you to read the next chapter. :)
Name: cherryredxx reviewed
Chapter 7: A Devil's Choice on Jun 16, 2012 04:37 am
You and your damned cliffhangers! I have this feeling that it's Draco coming back with help, and for some reason I have this inkling that he's gone to Harry for help. Of course I'm probably wrong, but that is my guess. Can't wait for more. :)
As for your last question, I would prefer longer chapters, I think.
Author's Response: Of course you'll have to wait and see. :D Sorry about the cliffhangers :P, but they will probably be a frequent thing in this story as they make perfect chapter cut off points with the way I've plotted out the story.
Name: cherryredxx reviewed
Chapter 6: Magic and Mayhem on Jun 16, 2012 04:33 am
I was really excited to see two chapters at once! This chapter was really thrilling, and I thought you did a good job of keeping up the tension and the panic that Ginny was feeling throughout the whole thing.
Author's Response: Thanks Pam! Glad to hear that I succeeded with that. Sorry that it took so long to respond to your review. I had intermittent internet to begin with and when I did, this site just wouldn't load.
Name: angeldraco reviewed
Chapter 5: Broken Things on May 16, 2012 10:32 am
Wow this was an exciting chapter! I actually thought they'd escaped, kept me guessing right till the end. And where malfoy disappeared off, I would love to know! Great story, cant wait for the next one! xox
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Happy to hear you're liking it. More will be revealed soon-ish.
Name: cherryredxx reviewed
Chapter 5: Broken Things on May 10, 2012 06:32 am
What a horrible, evil way to end a chapter, Miss Sunny! I am just engrossed in your story. It's wonderfully written and it makes me anxious to keep reading. Can't wait to see what happens next, m'dear. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review Pam! Making people anxious to read more is definitely something any writer strives to achieve, though I promise they all won't be life or death action cliffhangers. That would just wear the reader out. ;)
Name: Anise reviewed
Chapter 5: Broken Things on May 09, 2012 05:47 pm
GREAT fic! (Yes, I've been following and not reviewing yet and... um... that means I'm going to Readers-Who-Don't Review Hell. Not a fun place. But I did finally review, so maybe I could be upgraded to purgatory.. ;) Anyway. A VERY action-packed chapter; I kept picturing it as a film. Draco and Ginny are bonded by their mutual need to survive, but I can understand why she'd seriously believe that he might not come back for her. In the context of what she's already seen and heard from him, it makes sense. But he'll come through, right? ...RIGHT???
Author's Response: Upgrade granted. :) I'm so happy to hear you're enjoying the story. As for what will happen, you'll have to read on to find out. ;)
Name: Rinney reviewed
Chapter 5: Broken Things on May 09, 2012 12:47 pm
So, i'm reading this beautiful piece of suspense while I am at work. You have me really trying not to make excited squeals while I am sneaking and reading your vivid chapter. When I am bored in work, I read D&G and I am always checking your story to see if its updated.
I do hope that Ginny hasn't been left behind. I cringed at the ankle twisting, it was too vivid in my mind. You have an excellent talent for painting the scene in our mind's eye. I felt it when they were panicking, I felt it when the bullet grazed Ginny, I feel Draco's pain and xhaustion, even when he's trying not to. You are just holding my interest so tightly, I don't think you'll ever get rid of it haha.
Please never stop writing. I adore it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for such encouraging comments, and I am more than happy to provide a distraction from boredom at work. :D
Trust is definitely the name of the game for Draco and Ginny in this story, but you'll have to read on to find out how it'll play out. ;) I definitely won't stop writing. I love it too much, and this story has been a lot of fun to write. I get caught up in the action as I write it, but because I revise so heavily, I become all uncertain of how it turns out in the end. I'm very glad to hear I managed to bring the scene to life. Thanks for reading!
Name: justwish reviewed
Chapter 5: Broken Things on May 09, 2012 08:24 am
What a cliff hanger!!! So mean! ;) Really enjoying the story so far.
Author's Response: :) The pace has definitely picked up, so there will be more turns coming your way. I hope you will continue to enjoy the story. Thanks for reading and for commenting!
