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Hello! So there's not too much to know. Obviously I read fanfics, d/g being my favourite, but I'll read anything well-written and am a huge lover of banter and sarcasm.
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Not Quite an Affair by Rosalie    (Reviews - 522)

“You mustn’t tell them, Rose! Harry knows but Lily and the boys… you can’t breathe a word…”

When Rose Weasley went to her favorite aunt for advice on how to handle loving someone her family disapproved of, she never dreamed the older woman would have been able to relate so well. In the comfortable safety of her kitchen, Ginevra Potter told her niece everything and swore her to secrecy. But months later, when Ginevra notices that her daughter, Lily, is spending time with Scorpius Malfoy, Ginny realizes too late that the truth can never really be locked away. Children question their parents and their own identities and everyone must confront the past.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Other Characters
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Next Generation
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 32 | Word count: 108603 | Read count: 142616 | Published: Apr 11, 2009 | Updated: Dec 23, 2011
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: May 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: The Father

gah! I feel so bad for them! and stupid Rose. too much like Hermione. not that that's bad heh I just....eh. a part of me is hoping that Scorpius will end up with Lily :P

good chapter! update soooon!



bee245

Author's Response: Thanks, I'll get the next one out asap ;)

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: May 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Properly Feigned Innocence

oh very fantastically depressing! I'm really really loving how easily you've incorporated that stupid, stupid epilogue.

this is making me hurt for them :(

update sooon please!



bee245

Author's Response: Haha, yeah this whole story comes from that epilogue, so I can't spite JKR too much since the twn or so pages that is helped me write a whole fic. ;) Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Jun 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Doubt and Stupidity

well that is just plain EVIL!!! :O:O:O

great, great addition to the story, great intrigue and drama :D I like that just because he's spending time with Lily he still liked Rose, even though to be honest she kind of pisses me off lol.

I also like that Astoria doesn't lie to herself :P but I'm just waiting for some intense interaction between Draco and Ginny :D

update soon please!! I know you can do it. I know that it's finished already :D



bee245

Author's Response: Oh Draco and Ginny is definately coming. Thanks for your review! And sorry the cliffie was so atrocious... Had to be done.

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Jun 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Apologies, with Tulips

WOO that's so super awesome!! :D:D:D:D

I'm loving so much this budding relationship between them, and I'm really liking the differences between Scorpius and Draco also, subtle as they are. and Lily's attitude is awesome.

I can't wait till Rose gets involved more, although if she ends up with Draco I'll be...pretty angry lol.

great chapter! update soon please! :D



bee245

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for your review and all the parts you like too, that's great to hear! Lol, I'm assuming your line about Rose and Draco together was a misspell lol. Maybe Scorp and Draco really aren't that different if your confusing them, lol. I do it all the time writing this fic. ;)

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Jun 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Advice and Answers

AHAHAHAHAHA I didn't even notice.

and yes that is very much a typo lol.

Author's Response: Yep thought so ;)

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Jun 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Apologies, with Tulips

it's funny, because when I read your response I was thinking "yeah....Draco."

but then!

...sorry about all these random messages. I thought you'd appreciate that though lol.



bee245

Author's Response: Oh I do, they're fun! I'll expect many more after the next chappie ;)

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Jun 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Apologies, with Tulips

ahahahahaha wow yeah such a typo.

that was a Freudian slip. I guess my mind was just saying "MORE DRACO!!" cus he's pretty damn dangerous in this fic ;)



bee245

Author's Response: I'll say on both counts!

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Jun 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: The Dangerous Musings of Comparisons

very good! :D I love the flashback. my heart is like...breaking for Ginny :(

also I like that there's a bit of a parallel between the past and present. and I think it's kind of funny that Scropius is afraid of Harry :D

anyways, good chapter. good insights to the characters and all and god damn Ginny for choosing Harry and Draco is clearly the better man :(...but then, this story did come out of it so it can't be that bad :)

I like tulips too :D



bee245

Author's Response: So very true that this story came out of it. In a twisted way, I guess I am glad that the epilogue happened. It let me have fun with all these characters ;) Glad you liked the chapter and the flashback. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Jun 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Snogging Sessions and Sneers

very cute chapter :D I really love, love Lily. SO much cooler than Rose ;) and the interaction between them is just awesome :D

somehow though, I foresee Scorpius (who I once again almost called Draco; I think it's my subconscious mind rebelling at his name) still not apologizing to Rose and telling Lily he had.

