choravenclaw [Contact]

Real name: Manu
Registered: Aug 18, 2006
Membership status: Member
Beta-reader: Yes

Beta/ beta-reader/ Avid reviewer, always have a coment about everythign i read, not alwayas nice, but try to be constructive!
=)
I love D/G and romance so i like the fics where in the end everything turns out ok for them. Without one or both dying.

Reviews by choravenclaw

Acting on a Moment by Boogum    (Reviews - 111)

Ginny Weasley was on a mission: get Draco Malfoy's attention or die trying. She would prefer to skip the dying part, though…

Acting on a Moment
Awarded Featured Author of June (2011) by The Review Society | Banner by Incognito
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 4 | Word count: 12740 | Read count: 26367 | Published: Oct 30, 2009 | Updated: Nov 09, 2009
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Day That Ginny Weasley Was Hit With A Brick

she would have hit him, and then he would have kissed her.
YEP!
That would be the perfect way to answer his questions!
=P

OOOOHHH
We're gonna end the week with a new chapter of WLAE!!!
=DD
So happy!

kisses

Author's Response: Lol, well, I'll try to get it written before the end of the week. I can't make any promises though.

Look At Me by DeLaLune    (Reviews - 336)

Ginny finally has everything she's ever wanted. The boy of her dreams, top grades, and a way to finally break into the Golden Trio. When perfection turns out to be less than perfect she finds herself seeking solace in another journal. When this journal writes back, she is understandably worried—until she discovers the person writing back is a fellow student. A fellow student who refuses to divulge his identity. Does she want to know who this mystery person is? Or has she already revealed too much of herself?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 13 | Word count: 35569 | Read count: 19563 | Published: Nov 11, 2009 | Updated: Mar 18, 2010
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Blind Eyes Never See

This made me all warm and fuzy inside!
i can't wait to know how they'll react when they find out who the other is!
So excited!!!
Amazing job!
I'm loving it!
=D

kisses

Author's Response: So glad you like it :) You won't be disappointed with the next chapter! Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Truth Hurts

My heart has stopped!!!!
i don't know what made me more excited about this: the fact taht he knows who seh is[he would be stupid if he didn't]
or the fact he still call her love and it's sweet to her even though he knows who she is!!!
I'll hiperventilate before the next chapter!
This was amazing!
I know exactly how she felt when he told her he knows who she is[damn that internet and MSN], and it's a terrible, wonderful feeling that you described very well!
i'm going crazy over here to see thier encounter!
This was the best chapter so far and i just KNOW the next one will be THE most wonderful,´perfect chapter!
he should definately hide or use a hood or sth before she arrives and pushes him away not even letting him talk first!
This is just oo exciting!
Please telll me the next chapter will be out soon!
i can hardly stop myself from smiling from ear to ear!
This was amazing!
I loved it!
Congratulations and thank you so much for porting it!

kisses

Author's Response: Oh my, I'm blushing again. Hehe. Don't think about it too much! You'll ruin the next chapter for yourself, hehe. Thank you so so so so much for reading and reviewing. It makes my day :)

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Use Crying Over Spilled Ink

ok
I'l try to lower my expectations then!
Because i swear they are higher then the ceiling!
;D
But no worries, i'm sure you'll do an amazing job with this!


kisses

Author's Response: <3 Your reviews are fantastic to read, so if they come with high expectations I suppose I can live with it. :)

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Use Crying Over Spilled Ink

Thank you sweetie!
=)
You just got yourself a reviewer!
And Lia(Incognito) is here to prove that when i become someone's reviewer i absolutely mean it!
There won't be a thing you write without my comments following!
^.~

kisses

Author's Response: Well that's pretty exciting :) I may have to write a story about the life of a flobberworm to test this statement :P Just kidding, you're fantastic and I am looking forward to at least ten more reviews! Hopefully plot bunnies will kick in and there will be more after that though! <3 I'm surprised you haven't written anything yourself, I assure you it would be well received!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Use Crying Over Spilled Ink

HEHE
I'm pretty sure i'd have something to say about the life of Flobberworms...although i only like to read fics that are at least definately naughty.
i get kind of bored when there's not even heated kisses and some people tend to get self concious about writing those scnes
but i honestly i dunno why some people don't like to write that, it's the INTERNET! We have anonimacy on our side!
We could write about our very personal matters and have nothing to feel embaressed about!

Anyway...
i don't write, at least nothing further than essays for school or college.
but i do love editing,alterigng and doint all sorts of changes and arrengments to other people's texts and stories!
;D

kisses

Author's Response:

A definitely naughty flobberworm story? Oh my, I'm all hot and bothered already :P

I'm not sure I'd feel embarassed about those scenes, but I am hesitant to post an extremely naughty fic I have sitting on my hard drive. It needs betaing anyways, so that's my excuse :P I think it's more a fear of flames for your own likes or dislikes that makes people self-conscious haha

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Use Crying Over Spilled Ink

KKKKKKKKKKKKK
[if that didn't make sense i'l explain...at least 5 ofthem it's like LOL and this much is simply hilarious!]

