He is stalking and murdering young redheaded women.Category: Long and Completed
Ooh, I like the introduction of Blaise! Good addition. I'm always for the jealousy factor...:) And it'll be interesting to see how Draco becomes obsessed with Ginny after her rejection. I'm a big fan of those too. Good job!
XOXO, JT
Very, very interesting development. I'm a huge fan of obsessive!Draco. Especially if it makes him posessive and crazy and all...Slytherin-like. After this chaptdr, you seriously have to update soon because this is way too interesting! I can't wait to see what's going to ahppen when Draco and Ginny meet up again...
Great job and update soon!
XOXO, JT
Oh my goodness, I can't wait to see how ginny and pansy react to THAT ending...intenseness. Still holding out hope for that bit of Draco obsession for Ginny. GOod job and please update soon!
XOXO, JT
Argh, this has just taken a much darker twist. update soon, please!
XOXO, JT
i have a feeling that blaise is the serial killer...i will have to wait and see if I am right
XOXO, JT
i like the dg chemistry in this one. it's a good chapter to explore their feelings and relationship.
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Draco's last line is so creepy...could Ginny really be the one that the killer wants? And what is this thing that's flashing over his face? The mystery thickens...Good job!
XOXO, JT
yes! that last sentence makes me happy! But...I have a question. I thought Ron was married to Hermione, who you mentioned to be pregnant in the last chapter? So, is he cheating on Hermione with Pansy? Just wondering...And that new development about the killer in Ginny's building is creeping me out...
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: Ohh. Oops. I guess I forgot about that. Um, I suppose he is then.
Oh my goodness! It was DRACO all along? I was totally expecting Blaise! oh my goodness, that is twisted. This is possibly one of the most twisted things I've read in the DG fandom. And that's not a bad thing! I really like mysteries with a surprise twist ending, but...wow. this is really just...*whew!* Only one part that I didn't get, though. At the very end, with the redhead girl...is that Ginny? Or just another redhead? Because it seems like it would be Ginny...And what was the blood dripping down her temple and the hollow eyes?
Other than that, good job on the twist! I'm going to go back and reread the DG parts just to see how twisted this is.
XOXO, JT
P.S. Is this the last chapter? Because it says WIP, but it seems like this would be the end...
Author's Response: It is the last chapter. I just didn't want to change it to Complete until this was up. Yes, it was Ginny, well he was seeing her how he left her anyway.
She didn't know why she did it, only that she did. And now, he'll never forget...Category: Completed Short Stories
wow! interesting little scene! good prequel to the other story. I liked that bit about the belly dancing. :)
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: Yea, Eveil Woman and I got very lucky that she found me :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!
"The war made corpses out of us children. It made graves out of the earth."Category: Completed Short Stories
Antoinette cherie! My finals are done, which means I will finally start responding and reviewing and reading fanfic again starting tomorrow! I really wanted to read this first, though, and I'm glad I did. Definitely such a good interpretation of the prompt. I was really angry and sad that Lucius would take that special thing away from Ginny. Every girl deserves to have her first time be with the person she loves. I can't imagine being raped and left for dead. All I can say is that hopefully, D and G will have a good time doing it in heaven. ;) Anyways, good job on this one, and please update Buttercup!
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: My finals are done too. So cheers! Yes, I certainly made Lucius out to be awful in this. But I wanted to try something different. It's a terrible story, really. Thanks for the review! As for Buttercup, it's coming along--meanwhile, don't you owe me a proper review. Hmhp. I kid. I kid. :D
For the rest of their marriage, he knew he would have to be content with the other man in the relationship. But he loved her.Category: Completed Short Stories
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Oh Antoinette, this was oh-so-sad. All your one-shots have been pretty sad, though. This one really broke my heart, especially that part about where Ginny saw Draco and his wife dancing. :( That just really made me want to cry. You really should do a bit of a sequel, because this is just too sad to not give DG a happy ending. Or, maybe a prequel would be good, explaining how and why DG didn't end up together... but a sequel getting them together would be better. :)
XOXO, JT
P.S. Don't you owe me a review for LTM chapter 4? Haha, jk, jk, I'm going to re-review Buttercup right now so I don't forget. You really should update BUttercup though...just saying. ;)
Author's Response: I know, I'm working on a happy one-shot. The thing about my one-shots is that I write them with the thought of not writing any companion pieces. I like to leave people guessing about what is happening. And again, if I wrote a companion to this, Draco and Ginny wouldn't be together. They are both in marriages that they don't want to break apart, and until they get up the willpower to admit to themselves that they should be together, then they'll have to live with their respective partners. Basically, they've settled. And yes, I do owe you a review -_- I'll need to get around to writing it. Thanks for the review!