sigh. stupid boys.

good chapter :)

update soooon please! :)



bee245

Author's Response: Hmm, well aren't you insightful? Now think of the worst possible ramifications of that... and BINGO, there's your next chapter. ;)

Color Commentary by KateinVA    (Reviews - 28)

Draco can’t stand the reporter for Quidditch World Weekly. She grates on his every nerve, until she’s gone.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1703 | Read count: 4124 | Published: Apr 25, 2009 | Updated: Apr 25, 2009
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Apr 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

haha very cute :D



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The Love Beetle by sheriden    (Reviews - 14)

His hair is as yellow as a ‘70s Beetle.

His eyes are as gray as cement.

He’s not really daft, and he makes her laugh.

(But her poetry makes him lament.)

One-shot.

Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Other Characters
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Future AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Blood
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3900 | Read count: 2831 | Published: May 05, 2009 | Updated: May 06, 2009
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: May 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Bitten by the Love Beetle

ahahahahahaha well that was an extremely wonderful surprise!! :D:D I thought from the little summary thingy that it'd be a really bad melodramatic piece and it's not!!! :D

lol very, very hilarious :D:D:D like really awesomely funny :D:D

good job!! :D



bee245

When No One Else Was Looking by Flighty Temptress    (Reviews - 230)

Draco Malfoy is tired. Tired of having his life dictated for him. Tired of the pressure he feels to take on the Death Eater lifestyle his father wants for him. No one notices that Draco is unhappy, though. No one, that is, except for the one person he doesn't want around.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Luna Lovegood, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Neville Longbottom, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Action, Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 37 | Word count: 64775 | Read count: 135364 | Published: May 14, 2009 | Updated: Oct 17, 2009
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Jul 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

nice interpretations. it's really picking up :D

update soon!



bee245

Author's Response: Thank you!

The Challenge by atruenut    (Reviews - 30)

There's nothing Ginny enjoys more than making Draco mad, but she's about to take it all a little too far...
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Action
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 6835 | Read count: 8763 | Published: May 22, 2009 | Updated: Jun 08, 2009
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Jun 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Stone

ahahahahahahahahahaha this story is so fun!! :D I wasn't very impressed by the first two chapters, because they seemed rushed and underdeveloped, but this one was pretty funny! :D

"Why do you hate me so much?”
Malfoy looked at her, surprised. "Because I do.”
"Well, the feeling is mutual."

lol... "Well, you win some, you lose some."

great twist for the stone :D lol GREAT twist with the challenges :D

update soon please!



bee245

The Monastery by ogygiasylph    (Reviews - 10)

When a homicidal maniac escapes from prison to get his hands on a very precious and potentially dangerous scroll, the Aurors send their best agent to retrieve him. Draco Malfoy is unfortunately assigned a partner, a specialist in ancient manuscripts and associated curse-breaking, who is none other than Ginny Weasley. Together, they have but a few hours to prevent a terrible secret from being revealed.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Drama, Mystery
Warnings: Blood, Character Death, Graphic Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4629 | Read count: 3591 | Published: Jul 12, 2009 | Updated: Jul 12, 2009
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Jul 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Monastery

Very interesting and good. I've always wanted to go there.... :( and very cute ending :D:D

hmm but wasn't there another story that you were writing? a while ago? that was extremely fantastic and awesome?

(hint hint)

:)



bee245

Author's Response: mmmmh maybe? to be fair, I may have lost interest in it. I will perhaps get back to it in August, just because I don't like leaving unfinished business, but there shouldn't be more than two or three chapters and an epilogue. Thank you for reviewing!

Oh Baby! by whyevenbother    (Reviews - 97)

You thought taking care of a plastic baby was hard work? At least it wasn't magical. Hilarity ensues as the students of Hogwarts learn a lesson in responsibility through Dumbledore's new parenting project. AU DG with several other minor pairings.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 9570 | Read count: 4936 | Published: Sep 25, 2009 | Updated: Jan 08, 2010
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Oct 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hahahaha this is really funny :D
I like Draco's care hidden under moroseness :D

awesome :D

update sooon please! :D



bee245

Author's Response: I'm glad you like Draco, he will be featured heavily in chapter 3.