POST it already!
You should definately post!
i'd LOVE to read it!
It's D/G,right?
Those two were just meant for sex and love making
just like Kama and Sutra.
=D

I didn1t get this:
a fear of flames for your own likes or dislikes
Please explain so that i can comment!
;)

kisses

Author's Response:

Haha well the fic involves Dom/Sub...sorta. So I'm hesitant to post it because there are people who think that's disgusting and I might lose readers because of it. Haha, silly I know but such is life.

Of course it's D/G! I'm not sure I'm capable of writing anything else! Or that I'd want to, but that's beside the point. 

I will post it once I find a beta just for you <3 

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Use Crying Over Spilled Ink

I honestly like the whole Dom/Sub thing...at least when it'g D/G or CLois.
i think it's because Clark is too sweet and we just KNOW he won't do something extreme and besides Lois is pretty tough.
As to D/G, Ginny can take what Draco gives and when she can't she lets him know or gets back at him...plus he's always in the eminence of getting beat up by her 14 brothers1
=P
So it's acceptable for these 2 couples!
;D

I love having chapters offered to me!
*twinkling eyes*
it makes me feel so especial!
I just looove it!
;D


kisses

Author's Response: Hehe, well your sparkling reviews must be repaid somehow :)

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Use Crying Over Spilled Ink

*blush*
It makes my day to have authors responding to them
And when they "give" me chapters or dedicate them to me i just smile fro ear to ear for almost the whole week!
;D

kisses

Author's Response: Hehe, then I will do my best to find a beta quickly. Who wouldn't love to make you smile?

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Use Crying Over Spilled Ink

*blush*
=D
You're sweet!
Thank you so much
i'll keep my eyes open to know the moment the next chaptr or fic is up!
;D

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Midnight Rendezvous

I'll do it
I'll do it!
ME
Pick ME!
PLEASE!!!
PWESEE pretty pwese!
=P
Really, i wanna do it!
i'd just looooove to read it before!
It's soo exciting!

=DDD

now to the riview...

I knew he would use the hood!
=P
hehe
i loved that he was so sweet to her!
he was marvelous!
He called her love even after they met!
And she went ning back to talk to him1
This was so perfect!
I feel like a pre-teen going on her first date and running back home to talk to the guy on the MSN
This was simply wonderful!
i loved it!
Gonna tell my little sis to read it right now!
You did wonderful!

plse send the other update soon!
Oh and i totally meant it about those paragraph.
;D

kisses

Author's Response:

Oh your reviews remind me of the glittery things that make me squee when I receive them :) You're always so wonderfully excited, hehe.

I am so hesitant to choose anyone to beta, you, Incognito, and EclecticJello, all seem to want the position very badly. I don't want to disappoint anyone by choosing :( 

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Use Crying Over Spilled Ink

=D
i'm always excited about reviewing such wonderful stories!
well, i wouldn't dare butt out of a contest but Lia (incognito) is my idol!
So if you'd like my oppinion(and i'd like to be credited for this one)you should definately pick her!
There!
it's a winner!
2(me and Lia) against 1!
;P
Although whenever you're swamped i'd love to help to hurry things up!
;D

kisses

Author's Response: You're amazing. Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Use Crying Over Spilled Ink

*blushs*
You're most welcome
And i absolutely mean it!

i'm thinking about starting a support group for fic's authors
;)
I could help whenever they need even if it's just a life crisis or just wanna talk about anything...
Anyway, i'm here for you!
;D


kisses

Author's Response: You are just the best reader ever <3

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Use Crying Over Spilled Ink

*blush*
You make me feel awesome!
=D
Tank you so much!
You're really really gereat!
;)

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Finding Your Feet

Draco smirked. “Just because there’s a keeper does not mean you can’t score.”

rsrs...
loved this!
The shocks were so tue
being in love with a friend i have sooo much experience with, especially when he's such a confidant...
poor Gin
And then that horible girl comes and ruins their moment
I know soooo much how that feels(damn cellphones)

“You’re not a very nice boyfriend, are you?” she asked with a grin on her face.

“I’m not her boyfriend.”

Ginny felt the familiar fluttering in her stomach. “But you had sex with her?”

“Dating is not our generation's strong point. We're an era that's good at getting laid.”

Ginny stared at him in shock before giggling lightly. “I don’t think I’d ever sleep with a boy I wasn’t at least dating.”

“That’s because you’re more of a lady than anyone gives you credit for,” he said absently as he looked over her work.

