Yay Pike! *cough* Anyways, that was terribly amuzing.

Author's Response: Pike! Pike? yes! thanks for reviewing.

Interesting, I'm not sure whether or not I like it, but it's interesting.

Author's Response: I\'m glad, I suppose, that it\'s interesting? If you decide what you think of it, I\'d love to hear your feedback!

I think that is what we call an "Oh, fuck!" moment.

Author's Response: Haha, yeah :) Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!

Well I really think that depends on what you mean by sledding. In anycase, can I have a tall blonde? Please?

Well written, as is to be expected from you, I love that you're writing in first person, that's my favorite style.

Author's Response: Hahahaha! Point taken, braidedsilver! I\'m glad that you are enjoying the first person-- it\'s actually my favorite style to write, so that works out perfectly for us, doesn\'t it? :D Thank you very much for reading!

She honestly expected him to figure it out so soon? Doesn't she know that even the cleverest of men is thick as hell? Ver well written once again, and yes it is slightly different, though that's not a bad thing.

What was their wager again? I totally don't remember. Anyways this was fantastic as usual and as usual I cannot wait for more.

Author's Response: Oh it was a small little tidbit from the chapter where Draco throws Ginny in the snowbank...I'm sure it would've made more sense had I updated sooner...*flush*. Thanks so much for your comments!

Hmmmm I wish you mentioned exactly why Draco left, maybe gave more details to that entire situation, but it was still a good story, I can't imagine Ginny as fat, just a bit plump. I can however imagine her insisting the engagement not be announced until she's lost weight.

Author's Response: This is the third part to a trilogy of one shots. The first and second stories (Tears and Forgiveness) definitely say why Draco left. And I can definitely see Ginny insisting that too. ;)

Author's Response: Sorry, I meant Tears and Mistakes as the first two stories to the trilogy.

I think that this is very well written. The story line is actually new to me and in gneral your writing is very eloquent. I think if I weren't so sleepy I probably would have wanted to cry but as it is I can only yawn and tell you how good it is.

Your writing is good though it seems to be lacking. There's no plot set up, you just dive right in, I'm not sure I approve of the original characters and I think the characterization of Blaise and Draco are a bit off, though your description of Blaise is perfect. I don't think Draco is one to pout though I do beleive he'd have sneered.

Author's Response: I appreciate you taking the time to give me concrit. All I can say about the plot is, it unfolds as the story goes on, by having a back story it would all become lengthy and redundant. It seems my OC\'s have two categories -- love them and hate them. Although Sage Weasley is not an OC he is a canon Weasley brother, we just don\'t know what his name is (hence Sage) or anything else about him for that matter. We don\'t see Draco interact with his friends all that much in a relaxed setting, so there is no way of knowing if he pouts or not. He is a spoilt rich kid who is finally growing up, in light of that, I\'m trying to keep him from sneering too much.

Ack! They have unexplained history! *dies*
Over all very well written. I really liked it. All it needs is a prequal.

Author's Response: Oh, yes, they have history. Much of it. Downfall, is infact, the (much earlier) prequel.

*blinks*...sugar high much?

Awwwww...*wipes eyes*

Author's Response: *hands you a tissue* Don\'t cry! It\'s a happy ending!