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Oct 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

whoa that scene with the plant was very well written! I could see it all :O

and I'm assuming this letter is for a divorce? ;)

yay!!! :D I'm excited for more! :D



bee245

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I'm also happy you enjoyed the greenhouse scene, it was a lot of fun to write. And I can't tell you what the letter said, that would ruin the anticipation of chapter 4 ;)

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Jan 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

fully laughed out loud when Snape came in. I like how easily you mix humour with drama. this story isn't just fluff and fun, but actually has substance to it. nice job :).

update soooon pleeeease! :)



bee245

Author's Response: Thanks so much bee! I'm glad you found it funny and I'm glad you can see the deeply hidden plot in the story! Glad to know I'm doing something right! Chapter 5 is with my beta right now, so it all depends on how long it'll take her to get it back to me before I can post it.

A Night Forgotten by MemoriesFade    (Reviews - 49)

Ginny doesn't recognize the room she wakes up in. The same cannot be said for the man she wakes up next to. If only she could remember what happened the night before.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 17021 | Read count: 13588 | Published: Sep 28, 2009 | Updated: Oct 01, 2009
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Oct 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Discovered

yay! :D
that was very, very sweet :D



bee245

Author's Response: Thanks!

Torture and Treason by dragonsangel68    (Reviews - 24)

Memories are a special kind of torture.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 17792 | Read count: 5070 | Published: Oct 12, 2009 | Updated: Oct 24, 2009
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Oct 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

:)))

that was very, very sweet :)



bee245

Author's Response: Thank you!

The Potions Master's Nephew by SeverelySnaped    (Reviews - 86)

When a potion goes horribly wrong, Professor Snape is transformed and seemingly trapped in his fifteen-year-old body. Much to his disgust he finds himself enrolled into Harry Potter's fifth year, forced to hide his true identity. Girls, drama and teenage angst do not bode well with Severus. [written pre-OotP]
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Severus Snape
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 14 | Word count: 123558 | Read count: 55775 | Published: Oct 16, 2009 | Updated: Nov 10, 2009
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Oct 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Ten

fantastic! :D all three chapters were awesome :D

I love the characterization even though they're really taking their dear sweet time aren't they...

and I also have to confess, on Sunday I found the website with all the chapters and read it in a day :O.

it's brilliant and super awesome :D

what a GREAT GREAT story :D



bee245

Author's Response: that's cool that you found the website :) makes me feel all warm and fuzzy to think that you actually went to the trouble of seeking it out. it's taking a while to upload it here due to the grammar fixes, le sigh.

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Oct 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven

oh my god this story is FANTASTIC!! I'm so sad I caught up! it's hilarious. you have an awesome sense of humour! :D

and I love cat-snape :D

and this => "drawing heavy inspiration from the Muggle fairytale, Flashdance," on top of many other situations and one-liners = GOLD.

update soooon please! :D

I'm loving the long chatpers :D



bee245

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Nov 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve

(reply to your reply.)

lol how could I NOT go out and find it the MOMENT that I realized the truth?! :D

it's been a while and I still have very strong feelings about this story. that's a good sign. it means it's awesome.



bee245

PS---THIS CHAPTER IS AWESOME.

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Nov 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen

so I know I must be getting super annoying, especially with no real new stuff to comment on/add, but I just had to say that (on top of being an awesome story)...

that is one fantastic pun.

that is all.

good job.



bee245

I'll Take The Chocolate-Covered Draco, Please by VickyVicarious    (Reviews - 8)

Look at the title. That, plus Ginny, is pretty much it.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Molly Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1546 | Read count: 3627 | Published: Oct 22, 2009 | Updated: Oct 22, 2009
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Oct 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hahahahahahahahaha that was so funny :D

good one :D



bee245

Author's Response: Thanks!

Acting on a Moment by Boogum    (Reviews - 111)

Ginny Weasley was on a mission: get Draco Malfoy's attention or die trying. She would prefer to skip the dying part, though…

Acting on a Moment
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Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 4 | Word count: 12740 | Read count: 26367 | Published: Oct 30, 2009 | Updated: Nov 09, 2009
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Nov 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Day That Ginny Weasley Caught The Wrong Fish

AHAHAHAHAA!!!! this story is the greatest thing ever!!! :D:D:D

I loooove the innocence and cuteness! :D and I love that they're so young! :D they're so cute!! :D

yay! write more please!!! :D



bee245

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I know I had a lot of fun writing a very young Draco and Ginny. The last chapter should be up soon.