She blushed the infamous Weasley red before turning her attention back to her Arithmancy.
i swear i had this conversation at least 3 or 4 times...
Man are so clueless



This has to be the chapter, actually the fic, where i have identified myself the most with Ginny!
Great work Meg!
;)
And Lia!
Amazing Beta!
Never seen one so fast!
I do love you girl!
;D


kisses

Author's Response: Oh my, my favorite lines of the entire chapter :D I'm glad you identify! I was really trying to get away from Mary-Sue Ginny and make her real, and you reviews let me know I did just that. :) The best part of this review was the part for Lia, of course. She is indeed the bestest. <333

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Use Crying Over Spilled Ink

no Mary Sue be sure of that!
And if Ginny is to get either akind of:
"let's still be friends" rejection
"We just can't work out" rejection
"I guess i never knew you saw me taht way" response
Or a "completely lust over and love you too" response
I'll be sure to let you know f you got it right
Yes, i've been through all of them
I assure you my friends are just as wonderful and hot as Draco and that's why thes lines have crossed our paths!
;)

Yes, Lia is the bestest!
That's why i didn't even want to run against her!
She completely deseves!
;D

kisses

Author's Response: Looking forward to it :) Though I won't reveal how long it will be until we see this. hehe

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Use Crying Over Spilled Ink

You're becoming evil!
You've been spending far too much time around Lia!
SHe's a cruel little witch!
[by the way, have you seen her? She looks like a Ginny i read once]

I can't wait to see what's going to happen and how their relationship is going to change...and what will it change into?

hmm..
questions questions questions
Oh my!
The plot is becoming even more interisting!
xD

kisses

Author's Response: Haha, <3 no I haven't seen her. A woman once asked my friend and I for a picture once though, she swore I looked just like her Ginny and he was her Harry. Bad part was that she made us hug for the pic, I almost gagged :( Do you have a facebook or myspace? :D

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Use Crying Over Spilled Ink

now i wanna see that pic
i mean, i'm a Draco lover through and through
but harry is nice too!
look me up on facebook: Emanuelle Meireles Linhares on myspace i think it's /manuxinhace but i haven't used it in forever
;)

kisses

Author's Response:

Added, I'm the redhead :P hopefully I picked the right profile, but it was the only one with a picture, so :P

I never actually received that picture, which is okay with me:P but I suppose you'll have to live without it, hehe. 

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Use Crying Over Spilled Ink

Oh you did pick th right one!
=D
Pity you don't have the pic, i'd love to see!
Is that your natural hair color?
It's beautiful!!!
=D

kisses

Author's Response: It is :) Thank you. You remind me of a more attractive Romilda Vane! Well...as I pictured her at least :) I love it. I saw your pic and I went OMG! Just like that :P

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Use Crying Over Spilled Ink

*blush*
thank you!
;)

kisses

Author's Response: Hehe, I was worried you wouldn't like that :P Some people hate Romilda!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Use Crying Over Spilled Ink

I'm not really a fan
but i kinda like Romilda from the fics
besides, you meant it as a compliment
PLUS, i was looking kinda pudgy on that picture
I'll make sure to post new ones on my facebook, i just went back to using it now so i'll add more recent pictures
;D

By the way, me, my sister and my aunt are completely in love with your hair!

kisses

Author's Response:

Haha thank you! It's very versatile, some days its red, others its orange, others its almost blonde. :P

Of course I meant it as a compliment :) I personally like Romilda either way, she's a great character :)

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Use Crying Over Spilled Ink

My hair is kinda like that, only i don't exactly call it VERSATILE!
I called it laundry water color
;P
Somedays is more to blonde, others is kinda brown, sometimes red, mostly it's this almond color
Plus it gets curly,curvy, straight or Gisele Büdchen[by the way, her hair is just as course as anyone else, so that made me feel loads better about my bad hair days ^.~]

i like Romilda too, especially in fic world!
I'll post my new pics later tonight[in about half an hour]

kisses

Author's Response: Yay :) I put up pics of my friend Aaron, who was my Harry Potter for that picture, for you to look and laugh at :P

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Use Crying Over Spilled Ink

I loved the picture!
it looks like COlin and Ginny!
Loved it loved it loved it!
=DDD

kisses

Author's Response: Omg, your comments made me laugh. I've never thought of my bf as looking like Colin, but I spose it's there now that I think of it. He is perhaps to tall, but no matter :P

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Use Crying Over Spilled Ink

He does seem tall!
he has a big structure!
Can i please add your picture link to the FIA profile so everyone knows Draco and Gin's love child?
*adoring eyes*

kisses

Author's Response: Um idk what profile you are talking of, but feel free :)

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Use Crying Over Spilled Ink

IDK?
o.O
Dunno what that is!
But i'm already spreading the rumor that i know D/G's child!
;D

kisses

Author's Response: idk means I don't know :P haha where are you spreading this? Not that I mind, just curious! :)