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Malfoy In a Glass, Darkly by Anise    (Reviews - 129)

Many years ago, Draco Malfoy made a choice that led him very far away from Ginny Weasley, and the life that they might have shared. But not only is it hopeless to fight fate, its paths have a strange way of turning when you least expect them to, as a very unexpected person later learns...

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Chapter FOURTEEN Quote of the Day:

“It can’t be worse than going to Romania. James is getting worse by the day. Lily doesn’t care about anything but her broom. And Mum and Dad—“ Albus breaks off.

Ginny. Scorpius can feel his face stiffen, and he has to conjure a coughing fit to cover it. Incredible how simply hearing of her, not even hearing her name, is enough to cause that stab of feeling in him. Just when he thinks that he’s over that sort of thing entirely—

“The point is, I’m so glad I can go with you,” sighs Albus.

Maybe I ought to wish that you couldn’t, thinks Scorpius. For your own good.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 14 | Word count: 74296 | Read count: 11751 | Published: Mar 05, 2011 | Updated: Jan 22, 2013
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Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Mar 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

One more thing: thinking of the dialogue between Draco and Scorius, why can't i shake the feeling that Draco is going to off himself?

Author's Response: Oh no! Okay, just so you're not worrying about that: Draco does NOT kill himself in this fic. But he does worry about his relationship with his son, much more than he usually lets on. He's just so emotionally closed off that he doesn't really know how to begin to bridge that gap.

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Apr 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So Scorpiu tries to be in denial, he? Well, I'm glad that he finally comes to terms with himself and admits that his feelings didn't go anywhere. He definitely seems more mature than Draco was at this age.

Why are men scared to admit they are romantics?

Also how is it that Ginny continues to show up where Scorpius is?

It is sad how Ginny continues to visit places where she was happy with Draco once. And now we know that Draco chose to follow his family demands and expectations over being with Ginny, we already know she would never agree to be his mistress.

One more question - is there a reason why all the girls (except Rose) are under their mothers' last names?

Author's Response: Scorpius is different from Draco in some crucial ways (and certainly different from how Draco was at the same age, although Draco is actually 19 in the vision of the past that Scorpius saw.) And you're right about Ginny-- she couldn't resist visiting a place where she was once so happy meeting Draco, which is why she saw Scorpius there. We'll find out more about where she and Harry were headed in the next chapter. We do see in the vision where the breaking point really was between Draco and Ginny-- he wouldn't give up the family demands (although we don't yet know what those were), and she wouldn't accept the mistress role, which was all he was willing, or able, to offer her.

Actually, there is a reason why so many of the girls have their mothers' last names. It's an old pureblood wizarding tradition, although all of the families don't follow it. The Weasleys obviously don't, and of course Harry wouldn't. I'm not sure if Draco and Astoria would have done it, but they never had a daughter, so it didn't come up.

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Apr 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i wonder what's wrong with Draco. And something is boubd to happen in Budapest, I'm sure. Should we await explosion?
Anyway, I don't have time for a real review but this chapter left me with a lot of questions and pity for scorpius for being every girl's guinea pig.

Author's Response: Huh. Everyone seems to feel sorry for Scorpius... It's weird, because I didn't see his situation that way when I originally wrote it, but now I actually think I do. None of the girls ever really meant to take advantage of him, but that's what they ended up doing. OTOH, Scorp wasn't exactly fighting them off with a stick, either... :P Anyway. Things are going to happen in Budapest, all right, but I don't think they're exactly what anyone expects. More soon! :)

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Apr 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

You know, i kinda wish that Scorpius found himself a nice girl and tried out a real relationship. It's sad that he decided that if not Ginny then nobody and just gets into sexual relationships.

Is Nora in love with him?

Is Draco trying to sabotage Harry's broom business? Also it infuriates me that although he realizes that he failed to build a proper father-son relationship with Scorpius, he does nothing to try fix something of it.

Does James know about Scorpius's obsession with his mother?

And Alec Zabini was a nice drop of honey in the middle of all the sadness.

That was just SOME of the questions and you probably can't answer them too... Oh, well...