Ron and George were going to get a kick out of this. Their sister had been totally duped. And she didn't even know how bad it was until he told her who he was leaving her for.Category: Completed Short Stories
I'll admit, I skipped to the end because I didn't want some Draco-leaving-Ginny-for-Hermione story (ew, ew, ew!), and found out that he left her to be a priest (very interesting). I won't lie, I was kind of chuckling to myself at the thought of Draco becoming a priest. But good story! I hoep he goes back to Ginny though. :)
XOXO, JT
Oh, and very good job on your first fic. Please make him choose Ginny.
Author's Response: Ugh, I could never bring myself to write that. Hard to believe, but I actually began as a D/Hr shipper. Then I read one D/G and the D/Hr ship SANK! Ever since, I can't even read a story like 'Draco likes Hermione and uses Ginny but then they fall in love.' Can't do it!
Ahh, then you are my favorite type of DG person: the converted DG shipper. I am a sort of converted DG shipper myself. I used to read DHr because my friends bugged me about it, but gave up after three days because Draco really has to be pretty OOC to even consider going against some seventeen years of inbred prejudice to even like Hermione. And then, ya know, I found DG, and all became right in the world. I think the DG ship just has better writers overall, lol. I'm definitely glad that you've joined the DG ship though, and have started writing for it. I have to say, I'm deeply interested as to which fic converted you to DG. It must've been bloody brilliant. :)
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: The weird thing is that I can't even REMEMBER what fic it was...i've had so many favorites that they all start to run together when I consider when I first read them. All I know is that I'm so glad I switched!
Right now, I am STILL waiting for an update on "Il Dragone"
A bad day at work for Ginny leads to more than she thought it would.Category: Completed Short Stories
I really love how R/P's relationship is a catalyst to DG's. This was really sweet. And cute. Good job!
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! It was fun to write. :)
Companion fic to "You Bring Me Closer to God." Draco was unable to live with his guilt. He had done so many things wrong in his life. How could he ever give Ginevra what she wanted when he couldn't even get his life in order? He needed to find a distraction. He needed to find a new obsession...Category: Completed Short Stories
Nice to see things from draco's POV. Can't wait to see where exactly you'll be taking this. :)
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: I did believe that Draco's POV needed to be seen. Otherwise, readers would just hate his character, and that is the last thing I wanted. I want people to understand both sides-- we're reminded of our pasts often, and we don't always know how to react and deal with it. People become depressed, violent, or ambivilant. This is just what Draco's chosen. And Ginny wants to help because that's what she's known all her life. She comes from a big family and, as the only girl, she was seen as the peacemaker and Devil's Advocate. It was only natural for her to become a Head Healer. Plus, she loves Draco. We all know we'd do anything to help the ones we love. Unfortunately, for now, it means she can't see him. And she may never be able to see him again. Btw, thank you for reviewing so much! I appreciate it! I get worried when no one does!
Draco begins to suspect HE is not epilogue compliant.Category: Works in Progress
Ooh, I love the summary. And this is quite a unique twist of plot. Good job and please update soon! Can't wait to find out what's wrong with Ginny.
XOXO, JT
When Ginny Weasley was six years old, she freed a genie from a bottle.Category: Completed Short Stories
Wow! This was so fantastic! I loved the fairy-tale twist, and especially when she was going through thinking of every fairy tale with green in it.
I have to say, I'm really glad that you wrote this. It seems like a lot of my favorite DG prominent authors are slowly starting to write fics again, for which I'm glad. I certainly hope to read more from you in the future
Good job!
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. And I was just as amazed as Ginny by the amount of green there is out there once you start thinking about it, even in fairy tales. I can't guarantee that I'll write anything again soon, but it's certainly not out of the question now that I've gotten writing brain working again. Thanks for the review! :)
My mother told me once that she hated to see birds kept in a cage. She said that birds were not made to be trapped behind bars; they were made to fly.Category: Completed Short Stories
Man, I really really love this. It just...seems right. Draco ultimately snuffs out Ginny's fire because he tries to mold her into something she's not. And, just that end part about the bird in the cage and the empty cage: perfection. Yeah, it's not the happiest DG, but this one kept me thinking for a long time after I'd read it. So, definitely kudos to you because I think you really fulfilled the avant-garde challenge and took a step away from the fluffier DG one-shots (which, I love. Nothing wrong with them at all). But wow, this one was great. Good job, Kim!
