When Harry leaves Ginny for Hermione, Draco decides it's time to fulfill an old fantasy. Twenty five is a little old to experience her first one night stand, but Ginny thinks she can handle it.Category: Works in Progress
Stupid prat. And yay Ginny, she was completely amazing. I would never have the balls to do any of that. I kind of hope Draco's nose doesn't heal properly, it'd make him more human and less pretty.
Ugh, I just thought Bianca was a bimbo; turns out I really dislike her and wish Pansy *had* let Ginny have at her. And now I'm really, really mad at Draco, since he picked such a horrible woman.
Okay, sorry. Loved the chapter as usual.
Draco and Ginny haven't seen each other since the last wedding, which didn't go well.Category: Completed Short Stories
Whoa, didn't see that coming. I'm glad that she only didn't want to elope, and not that she didn't want to marry him period. I really liked it, and I can't wait for more!
When a serial killer who leaves behind no evidence plagues Muggle London, Scotland Yard is at a loss. It's a good thing they have a wizard in their employ. Join the investigation and the race to find the butcher before he strikes again.Category: Works in Progress
A Harry Potter psychological thriller. AU after OotP.
ooh Draco's a cop/detective! sexy! it's actually kind of like the guys on "Criminal Minds", have you ever seen that?
Do we know Robert? I'm assuming it's an alias. And clearly he likes, well hates, Ginny. omg, wait, it's not COLIN, is it? I really hope not.
This is really interesting; I'm trying to figure everything out, which is next to impossible at this point, but I'm having fun anyway. I can't wait until you bring Ginny in--what is she going to be? Is she an Auror (I thought Draco would meet her instead of Ron) or is she working with Muggles like Draco? And what a surprise that was, Draco working solely for the Muggle police. It works, though, I think.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I haven't seen Criminal Minds, is it a movie or a TV show? I don't want to spoil anything so I'm going to skip that part about Robert ;-). The next chapter will focus on Ginny. Thanks for reviewing.
Oooh, that's really fascinating, a mixture of Muggle & wizarding medicine. I hope you keep having bits that are about Ginny's career, not just the killer. Speaking of, does this mean he knows Ginny is in DC? I knew it was someone she knew! Can't wait for more
Author's Response: My intention is for Draco, Robert, and Ginny, to be equal characters in this story. We will definitely see more of her and her career. Thanks for reading, and reviewing. :)
Draco Malfoy watched Ginny Weasley for years. Now, ten years after leaving Hogwarts, he has his chance in the world of big business.Category: Works in Progress
Wow, that *is* a monopoly they have. I really hope he stops being despicable so Ginny doesn't have to pimp herself out for her company. I hope you keep going with this, it's good so far!
Draco and Ginny are getting married. So are Hermione and Seamus. Ron has a new boyfriend, and, to top it all off, Harry's pregnant.Category: Works in Progress
ahh! that's it! you've done a really good job. we know next to nothing about the characters, really, but I'm completely intrigued. I know, I shouldn't pressure you, but please, update soon! although it is spring break, so I'd understand.
“I know you,” she said softly. “I know that marriage is the last thing on your mind. I don’t want you thinking I’m dying for a sparkling diamond on my finger and happily ever after and all that.”Category: Completed Short Stories
“Don’t you?” he asked simply.
rofl at the last line. I love that Draco decided to marry her after all. And the "quite tolerable"--is that a nod to Pride & Prejudice (the KK version, not the original)?
Author's Response: No - just some a little random bit of conversation that popped into my head. Never experienced the KK version...maybe I should work on that.
Scorpius Malfoy's parents were never around, and left him in the care of his nanny, Ginny Weasley. He grew up blissfully under her care, brought up with the Weasley ideals of courage, honor, and loyalty. Then when he turns 7, his father comes home, and Scorpius' simple world falls apart.Category: Works in Progress
oh good lord. at first, I was thinking she was her mother, but then I was, "nah, no way she'd leave her own kid." guess I was wrong.
The whole Scorpius-dating-his-first-cousin thing is a tad melodramatic, and wouldn't Rose have mentioned her boyfriend to someone in her family? well, I guess if Ginny didn't tell anyone about Scorpius, and if she's no longer around, no one would know enough to stop them. Thank god they're 14-year-olds and hopefully not beyond a bit of kissing. (well, but first cousins in the wizarding world may be acceptable. whatever. still.)
Draco's last line is (unintentionally, I think) hilarious, and I think the story has good potential. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Haha, yes I\'ve realized that this chapter is very soap opera-esque. The last line in particular, though luckily some people are enjoying that line. I just wanted Scorpius\' life to be shaken up in every way by the discovery that Ginny is his mother, and that had to include his school life. Plus, he\'s definitely got a bit of an Oedipus complex going on (OK, a major Oedipus complex), which was my initial reason in bringing in Rose. As for your question, no, nobody knows that Scrap is Ginny\'s son. And they are definitely too young to have done anything at all serious. I\'m glad you think this story has potential, even if, according to Paul Varjak, that\'s the most damning word of all for a writer.
To this day, Draco Malfoy still cannot pinpoint the day when his best friend became a genius. Blaise Zabini, however, is most definitely a genius. After all, he gave Draco the best advice of his life.Category: Works in Progress
wow, you have good tastes. "The Devil You Know" AND Shania Twain?
Draco was so cute and awkward, I loved it. Especially with the pizza, lol.
Author's Response: I\'m flattered. Evidently, you have good taste as well!\r\n\r\nThanks for the review!!
Aww, he's so sweet. And I can't wait for more of that character development; they both seem intriguing. How did they get to be healers? and he her boss?