Author's Response: I think that Scorpius knows he just can't do it right now, and that he'd only end up hurting any girl who truly wanted a serious relationship. No, Nora isn't in love with him, although there are times when I think she wishes deep down that he was capable of giving her more than he can give. Now, you KNOW I can't tell you about what Draco is doing right now... but no, James doesn't actually know. Scorpius is just feeling very paranoid on that subject. And I love Alec too! He's such a trip. :) More soon.

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Apr 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Various obligations prevented me from reviewing last couple of chapters but I've read them eagerly still! It's funny, each time I see a new chapter of this I hope to finally find some answers, but I mostly get new questions instead (which means that I await each new chapter more impatiently).

I think Scorpius needs a big big hug. He is so lonely in this big mosoleum of a house! His father is so consummed by everything he's trying to repress and deny that he is emotionaly unavailible to his son and his mother seems to be ocupied with her own affairs. No wonder that what's left to him is to dwell on his obsession with Ginny!

Just tell me, will he ever be happy? Because as far as things are right now I don't see any possibility for his happiness with Ginny but who knows what future plot twists will bring.

I'm glad that Scorpius embraces all the parts of his personality as opposed to his father who repressed all those things. It makes Scorpius's personality much healthier.

it's so sad really that Draco and Scorpius are virtually strangers to each other. I kinda dread how much worse it will turn out when Draco learns just who his son is in love with. He's bound to learn at some point I guess, seeing that Scorpius has Ginny's pictures and everything. Draco's even posessive of the jewelery that she touched! I wonder what was the story with that neckless.

Oh, and I liked how you wrote that scene where Draco talks to Scorpius but actually tries to convince himself that his business with Ginny is over.

And I'm finishing my review with even more questions! Like what's the secret with Lily? Why can't Draco divorce Astoria? O.K. I'll stop for now!

I hope you update really soon!

Author's Response: Hi Pitzi! (waves) Oh, I always want to hug Scorpius too... (((lots of virtual hugs))) He has a lot to go through. But, yes. He will eventually find happiness. However, that doesn't really give anything away, because he's the kind of person who will eventually be happy, no matter what. That doesn't say anything about what will-- or won't-- happen along the way with Ginny or anyone else. ;) You've managed to pick out a couple of important questions for sure... yes, there's a secret with Lily, and there's a very important reason why Draco can't divorce Astoria (and vice versa, actually.) But, no answers just yet. Soon, though.... :)

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Dec 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Thank you so much for updating!

I forgot how sad this story is. And it looks like it's getting sadder and sadder.

Scorpius really needs Alec Zabini for a friend. He can give him somehing that Albus can't - an escape and fun.

The way you ended the chapter - I think Scorpius became sick.

And this is all so sad (as I said before) that I think he is going to die. And then perhaps his spirit can enter his father and be with Ginny that way. or perhaps I'm completely nuts.

AND NOW I WILL CHECK EVERY DAY FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER BECAUSE I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT THE HELL IS THE THIRD MALFOY TRAIT!!!!!

Author's Response: Well... I think that MIaG has a lot of sad aspects, especially at this point in the fic, but don't worry about Scorpius being sick. He isn't! It does read that way, though. He's just feeling very off balance right now. He's fine in the morning. :) Scorp does need Alec as his friend, and there are some good developments in the friendship arena in the very next chapter, too. More soon...

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Dec 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

You know, I just noticed that it says D'G offspring in character list. Is it Lily?

And has the 3 Malfoy trait something to do with being able to fall in love only once?

Author's Response: You're always asking those unanswerable questions!!! ;) More soon...

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Dec 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh, I'm glad you posted this chapter summary! It reminded me of several things I forgot!

And this cookie was very teasing!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the summary. :) It just seemed necessary for this fic... and the cookie will eventually turn into an entire batch. ;)

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Dec 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh, and I think perhaps it's better to have Ginny's POV as a separate short story - companion to MIaG, because all of MIaG is from Scorpius' point of view.

I find that I can't wait for when Ginny learns about Scorpius' feelings for her (will she?)

Author's Response: I think it will be a separate companion fic (very short, though.) I *don't* think the entire narrative is going to be retold from her POV. It's going to be about some of the parts that Scorpius was in no position to see. And Ginny will DEFINITELY find out ALL about what Scorpius feels for her... although it won't happen right away. ;) All in good time, my pretties, all in good time... More soon.