Name: pitzi reviewed
Chapter 5: Broken Things on May 07, 2012 10:58 pm
I'm really enjoying this and you managed to pull off the suspence in this chapter of them running away really well! I held my breath. Looking forward to the next chapter and I hope Draco comes to rescue and they both make it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to comment and I'm so glad to hear the action kept you in suspense. As for how it'll play out, you'll have to read on. ;)
Name: ditzy_cadet reviewed
Chapter 5: Broken Things on May 07, 2012 08:29 pm
The suspense is great! Cannot wait for the next chapter. I am really really loving the plot line and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. That's very reassuring to hear as I was striving very hard to maintain suspense throughout the scene. This plot is definitely one with twists and turns, so I hope you will enjoy as the rest of it unfolds.
Name: eaudetoilettex reviewed
Chapter 5: Broken Things on May 07, 2012 12:46 pm
Hi dear! I'm pretty hooked with this story! Your descriptions are pretty fine and well , seems like it's an action story and well , let's see how it goes! By the way , I've noticed that still Draco haven't recognized Ginny yet. x
Author's Response: Thank you for your comment! And yes the Glamour is still very much in place. I definitely haven't forgotten about it. ;) I hope to keep you hooked with the next installment. Thanks for reading!
Name: angelface reviewed
Chapter 5: Broken Things on May 07, 2012 08:27 am
Great, simply great. I love the cliffhangers. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear that. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. More is coming right up. :)
Name: bigreader reviewed
Chapter 5: Broken Things on May 07, 2012 08:14 am
Ooooh man. I'm really hoping Ginny can get out of this herself! I'm a little confused about the tracker...was it also a portkey? The ending scene of the chapter reminds me of the movie Enough. She manages to get out of a choke hold pretty efficiently. Anyway, great job! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Author's Response: Ginny's growth is an important part of this story. I'm definitely not interested in her playing damsel in distress all the time. As for how it'll play out, you'll have to read on to find out. ;) You're right, the Tracker functioned here like a Portkey. It'll be elaborated on a little later in the story. Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave a review.
Name: ditzy_cadet reviewed
Chapter 4: The Muggle Deathstick on Apr 30, 2012 08:37 pm
Hooked on this story! Keep up the great work the plot is really great.
Author's Response: I sure will try. Hope the next chapter will be able to keep your interest. It's an action-packed one as well. Thank you for reading and commenting!
Name: Boogum reviewed
Chapter 4: The Muggle Deathstick on Apr 24, 2012 06:10 pm
I seriously love this story. The pacing, the characterisation, the action scenes - everything is perfect. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comment Kim! It's really encouraging to hear. I hope all is going well for you and good luck with everything. Your presence is definitely missed at the forum.
Name: Rinney reviewed
Chapter 4: The Muggle Deathstick on Apr 22, 2012 03:22 pm
I. Must. See. What. Happens. Next.
Oh my goodness, I'm hooked!
Author's Response: Next chapter has been sent off to my beta, so rest assured it's on its way. Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm thrilled to have caught your interest in the story. I will try my hardest to keep it up.
Name: cherryredxx reviewed
Chapter 4: The Muggle Deathstick on Apr 22, 2012 03:02 pm
Wow, that was one hell of a cliffhanger. I'm really excited to see what happens next! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad I was able to convey the excitement of the scene. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Name: angeldraco reviewed
Chapter 4: The Muggle Deathstick on Apr 21, 2012 01:36 am
Wow! What a cliffhanger to leave it on! I really hope they make it out. Really good story, had me gripped! Cant wait for the next chaper. x
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting! They're not quite out of this yet. I hope you'll find the next chapter just as gripping :)
Name: Boogum reviewed
Chapter 3: Lies and a Truce on Mar 14, 2012 01:59 am
I love this! Absolutely love it! The banter is spot on, and I'm loving the relationship you are building towards them. Characterisation is strong, and I literally can't wait to see what you've got in store for us next!
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that the characterization is working. Hopefully I will be able to take the pair from point A (reluctant allies) to point B (much more than friends) without losing who they are. Thank you for reading and commenting!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Chapter 3: Lies and a Truce on Mar 13, 2012 09:13 pm
The banter was good... But I prefer action. And snogging, of course. :)
Author's Response: No worries, there will be plenty of that later ;) Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Chapter 2: A Sprung Trap on Mar 13, 2012 09:03 pm
Well, I guess she had to get in trouble. I wish she would have taken them down, though.
Author's Response: Hopefully the set up wasn't too unreasonable. Poor girl doesn't get much of a break all throughout canon either, but I hope to give her some development through this fic.