Author's Response: If I told you, well, I think you know what I\'d have to do. :o)
Oooh that explains it. I'm really curious how the hell he figured out what number she was thinking of...Is Draco a Legilimens? Everything keeps getting curiouser and curiouser.
Author's Response: I\'ll never tell. Well, I take that back. I probably will. Just not now! :o)\r\n\r\nThanks for the review!
A short one-shot based on The First Five Times by Stars. Some smut, some one liners, and in keeping with the song, some sap.Category: Completed Short Stories
Very cute. One thing, though: there's a few typos ("I missed up" and "then at least then at least own up"), and a few bits were bit difficult to follow. But I really did like it, and I think just another read-through with your big red pen will make it fabulous.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the advice and direct examples, I\'ll go back and edit it soon.
While Blaise saw Draco's intrest in Ginny Weasley as "merely a fetish", Draco finds out there is much more to Ginny than meets the eye, or the teeth. What age-old secret is Ginny hiding about her family's history and how is she involved?Category: Works in Progress
whoa, completely wasn't expecting that. WTF, mate? really confused, now, and I have a bunch of questions. I really hope you continue this, so my questions (eg, if she's a vampire, then how was she a little kid? it sounds like it's not a recent development, like she's been a vampire for a while) can hopefully be answered.
Ginny finds out what she's been missing out on when she ventures into a Muggle nightclub.Category: Completed Short Stories
wow. that was....really good. amazing. fabulous. absolutely loved it. but it ended too soon! it's almost a cliffhanger. what happens next? (no, not the sex part; I got that.) more, please?
Author's Response: Haha not anytime in the near future...but if and when I do, I\'ll be sure to let you know ;) Thanks so much for the review, I\'m flattered that you like it so much it leaves you wanting more! :D
A simple story of girl meets boy and pretends to be with boy to matchmake for another girl with another boy, only it all goes wrong before it goes right.Category: Completed Short Stories
Wait, what about the neck? Why did Luna keep rubbing/pointing to her neck? Other than that, it was cute. And the bit with the mop and Mrs Norris was great.
On a trip to the Quidditch World Cup in Rome, Ginny sees Draco for the first time in eight years. To her surprise, a torch she didn’t know she was carrying is relit.Category: Long and Completed
Okay. What the hell happened between them all those years ago? Just a kiss? Really? Must've been a freakin' good kiss, then. I absolutely loved it, although Draco was a bit too enigmatic for my tastes. I really like the ending, but at the same time don't, because it's a cliffhanger. Sort of. Ugh, this is so complicated. Hopefully, though, you're working on a sequel? Since it won the "most in need of a part two" award? Please?
Author's Response: It\'s not finished yet - this is part one of four! :)
oh, so glad it isn't over yet!
It's really weird that they've slept together and are still calling each other by their last names... loved the chapter (so promptly added, too!) and now I'm off to go figure out what they were talking about in Italian
Author's Response: Well, I think it\'d be hard for them to break the habit of calling one another by their last names. :)\r\nThank you so much for reading, I\'m glad you\'re enjoying it!
aww, he's so upset he had to drown his sorrows. but he did call her a bitch, so I'm not too enamored of him right now. It took me a few days of start-and-stop reading to get through it (effin' work schedule), but I did like it!
Category: Completed Short StoriesWhat happens when Draco discovers Ginny's hidden lust, a lust he secretly shares?
erm, you mean "palate" not "pallet". and she slid the belt out of "its" buckle, and he took "off" her panties... a few other places, too. Sorry! GrammarFreak mode, off!
This was really interesting. It's a different take on the traditional vampire story, so it's very intriguing. And I liked that you "explained" the situation with a flashback, instead of going in sequential order.
Author's Response:
Yeeeeah I need to go through and re-proofread I really did a halfass job....it was 1:30 in the morning when I finished this haha
But glad you liked =)
When Harry left her to do the last thing Dumbledore asked of him, all Ginny had left was the hope he would return. That, and an old jersey.Category: Long and Completed
Very sweet. I loved how Draco was conflicted with his feelings, for Ginny, for the war, for Voldemort. It seemed more realistic that way.
Author's Response: Thank you. :-)
Hired by the Malfoys to manage their public relations after a bout of bad press, Ginny discovers that some relationships just aren't meant to stay strictly professional.Category: Long and Completed
His condition? lmao. I absolutely love the conversation Draco and Blaise were having. It was very natural and completely funny. And I like the rest of this fic, too; it should be interesting to find out more about Draco's secret obsession with Ginny, and Blaise's not-so-secret one with Luna.
And the image of Lucius in a bathrobe (with a mojito, probably) sitting under a tree and ordering the elves around was fabulously entertaining.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love writing the Draco and Blaise scenes.
Boo, you're going away. Vacay? With umbrella drinks?
Glad to see you haven't limited the banter to the men; Ginny was entertaining as well. And I hope Draco gets into trouble of some sort soon, so Ginny can go into superhero mode and save the day. Although Draco could just smack Blaise and that'd be entertaining too.
Author's Response: Yep, vacay. No umbrella drinks, though. :) Thanks for the review - I was kind of afraid I\'d spent all the good quips on Blaise. I\'m glad you liked the chapter!
just thought I'd throw in that I love Blaise's botched Shakespeare summary. Absolutely fabulous.
Author's Response: Heehee, thank you!
Okay. We all know that alcohol (especially eight bottles) = drunkenness, which leads to awkwardness. I just really hope they don't sleep together, cause they probably won't get over that. although, honestly, they can sleep together. that's fine too. can i borrow your brain? your wittiness is awe-inspiring.
Author's Response: Hee, you don\'t want my brain. It only works for writing; in real life it takes me two days to think of a proper verbal comeback. Thanks for reviewing!