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Dec 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Those past two chapters are so melancholic. I want to cry for Scorpius. It's terrible when you can't even share your burdens with anyone. Though I think Alec might know or guess a little bit more about what is happenning to his friend.

I'm so angry with Draco. Your only child asks permittion to go home and you don't even ask what happened? I suppose there will be some dealings going in the manor during the weekend, possibly evolving around Ginny, but the fact the he shows no concern for his son is really creepy. It's like he decided that he is a bad father and his son hates him so he just gave up and doesn't even try to fix his relationship with Scorpius perceiving it as doomed.

I was thinking a little more and decided that Draco's concern over Scorpius liking Lily doesn't nececcarily mean that she is his daughter. It could be the fact that he was afraid that if Scorp and Lily got serious, it would farther sabotage his own chances with Ginny, not to mention the unatractivness of the idea of being related to Harry. Also he might be concerned that Scorpius's life doesn't turn out like his, as Harry would never agree for his child to marry a Malfoy.

Well, never mind my ideas, but I'm so curious how it turnes out.

By the way, I remember Draco commenting on dragon pox in one of the earlier chapters. Is he sick?

Author's Response: I know (about the melancholic part)... I think that might be part of the reason why it took so long to get these posted! But I do think that Scorpius has been pulled out of his depression, both by his friends and his own healing powers. Yep, Draco is not a great dad here. BUT... in the context of the reality of this fic, that's just how he is at this point. This isn't always where he will be, though. We're going to find out a lot more about Lily, and also how her story relates to the lives of everyone else in MIAG-world. I guarantee that the Lily story isn't as simple as it seems! ;) No, Draco doesn't have dragon pox (and neither does anybody else), but we haven't seen the last of it. and remember that I ALWAYS love your ideas! Much more frequent updates from now on.

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Jan 22, 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Thank you so much for updating!!

Oh, the possibilities of what could happen when Scorpius's friends come over to the Manor.... It could all end up in a disaster! Everything could just blow up and then they'll learn of Scorpius's feelings for Ginny, or Ginny herself could suddenly come over (which is not really likely) or, more probably they'll discover some secret stash of Ginny's photographs or some other evidence that Draco still loves her and so on.

Or they could just have a fun relaxing holiday (not going to happen I'm sure).

Now I really wait to know how this holiday turns out and why Draco agreed to have them all at the Manor. Is he trying to be a better father or is it that he prefers not to be alone with Scorpius all the time.?

I'll be waiting to fin out..

Author's Response: You're welcome! :) You really provided the push I needed to post this. I know that people would have liked to see more D/G, but trust me, a LOT is coming up. As for how relaxing it is... you'll find out! ;)

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Jan 22, 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I just had another crazy idea. In one of the chapters, when Scorpius visions Draco and Ginny in Romania and Ginny says that if she leaves with Draco, Harry will have custody over Lily (who is still underage). Maybe Draco is trying to do something to make it impossible for Harry to remain in custody of Lily because he hopes that then Ginny will finally leave Harry.

Author's Response: I love these ideas! Of course, you know I can't tell you if they're wrong or right, but everyone will find out soon.

Of Brothels and Ice Cream by Boogum    (Reviews - 17)

Ron called it the brothel. Dean Thomas called it a good time. Molly and Arthur Weasley preferred not to think about it at all. Such was the response to Ginny Weasley’s latest attempt at playing entrepreneur.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 6538 | Read count: 4273 | Published: Mar 21, 2011 | Updated: Mar 22, 2011
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Date: Mar 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Of Brothels and Ice Cream

This story is so much fun! I really really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Hehe, thank you! I was a little concerned I was never going to get it finished in time for the actual challenge, but I got there in the end. I have to say, it was nice getting a chance to write something light-hearted again.

Ginny Weasley, Hit Wizard by MemoriesFade    (Reviews - 41)

Ginny Weasley was dedicated to her job as a Hit Wizard and nothing else. But when an investigation turns her life upside down, Ginny finds herself analyzing her morality--and having tea with a Malfoy.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 24698 | Read count: 8012 | Published: Apr 15, 2011 | Updated: May 20, 2011
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Date: May 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm writing to tell that there are people,me among them, that really enjoy your story even if we rarely review. I'm really looking forwardto finding out why Draco really is in SM and whathappened to make Marcus feel guilty.
Thank you for your story!