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: Thank you. I was really trying to do something different with this, so I'm glad that came through and that you could still enjoy it for what it was. ^_^
When it came to giving up everything, no one would ever believed that Draco would do it. But if it mean choosing between Ginny and his family, well, he could only be pushed so far.Category: Completed Short Stories
Oh, jessica k malfoy, this was positively delightful! It made me feel so giddy and upbeat about...life! Just goes on to show you that if you're willing to work hard for something, there will be benefits. Now, hopefully, Draco will be able to take a break with his parents back on his side. And I really love how he chose Ginny and rationalized it with how she was already used to living without money. *sighs happily* Aboso-bloody-lutely wonderful! Can't wait to read more from you....Especially Vineyard Summer. *coughs* You know, you should probably update that. *coughs some more* And...I still haven't forgotten the really angsty-sad one-shot you wrote for the dgficexchange. I'm not done reading all of them yet, but I'm going to need to go hunt it down. Hopefully, it won't totally counter-affect the sweetness of this story. As long as it's not like Brightside, I think I'll be good.
Okay, enough rambling from moi. Great story!
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: wow, thank you. i'm glad you felt that good!!!! and yes....... i see that COUGH!!! haha. i'm working on it. sort of. okay, no so really much. but i will. my dgficexchange piece isn't like Brightside, but that's all the details i can give you until after the reveal! i need to get back on VS. it's bad when your beta's are asking where it is.... LOL i'll do it. summer is my best writing time.
thanks for the awesome review, my dear!
Sequel to Torn Between Ice and Emeralds (25,000+ reads, 90 reviews, favourited by 37)Category: Works in Progress
Draco has found a place for himself post-Voldemort, but a rise in power has made it plain that the war is far from over. In the process of doing what he can to fight, old prejudices of supremacy and hatred are stirred within him and he finds himself having to make a choice. Meanwhile, when Harry decides to push aside his feelings and move on, Ginny finds herself unreasonably jealous. As Ginny once again forces her heart to choose, will her uncertainty leave her all alone?
Compliant with HBP and below.
It took me awhile to read TBIE, which is why I'm reviewing so late. And then, I read the summary, and I was torn between reading it or not. I don't really want to read a story where Ginny might not want Draco after all, and I felt like TBIE ended in a good place. This chapter was interesting, though, especially the end.
Good job!
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad that posting SC got you reading TBIE! And I'm glad you liked it! It did end in a good place, I agree. But... I have this weakness for love triangles, and I would really like to explore a little more with the start of the H/G/D triangle I started in TBIE. I hope you keep reading as I post, and I don't know how it'll end yet myself, but I don't see Ginny ever not wanting Draco at all... If that helps. :-) I look forward to hearing more from you!
Four years, five months and twenty-three days. Ginny feels the weight of every minute with no regrets because each second has dragged her that much closer to Draco Malfoy.Category: Long and Completed
You know that moment when time stands still and you’re suspended above everything, catching all the angles? And somehow you know this here, this now matters?
Yes.
The description is absolutely lovely in this! I really like the progressing relationship of DG, and how they don't automatically fall in love with each other. Please update soon! I want to know how they eventually get together.
Good job!
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Haha, nope, they definitely don't insta-fall in love. :)
WOW! YOur language is truly beautiful! I'm really glad that Harry wasn't some sort of cheating villain in here. You made the characters believable and real, and the development of the DG relationship was beautiful! Good job! I really hope to see more from you. :)
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: I've always thought that Harry (or Ginny) cheating would be OOC for them unless there were some serious extenuating circumstances involved. I'm so happy you thought they were believable because that was the most important thing for me. Thank you so much!
“I've got a proposition, for you,” Draco started. He took a sip of tea, glancing at her through his eyelashes as she eyed him warily. “And seeing how you took delicious advantage of me in my drunken and vulnerable state last night, I don't think you have any right to say no.” ABANDONED.Category: Works in Progress
Ooh, this is very interesting! I love how Ginny drags Draco away from the bimbos, only to shag him herself. -_- And also, what is this about a plan...perhaps for Draco and Ginny to shag and make Harry Potter jealous? Can't wait to read more. Good job!
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XOXO, JT
Author's Response: Yeah. Ginny didn't think that through, did she? Draco's going to reap the benefits though, so we'll see what she learns from it. ;) Thanks for the review!
Even though I LOVE DG, I hate Astoria! I hate the other woman! I hate Harry! GAHHHHHHHHHHHHH. I guess the good thing is that it frees up Ginny for Draco, who seems to have ulterior motives.....hmmmm. I hope Harry sees Ginny with Draco and absolutely LOSES IT! And then, he'll be really possessive and angry, and Astoria will be so jealous because she thinks that she's "the one" and all. Of course, Ginny will be with Draco and won't want stupid, cheating, slutty Harry. What really makes me angry is that everybody thinks that Ginny cheating on Harry! If there's one thing, please let the world know the truth! I just think that for Harry to get away with this is despicable. I hope somebody knocks him down his peg a little...grrrrr. but fantastic writing! And please don't wait another month to update!
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: So far, it's all in Ginny's head that everyone thinks she was cheating on Harry first. She's just being super paranoid. That's not to say that everyone won't think that eventually. 9_9 I will try very hard not to take another month to update. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far, and thanks for reviewing!