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks. I didn't mean to come off as pushing for reviews, though I do appreciate them. I just depend on reviews to gauge the audience, and no reviews just seemed like a huge cry of, "No one likes this." Yes, Draco is playing his cards close to his chest and being rather secretive but I think everyone is. In any case, all shall be revealed soon. :) Thanks for reviewing!

Ginny's On the Telephone by Anise    (Reviews - 13)

Draco springs Ginny from women's prison, but will she ride in his aqua-blue Cadillac? And why is he using so much Miracle Whip? Watch out for that rat poison, not to mention the nine-inch heels... Utter crackfic (more or less) inspired by the longer video for Lady Gaga/Beyonce's *Telephone*.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Crossover, Horror, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 2996 | Read count: 1023 | Published: Sep 04, 2011 | Updated: Mar 31, 2015
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Date: Sep 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ha,Ha ha!
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA !

On another note - where's the definitely naughty part?

I really needed the laugh though. Thanks.

Luna is hillarious too.

Author's Response: Yes.... the "definitely naughty" part was more to be on the safe side. On second thought, I don't know if it actually needs that rating. But I'm glad it was as much fun to read as it was to write!

Full Fathom Five by Anise    (Reviews - 31)

The war drags on and on, and Ginny and Draco are trapped in a never-ending cycle of passion, betrayal, revenge, and reunion on opposite sides of the battle… until a terrifying chance comes along to change it all.

CHAPTER FIVE quote of the day:

THE LAST CHAPTER

“Oh, no,” moans Ginny.

“Wait a minute,” says Draco. “That’s Lovegood, and she can see us. That means…” His eyes grow cold. “You’re no hallucination, are you?”

“What else do you think I’ve been trying to tell you for the past half hour?” hisses Ginny.

Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Other Characters
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Action, Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 5 | Word count: 22473 | Read count: 8197 | Published: Dec 06, 2011 | Updated: Dec 11, 2011
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Date: Dec 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I remember reading this on the exchange, though I really don't remember how it ends, so it's like i never read it. And you said it's a longer version anyway, so I'll definitely enjoy reading it again.

You never make things easy for those two, do you?
Incredible, intence, angsty!
I'm glad you decided to post this.

Author's Response: I'm in the middle of answering reviews, and yours popped up, so... you'll get a very very fast answer. :) There was a serious length restriction for the exchange (you KNOW how hard that was for me!!!), so even though this is still basically a cookie by Anisefic standards, it's very expanded and there's so much more material. Nope, Draco and Ginny never have an easy time. Except in the short crackfics. :) More soon!

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Dec 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm glad you've expanded it. I'm enjoying this much more then when I read it on the exchange. I remember it had a sence of gaps and unclear things in the plot.

Author's Response: Thanks! I have to agree... there ARE short Anisefics (really!! Everybody can look on the list!!!;), but this one was never really meant to be as short as it needed to be for the exchange. That being said, it's still VERY short for anything set in Aniseworld.

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Dec 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh, wow!

The ending was so romantic!

You know, I never pictured Draco as someone who will be able to give up magic. But reading this I just thought that Draco is a very intense person, he loves and hates with passion and with everything that is in him. In a situation that you created, the only thing that is left in Draco's world that he cares about is Ginny. So yes, it actually is very believable that he is prepared to give up everything even magic if Ginny is by his side.

Author's Response: Thanks! :) I was actually thinking about how this is really a different Draco from the one in DDD. As he says himself at the very end, his development was arrested in many ways at the age of sixteen, and he has incredible unexpressed resentment against the magical world because of the role that he was forced to take with the DE's. DDD's Draco doesn't really have that, and I don't think *that* Draco would be very likely to give up his magic. Also, FFF's Draco has lost Narcissa, and he honestly doesn't have any ties left to the magical world. The only way for him to keep his freedom (and his money and possessions) is to leave that world, and Ginny will be with him. But yes, it takes a lot to get him to do it, and it's going to be harder than he thinks. I hope everyone likes the happy D/G ending! :)

A Lesson in Luxury by witty_fool    (Reviews - 16)

When Ginny loses her last job prospect, she thinks she's doomed to be just another poor Weasley forever, but through a surprising turn of events, she's whisked into a world of elegance and lavishness, and her formerly simple life becomes more complicated than she could have ever imagined.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 3563 | Read count: 2149 | Published: Dec 08, 2011 | Updated: Dec 13, 2011
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Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Dec 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice one! A modeling agensy is so fitting for Blaise
I'm curious to see what's next!

Valley of the Dragons by gidge_8    (Reviews - 21)

Completely AU - The Auror Academy is located in the remote highlands of Scotland, in a valley frequented by the wildest of dragons. Ginny decides to attend, disguising herself as a boy, to follow a dream and a handsome blond Quidditch star.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: Past AU
Genres: Action
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 9194 | Read count: 7854 | Published: Jan 05, 2012 | Updated: Mar 27, 2012
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Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Jan 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Auror Academy

This looks very very promising. I;m intrigued as to how it all will play out. Ginny's got herself in a tight spot and her plan was obviously not thought through.

I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far. :) I seem to do that a lot with Ginny, where she doesn't really think things through. I think that's sort of a Gryffindor trait - to charge in bravely without considering all the facts. LOL. However, in this case, she's based on the Hana Kimi character, who is very much on the clumsy side.

A Fortunate Accident by cherryredxx    (Reviews - 179)

This is the story of what happens when husbands give their wives a hard time.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Other Characters
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 12 | Word count: 29732 | Read count: 20627 | Published: Feb 13, 2012 | Updated: Jun 16, 2012
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Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Apr 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Not Good Enough

I was kinda surprised by how well Harry took the news, but on a second thought it does fit him. Draco's reaction was expected though. I just hope he comes around eventually.

Thanks for the story and looking forwar to see how it all fits into place.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I didn't want Harry to get quite as emotional as Draco for a few reasons, most of which will be explained throughout the final few chapters, so I won't go into too much detail here. But, I will say that Harry is very sympathetic, even though he didn't say too much in the last chapter.

Of Sleepy Redheads and Twirling Moustaches by Boogum    (Reviews - 5)

All Ginny wanted was to get her paperwork finished ... so what does Draco Malfoy's perfectly formed arse have to do with it? Written for the DG Forum's Fall 2011 Fic Exchange.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 6284 | Read count: 2157 | Published: Feb 18, 2012 | Updated: Feb 21, 2012
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Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Feb 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Of Sleepy Redheads and Twirling Moustaches

ha ha! that was absolutely adorable! Love it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. ^_^

The One You Never Knew by SunnyStorms    (Reviews - 60)

Who you are, whom you love, and where your loyalties lie - Ginny Weasley had never thought all of that could change as a result of a single night. Her postponed wedding to Harry Potter in the aftermath of a mysterious Death Eater prison break was supposed to be a mere set back to the life she'd always dreamed of. But driven by anger and pride, she makes a fateful decision that will upend her entire life.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Other Characters
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Blood, Character Death, Graphic Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 11 | Word count: 45511 | Read count: 6840 | Published: Feb 28, 2012 | Updated: Jun 28, 2013
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Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: May 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Broken Things

I'm really enjoying this and you managed to pull off the suspence in this chapter of them running away really well! I held my breath. Looking forward to the next chapter and I hope Draco comes to rescue and they both make it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to comment and I'm so glad to hear the action kept you in suspense. As for how it'll play out, you'll have to read on. ;)

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Nov 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Bad News

Oh, no! I suppose it's Harry arresting him? And now thay will think Ginny is an accomplice.

I still dread the part were Draco learns who se really is.

Author's Response: All will be revealed soon. Sorry to leave you hanging! Alas RL intervened.

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Jun 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: A Devil's Choice

It's a rear thing to find a really good suspence story that keps you at the end of your seat, so kudos to you for a great success!!!

I can't wait to see them finally really free (hopefully) and what will happen when Draco realises whom he had gone through the whole ordeal with.

Author's Response: Glad to hear I'm keeping you in suspense. ;)There's more to come, but sorry that you'll have to wait a little longer though. Thanks for taking the time to comment. I really appreciate being able to hear back from readers.